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Duelist Pack: Jack Atlus


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With the upcoming Duelist Pack: Crow, people have lamented the non-existence of a Duelist Pack for the King. Jack's actually played a bunch of interesting cards recently, like Power Breaker, Create Resonator, and of course, Scar-Red Nova Dragon. So I heroically took it upon myself to construct Duelist Pack: Jack Atlus.

This endeavor is coupled with my [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/217095-dr-cakeys-card-correction-agency/"]Card Correction Agency[/url], where I fix up cards to be good and cool and awesome. I think you'll like what I did with Change Destiny. Any corrections to cards made in this pack will be reflected in whatever booster they appear in.

Lastly, I should point it that this is a Duelist Pack. It does not have all of Jack's cards. It does not have MOST of Jack's cards. There were plenty of cards I wanted to include, but that ended up getting cut in the end, maybe even enough for Jack Atlus 2. For now, though, I'm plenty satisfied. Let's dive in:

[img]http://www.majhost.com/gallery/matanui0011/DPJA/duelist_pack_jack_final.jpg[/img]
Yeah, that's a really, really bad picture. I'm an awful GFXer. Don't be hatin'.

Dark Resonator (DPJA-EN001)
[spoiler=Mad Daemon (Mad Archfiend) (DPJA-EN002)]
[img]http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/599/114148.jpg[/img]
LORE: This card inflicts Piercing damage. When this card is attacked, you can change it to Defense Position.
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[spoiler=Vice Dragon (DPJA-EN003)]
[img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/1324/114148s.jpg[/img]
LORE: If you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If you do, this card's original ATK and DEF are halved.
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[spoiler=Small Piece Golem (DPJA-EN004)]
[img]http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/4381/114148a.jpg[/img]
LORE: When this card is Summoned, if you control a "Big Piece Golem", you can Special Summon 1 "Medium Piece Golem" from your Deck. If you control a "Medium Piece Golem" you can Special Summon 1 "Big Piece Golem" from your Deck. A monster Special Summoned by this effect has its effect negated.
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[spoiler=Mid Piece Golem (Medium Piece Golem) (DPJA-EN005)]
[img]http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/4119/114148i.jpg[/img]
LORE: When this card is Summoned, if you control a "Big Piece Golem", you can Special Summon 1 "Small Piece Golem" from your Deck. If you control a "Small Piece Golem" you can Special Summon 1 "Big Piece Golem" from your Deck. A monster Special Summoned by this effect has its effect negated.
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[spoiler=Big Piece Golem (DPJA-EN006)]
[img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/4381/114148a.jpg[/img]
LORE: If your opponent controls a monster while you control no monsters, you can Normal Summon this card without Tribute. You can send this card and 1 different "Piece Golem" monster you control to the Graveyard and Fusion Summon 1 "Multi-Piece Golem" from your Extra Deck.
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Twin-Sword Marauder (DPJA-EN007)
[spoiler=Trap Eater (DPJA-EN008)]
[img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/4381/114148a.jpg[/img]
LORE: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 1 monster. You can Special Summon this card from your hand by destroying 1 face-up Trap Card on the field.
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Battle Fader (DPJA-EN009)
[spoiler=Flare Resonator (DPJA-EN010)]
[img]http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/705/114148w.jpg[/img]
LORE: If this card is used as a Synchro Material Monster, the Synchro Summoned monster gains 300 ATK. Also, if the Synchro Summoned monster is FIRE or Dragon-Type, when it destroys a monster by battle, inflict 300 damage to your opponent.
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[spoiler=Smile Kids (DPJA-EN011)]
[img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/599/114148.jpg[/img]
LORE: You can discard 1 card to Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, except when destroyed by battle, Special Summon 1 "Smile Angel" from your Deck.
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[spoiler=Smile Angel (DPJA-EN012)]
[img]http://img833.imageshack.us/img833/9607/114148e.jpg[/img]
LORE: While this card is face-up on the field, if it was Special Summoned by the effect of "Smile Kids", all monsters your opponent controls lose 500 ATK and DEF.
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[spoiler=Power Giant (DPJA-EN013)]
[img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/3075/114148o.jpg[/img]
LORE: You can discard 1 Level 4 or lower monster to Special Summon this card from your hand. If you do, this card's Level is decreased by an amount equal to the Level of the discarded monster. Any Effect Damage you would take is halved.
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[spoiler=Power Breaker (DPJA-EN014)]
[img]http://img839.imageshack.us/img839/7568/114148g.jpg[/img]
LORE: If this card is destroyed by your opponent, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. If this card is in face-up Defense Position, destroy it.
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[spoiler=Lancer Daemon (Lancer Archfiend (DPJA-EN015)]
[img]http://img251.imageshack.us/img251/1244/114148m.jpg[/img]
LORE: Once per turn, when a monster you control battles, that monster inflicts Piercing damage during that battle only.
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[spoiler=Create Resonator (DPJA-EN016)]
[img]http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/9383/114148t.jpg[/img]
LORE: If you control a Level 7 or higher monster, you can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard. If this card is Special Summoned by this effect, return it to the Deck when it is removed from the field.
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[spoiler=Multi-Piece Golem (Multiple Piece Golem)]
[img]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/1764/114148b.jpg[/img]
LORE: 2 "Piece Golem" monsters
This card gains ATK equal to the total Levels of the monsters used for the Fusion Summon of this card x 100. You can return this card to the Extra Deck to Special Summon up to 1 each of "Small Piece Golem", "Medium Piece Golem", and "Big Piece Golem" from your Graveyard.
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[spoiler=Red Daemons Dragon (Red Dragon Archfiend) (DPJA-EN018)]
[img]http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/599/114148.jpg[/img]
LORE: 1 Dragon or Fiend-Type Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
If this card attacks a monster your opponent controls, destroy all Defense Position monsters your opponent controls at the end of the Damage Step. During the End Phase of a turn this effect was activated, destroy all monsters you control that did not attack this turn.
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Exploder Dragonwing (DPJA-EN019)
[spoiler=Scar-Red Nova Dragon (Red Nova Dragon) (DPJA-EN020)]
[img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/1245/114148q.jpg[/img]
LORE: 2 Tuners + "Red Daemons Dragon"
This card gains 500 ATK for each Tuner monster in your Graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by card effects. When an opponent's monster declares an attack, you can remove from play this card to negate the attack. If you negate an attack this way, Special Summon this removed from play card during the End Phase.
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Nightmare Archfiends (DPJA-EN021)
[spoiler=Shock Wave (DPJA-EN022)]
[img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/3613/114148z.jpg[/img]
LORE: Activate only while your Life Points are lower than your opponent's. Destroy 1 monster on the field and inflict damage to both players equal to the destroyed monster's ATK.
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[spoiler=Change Destiny (Changing Destiny) (DPJA-EN023)]
[img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/599/114148.jpg[/img]
LORE: Activate only when your opponent declares an attack. Negate the attack, and your opponent selects 1 of the following effects to apply:
* Destroy all Attack Position monsters your opponent controls. Your opponent gains 1200 Life Points.
* Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard in Defense Position. You take 1200 damage.
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[spoiler=Rage Re-Synchro (DPJA-EN024)]
[img]http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/599/114148.jpg[/img]
LORE: Select 1 Synchro Monster in your Graveyard. Send its Synchro Material Monsters from your side of the field to the Graveyard and Synchro Summon that monster from your Graveyard. It gains 500 ATK. If it attacks a monster, destroy that monster after damage calculation.
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[spoiler=Absolute Power Force (Crimsone Fire) (DPJA-EN025)]
[img]http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/599/114148.jpg[/img]
LORE: Activate only when you would take damage while you control a "Red Daemons Dragon". You take no damage, and your opponent takes double the damage you would have taken, instead.
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[spoiler=Overpower (DPJA-EN026)]
[img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/6742/114148c.jpg[/img]
LORE: Negate the activation of a card effect that would negate an attack, end the Battle Phase, or prevent monsters from attacking, or the activation of a card effect activated during the Battle Phase that would affect a monster(s) you control, and destroy the card.
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Fiendish Chain (DPJA-EN027)
[spoiler=Powerful Rebirth (DPJA-EN028)]
[img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/599/114148.jpg[/img]
LORE: Select 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard and Special Summon it. It gains 100 ATK and 1 Level. During each of your Standby Phases, you take 1000 damage. If this card is removed from the field, destroy that monster. If that monster is destroyed, destroy this card.
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[spoiler=Zero Hole (DPJA-EN029)]
[img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/599/114148.jpg[/img]
LORE: Activate only while you have no cards in your hand. Destroy all monsters on the field.
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[spoiler=Screen of Red (DPJA-EN030)]
[img]http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/599/114148.jpg[/img]
LORE: Monsters your opponent controls with 2000 or more ATK cannot attack. During each of your End Phases, pay 1000 Life Points. If you control a "Red Daemons Dragon", you can send this card to the Graveyard and Special Summon 1 Level 1 monster from your Graveyard.
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And for people who really dig this whole "pack" idea, here's the breakdown of card rarities:
2 Ultra Rare (Scar-Red Nova Dragon, Screen of Red)
4 Super Rare (Power Giant, Battle Fader, Red Daemons Dragon, Exploder Dragonwing)
7 Rare (Vice Dragon, Power Breaker, Smile Angel, Multi-Piece Golem, Powerful Rebirth, Shock Wave, Monster Baton)
17 Common

So? What do people think. Comment, etc.
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[quote name='Static Nautilus' timestamp='1283112966' post='4579207']
By the way, what site did u get the real card pics from?
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I think from Yugioh Wikia, he just cut off the cards.

About the cards:

Scar-Red Nova Dragon mentions "Red Dragon Archfiend".
The actual card is called "Red Demon's Dragon".
Decide yourself.

Also, "Monster Baton" was a Trap left by Crow; not by Jack; against Team Taiyo.

BUT you did a good job. 9/10 from the Monkey.
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[quote name='BlindMonkey' timestamp='1283113407' post='4579232']
I think from Yugioh Wikia, he just cut off the cards.

About the cards:

Scar-Red Nova Dragon mentions "Red Dragon Archfiend".
The actual card is called "Red Demon's Dragon".
Decide yourself.

Also, "Monster Baton" was a Trap left by Crow; not by Jack; against Team Taiyo.

BUT you did a good job. 9/10 from the Monkey.
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Scar-Red Nova: My mistake. I'll fix that.

The wiki listed Monster Baton as used by Jack. I reviewed the duel, and it is indeed Set by Crow. I'll figure out something to replace it with.

[quote name='crossader' timestamp='1283113549' post='4579237']
[color="#800080"][size="3"][font="Comic Sans MS"][b]The idea of recovering a forgotten DP was good... HOWEVER!

OCG is not good and some of the effects you are saying are not the real ones, as well as some card's names.[/b][/font][/size][/color]
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OCG is not good: Tell me where, otherwise this is little more than spam.
Effects: As I said, this is joined with my Card Correction Agency, which fixes crap cards to make them more playable.
Names: I generally use the Japanese names, where applicable.

EDIT: Fixed Scar-Red Nova Dragon.
EDIT2: Replaced Monster Baton with Zero Hole.
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[quote name='sleepy' timestamp='1283121341' post='4579759']
Create Resonator is an infinite spammer that is not removed from play like Plaguespreader. D:
Otherwise a Jack pack would be a nice idea.


I want a Dartz pack now xD
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My mistake on Create Resonator. Somehow I missed it + Mass Driver. How did I do that? I'll fix it.
EDIT: Fixed it.

[quote name='Fenrir-chan' timestamp='1283121812' post='4579783']
lame. these are all real cards. 0/10
[spoiler=bleh][img]http://img801.imageshack.us/img801/4412/29xsyhh.png[/img][/spoiler]
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Pro logic, there. I would point out that every card I actually created here has an effect at least slightly different than the original. So calling them "the same" would be, you know, wrong.

Oh yes, and I couldn't care less what Hiita thinks.

[quote name='senatheEND' timestamp='1283121911' post='4579790']
Most of these are already cards cept u named them wrong... Also Red demons dragon in TCG is Red dragon archfiend same for scare red.. its Red Nova dragon
Sad to say but i would lock this thread if i was Mod...
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From the Yu-Gi-Oh! Wiki:
TCG Name: Red Dragon Archfiend
Phonetic: Reddo Dēmonzu Doragon
Translated: Red Daemons Dragon / Red Demons Dragon / Red Demon's Dragon

So you're saying that the fact that I used an OCG name means that the cards are bad?
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[quote name='BlindMonkey' timestamp='1283126748' post='4580100']
Hey, I checked; and Crimson Fire was never called Absolute Powerforce. Please fix that.
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True, it's Japanese name is Crimson Hell Flare. Red D[s]ragon Archfiend[/s]aemons Dragon's attack was initially called Crimson Hell Flare, but was changed to Absolute Power Force. I made the unilateral choice to switch the name. I'm sorry if that offends you.
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