DeathSDelano Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 ok fix'd 1st Evo uses 5 Spheres and so does the 2nd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackstone Dresden Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Did no one notice that the RP thread is up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Umm... no XD.. so how do we start off in the RP? (don't want to screw up on 1st post) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Digimon Apps:Name:CradomonLevel:Adapt-1Gender:MAppearance:[spoiler=Cradomon] Digivolves from:Corrupt KotemonMade from the Shperes of Strenght,Speed,knowledge,Fire,and DarknessPartner:TakuraPersonality:Filled with Hatred and Dispare only responds to orders by Takura Name:WofomonLevel:Adapt-1Gender:MAppearance:[spoiler=Wofomon] Digivolves from:Corrupt KotemonMade from Spheres of Speed,Water,Physcic,Strenght,and DarknessPartner:TakuraPersonality:Filled with Greed and Coruage only responds to orders by Takura Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackstone Dresden Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 OK, now, redo your Spheres and add them to the app Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 edited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Who me or axel? i already made it 1 Physcial Sphere and 4 Other Spheres on my app...and i also kicked off the RP i hope it was started off well... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 he ment me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 add'd Adapt-2 to my app for bladramon and armadramon their Adapt-2 Forms are under the Adapt-1 Form that come from if i did something wrong please let me know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackstone Dresden Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Axel: Change your Spheres so you have Physical, Elemental, and Special Spheres Delano: NO! Read the RP forum rules and edit your post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Which 1? i don't see anything in the rules about Adapt-2s and i edited the spheres so i only have 1 physical sphere and 4 other spheres...so what am i doing wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackstone Dresden Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 ...Strike 1 for not following Rule 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 What are the advance rules and where are they? seriously i have no clue here -.-. i have not done any Rping on this site so the heck if i know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackstone Dresden Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Delete your post on the official RP, read the contents of the link below COMPLETELY, and redo your intro post http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-201937.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 it says 100 word minial(is this the problem...)if thats not it than whats wrong with? seriously i broke it up to make it easier to read which i am also accustomed to doing and used quotes to talk and i use * and - for actions(thats how i'm use to RPin on Forum Rpin sites) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackstone Dresden Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Only break it into sections when switching between characters, and NEVER EVER EVER use dashes or asterisks to display actions. You may also want to color code your characters, but that's only a suggestion. For example: Marcus looked around his new surroundings and up at the sky, getting a mild headache trying to think about how he actually arrived in this strange new world, standing next to a talking white dinosaur. Auch, mein Gott, wo bin ich? he thought in his native tongue, "Guten Tag, mein Freund... oder meine Freundin? Sprichst du Deutsch?" He shook his head when he realized what he was doing, obviously the dinosaur wouldn't speak German. Dinosaurs can't speak at all. "Huh?" The strange creature asked, "FakeAngemon, my partner's broken!" He waved his clawed hands at a cardboard clad angel standing overhead, "He's speaking nonsense!!!" "Oh, I see." Marcus said, nodding, "So, German is nonsense, but for some reason, you speak perfect English, OK then, mein Freund, what's your name? And, as a corollary, what are you?" "My name is SnowAgumon." The white dinosaur said, "I'm a Digimon, short for Digital Monster, because, really, isn't everything digital abbreviated in some way, shape, or form?" "Ja, that is true." Marcus said, nodding along, "So, why am I, or should I say are we, here?" He asked, gesturing to the others behind him. "Well, once everyone gets acquainted with their partners, FakeAngemon, the LARPer over there, will explain everything." See what I did? Everything's a full sentence, and the only divisions are when I switch from Marcus to SnowAgumon. And yes, that is a canon post so I'll add it to the RP in a moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TheFinalFan Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Posted on the main thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackstone Dresden Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Post on FoW too, and if Ace wants to join, you two should PM me (or he should PM us/you should PM me and him) and we can work out what his part will be Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 ok will if someone would have done that earlier i would know -.-. and i use full sentences and whats wrong with using - n * i always found it easier to tell whats what and also found the break apart easy to and i did break between each character Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackstone Dresden Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 If you use asterisks and hyphens to denote actions, the thread will be locked and you'll be given a 20% warning (I believe it's only 20, don't quote me on this) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 that made no since at all but w/e and is the post better now -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackstone Dresden Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Make sure to capitalize the beginning of your sentences, your characters' names, etc. and try to avoid two word sentences. So, instead of saying "Dracomon sighs." try something like, "Frustrated with his partner's total cluelessness, the Adapt Level Digmon let out a frustrated sigh and tried to reign in the urge to backhand the human across the face, which he did, albeit with a conscious effort." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 ....is there something wrong with a simple sigh -.- i mean its sigh nothing esle In respond to your OOCChanged my posting style happy now -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackstone Dresden Posted June 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 I'm just trying to help you out and make you a better RPer. But yes, you're doing a lot better. Just read my and TFF's posts and try to see what we're doing and match that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axel Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 ok drensden ill change emEDITED THEM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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