Guest JoshIcy Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 lol thanks for breaking it down.... i wasnt too concerned for the name, and the picture wasnt anything special so i didnt modify it... as for the effect, i havent seen ANYTHING like it, ever.... so i had to work from scratch.. sorry if it was a bad spelling/ ocg.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 Um' date=' well, interesting Gphaku, but, um, maybe go into a bit more detail with your reviews?[/quote'] Will do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHINI [THE CHAOS] Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 Well' date=' I have decided to try to review a card, seeing as nobody has taken this over yet >_> Ancient Gear Berserker by Card Maker Shinigami[img']http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii281/Yugiohpics/createcard-3php-2.jpg[/img] Ah yes, another card by Shini. This is gonna be good ^_^Now, this card was made for a contest, and I think it was put together very well, it just needs some fixes here and there. Lets get to this, shall we? Well, this cards effect starts out with a bang. Right away you know it does peircing damage. Congrats. Here is somthing you may not like, it's a 1500 ATk peircing daage guy, but he needs a sac, so, meh....WAIT!There is more!The next part says that when it attacks, your opponent can't actiavte spells and traps untill after the damage step. Just looking at that, it's overpowerd....WAIT Again!There is even more!When it does kill a monster, it gets 200 more ATK, making it even more powerfull, and adding to it's overpowerdness....You know what, don't leave, you listen or die!Next, it's last part. It mast attack every turn if possible, so, that leaves it VERY vanurable to sakuretsu and other stuff like that, BUT IT'S NOT AFFECTED BY SPELLS AND TRAPS! >_> My probelms with it:You tried really hard to make it balanced, you made it have to attack, and have it start with 1500, butseriosly, it's effect is just too strong, it gains 200, and has peircing damage, AND your opponent can't activate traps and stuff? WTF? Ratings:Name: 7/10 Seems cool, and it fits, but idk, can be a little better.Pic: 8/10 I like it.Effect: 2/10 Good try on the balance, but it is just too strong man, at least to me.Grammar/OCG: 10/10 I don't see a problem ^_^Overall: 27/40 or 6.75/10Grade: D+ To me, this card would be: SEMI-LIITED Good card Shini, but it just seems strong man. Still good though, the rest of the card save it, good job ^_^ BTW, sorry if i'm more harsh than usuall, just been a tough time....bear with me Cool. :D Maybe next time I should focus on effect than pic.... And you only gave the pic 8/10 so...... yeah lolz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 Well, actually, I have gotten alot tougher on my rates now, kind of like bhim, so, 8/10 on a pic is realy good. Good card man, just work a little on the effect XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 Well' date=' I have decided to try to review a card, seeing as nobody has taken this over yet >_> Ancient Gear Berserker by Card Maker Shinigami[img']http://i267.photobucket.com/albums/ii281/Yugiohpics/createcard-3php-2.jpg[/img] Ah yes, another card by Shini. This is gonna be good ^_^Now, this card was made for a contest, and I think it was put together very well, it just needs some fixes here and there. Lets get to this, shall we? Well, this cards effect starts out with a bang. Right away you know it does peircing damage. Congrats. Here is somthing you may not like, it's a 1500 ATk peircing daage guy, but he needs a sac, so, meh....WAIT!There is more!The next part says that when it attacks, your opponent can't actiavte spells and traps untill after the damage step. Just looking at that, it's overpowerd....WAIT Again!There is even more!When it does kill a monster, it gets 200 more ATK, making it even more powerfull, and adding to it's overpowerdness....You know what, don't leave, you listen or die!Next, it's last part. It mast attack every turn if possible, so, that leaves it VERY vanurable to sakuretsu and other stuff like that, BUT IT'S NOT AFFECTED BY SPELLS AND TRAPS! >_> My probelms with it:You tried really hard to make it balanced, you made it have to attack, and have it start with 1500, butseriosly, it's effect is just too strong, it gains 200, and has peircing damage, AND your opponent can't activate traps and stuff? WTF? Ratings:Name: 7/10 Seems cool, and it fits, but idk, can be a little better.Pic: 8/10 I like it.Effect: 2/10 Good try on the balance, but it is just too strong man, at least to me.Grammar/OCG: 10/10 I don't see a problem ^_^Overall: 27/40 or 6.75/10Grade: D+ To me, this card would be: SEMI-LIITED Good card Shini, but it just seems strong man. Still good though, the rest of the card save it, good job ^_^ BTW, sorry if i'm more harsh than usuall, just been a tough time....bear with me Don't forget that it can searched with Giant Rat And this is just my opinion, but I think it shouldn't share the piercing effect of the Golem; I think that only the Golem should get this effect since any Ancient Gear shares 2 effects with another Ancient Gear (Gadjiltron Dragon requires Green Gadget for the piercing effect). Anyways, can you rate this card, Yankeefan? I submitted it in at bhim's thread: (I do not own the artwork in this card. The creator and owner of this artwork is unknown by me, but can be found at Deviantart.com) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 Um, i'll review it later, i'm too tired now, been up 29 hours 0_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 29 hours? O_OOk, no problem; I can wait. Try to get some sleep. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 k, thanks, i'll go to sleep in an hour, I wanna see if anything is gonna happen with the mod thing XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Herr Kanin Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 Sorry on disturbing, but could you review one of these cards (whichever you like the most)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barsam Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 Can you review this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=30033Can you rewiev one of these cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 Wow, people are posting again, so, yay, i'll get to reviewing soon ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex Kemper Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 I got a card I would like for you to review: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Emm, for your card, you dont need, cant be destroyed by Battle, becouse of your last effect. Also 12 stars is only for gods. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex Kemper Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Actually, most of the god-like cards only have 10 stars. But I just realized there is a line missing from the card that makes it to where it needs the ability to not be destroyed in battle, but alas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Well, I can tell you know that I see some OCG and grammar problems....Please try to fix those. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 lol, i am actually gonna ask.... can you do one of your famous full scale reviews on the card in the following link?http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=30104 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 Um, idk how I would, but i'll look 0_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 Hey, Yankee...! :3 It's been a while. Could you please review my newest single? Whenever you can get to it is fine. Thanks. [align=center]Madam Mantis Card Lore:"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. When an Insect-Type monster you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by battle, by discarding 2 Insect-Type monsters from your hand, you can Special Summon this card from your hand to your side of the field. If this card is Special Summoned this way, its original ATK and DEF become 2500, and it gains the following effect: As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, all face-up Insect-Type monsters on your side of the field are unaffected by the effects of Spell Cards controlled by your opponent."[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 Interesting card, i'll see what I can do ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 you look at his yet not mine... aww... ooh well, my effects are hard to rate anyway :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 yeah, idk how I would rate yours, it's like, "0_O" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 -.- thats the punishment for creating effects that no one can understand or at least have something else to base off of..... but thats for at least considering lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 No, I undrstand it, you know I understand these things, but I don't know how I would trype a review everybody ca easily understand 0_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 ooh... i get the wrong impression when people rate them :/ but thanks for putting it like that and ruining my fun..... time to make more ~snickers~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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