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I'm a sucker for new Pokemon though. I always like whatever game is most up to date so I have access to even more options. Although I wish they didn't drop a lot of stuff from HG/SS. Besides obviously pokedex count, HG/SS were probably the most content filled in so many different ways. Yet again I'm sucker for things that are new, and I have a bunch of new Pokemon to learn and enjoy =P

Here I'll post my most recent splices:

[IMG]http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r15/Profit_Jappio/SpliceSheet58.png[/IMG]
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Here are some over-worlds I'm working on for a friend's RPGmaker game. Although I suppose that isn't all too important.

The little fox boy is a character of my friend, Red Ryu. The big guy is of course my usual Raizou guy.

The sprites are based/styled after some of the generic sprites from RPG maker.

[img]http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r15/Profit_Jappio/ryuandraizou.png?t=1303266724[/img]
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yugiohbakuganpokemon, just a little warning. When you sharing your work in some way, the rules say you have to comment on something someone else had posted. I know I didn't do that myself, but I've done enough that a have a few freebies, and the only stuff that was posted before mine are a couple months old =P

Did you want to make a custom background and such? Because it is possible to get the actual in game ones.

The Eevee+Pikachu you have there has some lines overlapping it.

The circles you made slow don't looking right. I'm guessing you in some way you stretched the stuff. You never stretch stuff in paint. The pixels will shape themselves weird and widen in the wrong places. You also have the circle around the brown, but you also have some of the background green coming through.

So overall your shapes are sloppy.

The bacground is also very plain and doesn't transition smoothly enough.
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[quote name='Jappio' timestamp='1303267617' post='5153286']
Here are some over-worlds I'm working on for a friend's RPGmaker game. Although I suppose that isn't all too important.

The little fox boy is a character of my friend, Red Ryu. The big guy is of course my usual Raizou guy.

The sprites are based/styled after some of the generic sprites from RPG maker.

[img]http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r15/Profit_Jappio/ryuandraizou.png?t=1303266724[/img]
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The forward facing Ryu is'nt showing enough of his eyes. Decent good sprites.

It just hit me that I can't make serious sprites anymore.
[IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/op7czp.png[/IMG][IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/34t1jrr.jpg[/IMG]
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[quote name='-:=Brandon=:-' timestamp='1291236458' post='4822802']
Well mah friends. I haz now crafted a geodude ghost form... [img]http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/9831/geodudeghostform.png[/img]
I would give C&C to people but I already have.
[/quote]It looks like you just recolored it a bit and added an aura. That might of been the look you were after, but you could have added extra flair.

And Jappio, I like your Giratina/Salamance sprites. I'm surprised no one has done that before.

Made this over vact\ation. I'm using it for my game, Fakemon: Golden Collection.
[IMG]http://i865.photobucket.com/albums/ab216/Rampage567/MarcusSplice-1.png[/IMG]
BTW, if someone wants me to put one of thiers into it, feel welcome to ask.
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Hey Jappio, the Shelder+Areodactly's head is weird lookin. The tongue is a little too big, even though thats Shelder.
[IMG]http://i865.photobucket.com/albums/ab216/Rampage567/Splice1-2.png[/IMG]

I know it looks like there are only black borders, but there only similar colors. Besides, this is my first one using Paintbrush on the Mac, instead of MS Paint.

FEEL FREE TO CRITIQUE!
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[quote name='Rampage567' timestamp='1303587002' post='5162312']
Hey Jappio, the Shelder+Areodactly's head is weird lookin. The tongue is a little too big, even though thats Shelder.
[IMG]http://i865.photobucket.com/albums/ab216/Rampage567/Splice1-2.png[/IMG]

I know it looks like there are only black borders, but there only similar colors. Besides, this is my first one using Paintbrush on the Mac, instead of MS Paint.

FEEL FREE TO CRITIQUE!
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I use Paintbrush too.

I thought we learned just a few post ago by Mr Jappio that we needed to troll someone elses sprite before letting our own ones out to the slaughterhouse.

And I see around 13 oddly placed black pixels. And you need to color this up.
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Hey, i joined a while ago, but havent posted yet, so here is one i made:

[IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/110cdqw.png[/IMG]

Yes, i hate the fact that the arm covers the left eye, but there was nowhere elsw to put it, soooooo. yeah.

And the black and white sprite above me, well, there is two things i see here: 1: The end of the tail isnt inline with the rest of the tail, and if it is a seperate thing, that's just odd. 2: The feet are a lot brighter than the rest of the sprite, so i would darken them if i were you.
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[quote name='Xx\Mew/xX' timestamp='1303504907' post='5160077']
[IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/op7czp.png[/IMG][IMG]http://i53.tinypic.com/34t1jrr.jpg[/IMG]
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Little sprites like this hard to properly critique. The bullet's arms could be better attached I suppose. One arm makes it look like it's coming out of the bullet, while the other makes it look like it's attached to the bullet. Also even though everything else is looking directly on, you made the mouth in a way that implies it's on an angle. The clouds seemm sort of too simple too.

The piece of toast(?) is another simple one. Only complaint I can make is that it has no shading?

[quote name='Rampage567' timestamp='1303572710' post='5161812']
[IMG]http://i865.photobucket.com/albums/ab216/Rampage567/MarcusSplice-1.png[/IMG]
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The legs look a little small and wobbly compared to the larger body. The tail is a tad boring, maybe could have used a small something on the end. What's with the little white pixels at the front ankles? They don't look like they belong. The things on the neck could use a little bit of some brighter color to match the head wings, they appear pretty dark in comparison, at least for the front sprite.

[quote name='Rampage567' timestamp='1303587002' post='5162312']
[IMG]http://i865.photobucket.com/albums/ab216/Rampage567/Splice1-2.png[/IMG]
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Ok the way you did the colors did not work. The shadows are too dark, the 2nd border color is too dark. Even if you're pulling a palette from another Pokemon, you need to edit it and make it work for what you're using. Not every set of colors works on every Pokemon.

Another thing. The legs just don't work in my opinion. Their so far up on the body, makes the tail seem too long. They also aren't attached the best, seem very tacked on.

[quote name='Psychic Almighty' timestamp='1303929499' post='5171904']
[IMG]http://i55.tinypic.com/110cdqw.png[/IMG]
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In cases where pieces don't fit right, you need to get a little creative. If you have an issue with that arm, check a few of that Pokemon's other sprites. You might find something that works. Every sprite from 4th gen in the very least has a 2nd frame. If you can get ahold of them, 5th gen sprites have a lot of frames, and some sites even have the pieces already broken up for you.

I'm also not a fan of these Metagross mech type things. It's something that seems a little too common. It's something you really need to do something creative or exceptional to really make it stick out from the rest. Yours sadly falls a little flat and doesn't seem to have anything that gives a real "wow"-factor.

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Hey look, some Fakemon I either made or remade for a contest! Yipee!

[IMG]http://i140.photobucket.com/albums/r15/Profit_Jappio/NewestFakemon.png[/IMG]
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[quote name='Psychic Almighty' timestamp='1303929499' post='5171904']
And the black and white sprite above me, well, there is two things i see here: 1: The end of the tail isnt inline with the rest of the tail, and if it is a seperate thing, that's just odd.
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Actually, the tail is from milotic. I didn't edit it, except for colors Thats just the way nintendo made it.
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I've made 4 splices and a sprite that I wont post because Jappio hurted my feelings with his critique... My avis/pixel art were only for the lulz, they don't really need the things he said... So if you think at the fact that it is just humorous, I think its pretty decent. Jappio, if you review something, post both good and bad feedback, or nothing at all.
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I see people in the forum still aren't reading the first post rules. @ Psychic Almighty: that splice actually looks pretty good. Except why in the world is it red? Isn't a splice of Beldum and Metagross? If not please tell us what you used to create this combo.
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Oh man guys, remember when I started that one project and never finished! Yeah that one had loads of potential!

Seriously, I start way too many projects sometimes.

I really should get back to work on my scratch tutorial in the very least. That had some potential I felt.
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@Jappio: You did a good job on the sprites. Only problem I see is that in the 2nd turkey's wing the shading is off a bit from the others.

Off-topic: If you ever do get around to making the scratching tutorial that'd really help.

And here is a scratched sprite I made. I edited it after some suggestions were made by others in it's thread.[center][IMG]http://i51.tinypic.com/kc7xj.png[/IMG][/center]
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