Puppet Masters

[Dark Armor]

 

Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 1 "The Blue Puppet Master" and 1 level 5 or higher Spellcaster-Type monster you control. Once per turn, send 1 Spellcaster-Type monster from your hand to the Graveyard to take control of 1 face-up monster your opponent controls until the End Phase. Once per turn send 1 Spellcaster-type monster from your hand to the garveyard to take control of 1 face-up Monster on your opponents side of the field till the end of the turn.

 

 

hope not to OP'ed and effect is cool.

[Prince of Tennis]

Well they're definitely not OP'd IMO, but your "Blue Puppet Master"s OCG is horrid.

 

I'm not sure but I think it should be something like this:

 

"Once per turn, you can send this card from your hand to your Graveyard, to take control of 1 Face-up Level 4 or lower monster on your Opponent's side of the Field"

 

Once again, I'm not very good at OCG, but I'm pretty sure that is a little closer to perfection

 

Rate: Effects are un-creative, pics are good, 7/10

[Deustodo]

First correct OCG:

 

1st card:

"Once per turn, discard 1 card to take control of 1 Level 4 or lower monster your opponent controls until the End Phase."

 

2nd card:

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 1 "The Blue Puppet Master" and 1 level 5 or higher Spellcaster-Type monster you control. Once per turn, send 1 Spellcaster-Type monster from your hand to the Graveyard to take control of 1 face-up monster your opponent controls until the End Phase."

The first one is balanced, the second is a bit too powerful, since it can take control over cards stronger than him. 7/10

[Marco Polo]

I agree with the guys above except for them not being overpowered.

man! it's like recycling Mind Control over and over until a monster is destroyed.

and Brain Control is limited so these, even if you try to balance it even a bit it still would get banned.. (yeah, I know it's not a real card, I just gave an example)

I liked the art and the names just the effects are overpowered.

I think they should be fiends and not spellcasters but that's up to you.

8/10

[Dark Armor]

Ok fixed OCG.