The New Afterlife [22/40] [(HAND DRAWN)]

[Knightoth]

ok ok it was a sujesjon (spelt wrong) I get A's on all my art projects so i thought i could help

[TrickyPooBoy]

Well this is not a school project.

[TrickyPooBoy]

What does it take for people to friggin COMMENT?!?!?!

 

Oh and bump.

[Adogadog8]

I like these, only even though they mesh well, i feel that they could have some more badasss effects

9.2/10

[Dark Lightning]

Pictures are strange, but not too bad.

 

I like these cards ^^

[TrickyPooBoy]

Thanks! But too hard effects would make them overpowered...

[Brendano Harns]

The new lord of the afterlife has an awesome pic. ;)

 

With the card, there are a few things I would like to point out.

 

1.) A monsters' maximum level is 12.

2.) I think it would look better as a regular effect monster.

3.) It still looks like you're trying to model your ace after Defragmighte.

[TrickyPooBoy]

1.) I didn't know that, proof plz

2.) Card has been recolored

3.) No. Defragmighte has a more complex effect, and besides tootna (unfortunate initials, I know) is the Lord of something; Defragmighte isn't.

 

I'm redrawing all card pics. The pics WILL LOOK at least 50% better and darker.

[Brendano Harns]

1.) I will find it. For starters, though, that's all that fits on the card.

 

2.) No. Change back pl0x.

 

3.) While the pic has few similarities to DD, there are tons of similarities between the actual cards.

 

-4500 ATK

-12-star

-Comes with an extra cost for summoning (like old DD)

-ATK is decreased if extra cost is not paid (like old DD)

-Affects the effects of Spell/Trap Cards

 

I know they are very small things, but they do have a tendency to pile up.

[TrickyPooBoy]

1: OK.

 

2. The holo sucks I know, but can I keep the card recolored?

 

3. MAYBE a little true...

 

-DD is a bit overpowered anyway and doesn't have any negative part to its effect.

- Actually 16 star in Synchro Deck.

-I didn't know DD made you lose LP at all, or the old version.

-As a matter of fact, I never really saw the old DD.

-Tootna prevents all spell and trap cards, unlike DD whose effect is somewhat overpowered and only prevents opponent's spell and traps.

 

May I ask you to let me a little liberty on my deck? You probably think I'm arguing a whole lot, but the truth is is that I'm lazy fixing my cards and would much rather make a new card instead. Also, I have little problems with my attitude and I easily get offended in a fight, so if I seem mean and stubborn I'm sorry.

[Brendano Harns]

2.) I don't care if you keep the holo, as long as you put the original up there with the holo/recolor.

 

3.)

 

-No, it has and has always had drawbacks.

-Maybe.

-I'm not saying you did it on purpose, I' saying you might have done it semi-consciously/accidently/by coincidence.

-Mkay.

-I'm saying it's similar, not exact.

 

All of the things I pointed out...if there were just 2 or 3 of them then I would have said anything, but it's all of those things that made me kind of...I dunno. Not saying your copying, just pointing out for its own sake.

[TrickyPooBoy]

2.) Great.

 

3.)

 

-Like what...?

-Proof still needed...

-I did NOT do it on purpose.

-

-It certainly isn't exact, because I didn't mean to offend you by the coincidence.

 

Added Fires from above and below.

[Brendano Harns]

*snaps fingers*

 

Doncha make me break out my mai card on ur thread.

 

Look it up.

 

 

Like I said, I didn't mean anything by it really, just pointing it out for its own sake...

 

EDIT: The Underbed should really be a LV 3 or 4 card, due to the fact that it get 1600 ATK regardless...

[TrickyPooBoy]

For petes sake -_-

 

I'll look up yer dd. Last I checked it didn't.

 

Looked up: Ok. Destroys all facedowns. But still, I think DD is a bit overpowered and have an actual CATCH to summoning it. But still, I give it a 9.5/10 for effort.

 

Owait, this is my thread.

[Brendano Harns]

*facepalm*

 

I didn't say it wasn't OP'ed.

 

Arceus, you really have a way of leading a thread off-topic, don't you. X_X

[TrickyPooBoy]

It's mah special gift :D

 

How do you like my redrawn Bonefire, Shakespear and Spare Parts?

[Brendano Harns]

Those are a lot better. Bonefire is definitely my favorite pic nao. ^_^

 

Spare Parts was the only one I was a little dissapointed with. I was hoping for some more solid arms there. =\

[TrickyPooBoy]

Yea, LQ on SParts.

[TrickyPooBoy]

bumpage

[Sleepy]

Sorry for commenting on this after 2 or 3 weeks ^-^" I hadn't logged in all this time. Well, to the review now..

 

Your fusion seems a little overpowered, you do not need polymerization, but you do not have a specific way to bring it out like with Neos Fusions. Looks like you could throw a bunch of LIGHT fiends to the Grave from your hand AND field in any combination and get this card that will negate your opponent's Spell and Traps. Not only that but you could use it with 3 monsters from your hand in the first turn, Tribute it for a Tribute Summon, Special Summoning the Fusion Materials instantly, and then Re-born it somehow. Summoning a bunch of high level monsters in just one turn and locking your opponent's Spell and Traps.. I personally think it needs a little work on those details :)

 

-Your Twisted Warrior card is a better Decoy Dragon, I like it. I only have 1 question. I see how it is Special Summoned but, can you also Normal Summon it? there isn't anywhere saying it can't, although it a lot more abuse if you remove the mosnters. I think being able to be Special Summoned from the Grave by its own effect is pushing it a little, but I'm not really sure.

 

-Bone and Arrow is not only a 1 attack bloker every turn, but you could just take the attacks and Special Summon it at the end of your opponent's Battle Phase to have them either waste destruction effects on it, or you'll get a free Tribute for anything, with no restrictions. You could even get 3 copies of it back. I feel like its a little overpowered. Maybe something like "by removing 1 LIGHT Fiend-Type monster in your Graveyard from play" or paying 800 Life Points. Or something.

 

-Undead Amplyfier is plain awesome, good work ;D

 

-Fires from above also needs a little help. Foolish Burial, a card that only "sends 1 monster from your Deck to the Graveyard" and does nothing else and its not quick play, its limited because its too useful. This card sends any monsters you might want in the Graveyard really fast and kills something for doing it. I suggest something like sending LIGHT Fiend-Types or something along the lines.

 

-Your equip spell, either make it something bigger like 1500 ATK, or add something else to the effect. It is acceptable as it is right now but it would be awesome to give it something a little more powerful.

 

-My Twisted Body as a Shield. *likes the name*

I think removing only 1 per attack is good enough. If your Deck is fast enought to constantly negate attacks almost infinetely, then its overpowered. but I don't think its the case. take for example Insect Neglect. That's sort of like this card.

 

 

 

 

 

I like this set. It looks a lot more balanced than the previews one, and it looks like fun. You improved much. I don't think they only work with themselves. There's Reshief the Dark Being, and some of them work with ANY monsters. Also, you have Honest on your side here. And Bekoning the Light.

Awesome.

[TrickyPooBoy]

Thank you slippy! I mean sleepy, I misspelled it. xD

 

Please comment on my "Some Like it Red Hot" Deck instead, this was a rough draft.

[Sleepy]

ok ^-^

I hope I can today, I've been absent for a while and well, I'm still reading 15 pages of comments at the ALD.

[TrickyPooBoy]

.___."

 

Why do you have to do that? Hardly any are about you, if any. xp

[Sleepy]

But I still have the habit of trying to see what I've missed ^-^"

anyways, I just finished xD

i'll look for your other thread now.

[TrickyPooBoy]

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-203509.html