Just showing a picture that i drew on Paint

[Blace]

This will be my first yugioh card that I drew that is going to YCM. It still incomplete.

It may be blurry, but it's completely computer-drawed from me. And it can be possibly overpowered.

[img]http://img682.imageshack.us/img682/4687/223108.jpg[/img]
Lore:
[Cyber Dragon + Cyber Dragon Zwei + 1 "Machina" monster]
This card cannot be Special Summon. This card can only be Fusion Summon by sending the following fusion material monsters in your side of the field. When this card is in your side, any Battle Damage you would get becomes the half original ATK and DEF of this card.

[Marco Polo]

This card's ATK original ATK is 0. so how's half helping you?

I'm not a fan of powerful cards and for sure cards which are having more than 2000 ATK, but who will think of sending 3 monsters to the grave for this suckish effect? I mean, it can be gone from the field to the grave in a second, it's a fusion of 3 monsters, it should be more powerful.

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[quote name='Ilan' timestamp='1282511349' post='4554875']
This card's ATK original ATK is 0. so how's half helping you?

I'm not a fan of powerful cards and for sure cards which are having more than 2000 ATK, but who will think of sending 3 monsters to the grave for this suckish effect? I mean, it can be gone from the field to the grave in a second, it's a fusion of 3 monsters, it should be more powerful.
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Ok, I will work on it.

Here is the new improved effect of the card<
[img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/2201/223108c.jpg[/img]
Lore:
[Cyber Dragon + Cyber Dragon Zwei + 1 "Machina" monster]
This card cannot be Special Summon. This card can only be Fusion Summon. Each turn you do not attack with this card, increase the ATK by 1500. Any monster that battles this card cannot change its battle position and loses ATK equal to it's Level x 100.

[Marco Polo]

This card cannot be Special Summoned from your Graveyard. During the end of your Battle Phase, if this card did not declare an attack this turn, increase it's ATK by 1500. Any monster that battles this card cannot change Positions during the rest of the duel. Decrease the ATK and DEF of every monster that battles this card equal to it's level x 100.


I'd say you need to get a better background and make the effect more interesting.
there's is nothing interesting about this effect.

[Dante Dimercurio]

[b]Picture: (6/10.) Make a background, but I give you props for making that picture you claim you made.

OCG: (6/10.) OCG errors as stated above.

Total: (6/10.) Good job.[/b]

[Blace]

in several days, i will finish the drawing and give it a background. And also give it a better effect.

[Dark Armor]

Dude you can draw.
OCG: ok
Pic:nice(props for drawing it yourself)
effect; OP'ed since you take 0 damage .
6.5/10 nice job.

[Marco Polo]

[quote name='Dark_ARMOR' timestamp='1282547095' post='4556560']
Dude you can draw.
OCG: ok
Pic:nice(props for drawing it yourself)
effect; OP'ed since you take 0 damage .
6.5/10 nice job.
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How can it be overpowered?

[Blace]

thanks,but it's still an incomplete picture, I might finish it strongly in between Wednesday and Thursday. And what's a prop?

[JEatsBabies]

wait its effect doesnt make any sense cause its attack is 0 !! it should just say that all battle damage is 0 . on top of that its hard to summon and because of that it need to be better

[Blace]

That's the old card, the improved one is below the old one.

but, my question is what's a prop? I never heard of it.

[Blace]

I may have made a mistake on the time, the card would be done before by saturday.

[Blace]

I'm wrong again, the picture wqill be done the end of next week.

[~{Rochster}~]

first one is up'd and second is op'd. the problem with the second one is that it could have unlimited atk. it should be like this: every turn this card did not declare an attack, add 1 OMD Conter to this card (max 5). For every OMD counter this card has, this card gains 1000 atk points. You can sacrifice 5 omd counters to destroy all other cards on the field. this effect cannot be negated.

[Blace]

ok i will.

[Mugendramon]

OMG what did you do to that Cyber Twin Dragon!

I'm not really fond of the effect, and don't really like the picture either...

A 4/10, unfortunately...

[Blace]

it's not cyber twin dragon, the look is mainly from cyber dragon zwei

[Metroidhunter50]

Nice card man.

[Blace]

np, hey you guys and gals don't need to wait so the pic. i will let you know.