DL Posted September 29, 2010 Report Share Posted September 29, 2010 Suppose I should comment? >> << Those weren't chapters.....WTF....they're short...=_=;; Also... [narutardmode] I find it hard to believe a genin would be sent alone if there was a risk enemy shinobi would try and take it. That, my good sir, is at LEAST a b-rank mission, as Kakashi stated in episode 7, season 1 >:T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 *cough*longerthansomeofyours*cough* Anyways, I SAID they were short. >_____> And I'm clearly not getting the unimportance of the mission across. -__- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 Eh it was a good fight. Don't get why Tenkai suddenly went "Bye biatch <3" and dropped him though.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 You... seriously don't get why? Are you kidding me.... =.= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 By that I meant why he suddenly turned...darker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 Tenkai has surtenly become more of a dick.He could have just knocked out the 2nd rock shinobi and let him on the ground. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 @El - It's not about the unimportance, it's about the fact he had the risk of being attacked by enemy shinobi. WHICH IS A B-RANK MISSION >:T AT LEAST >:T AS KAKASHI CLEARLY SAID >:T Also, no...mines are longer >>;; And that's sayin something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 @El - It's not about the unimportance, it's about the fact he had the risk of being attacked by enemy shinobi. WHICH IS A B-RANK MISSION >:T AT LEAST >:T AS KAKASHI CLEARLY SAID >:T Also, no...mines are longer >>;; And that's sayin something. EDIT: “Weak, you say? I just immobilized you with one of my weakest jutsu. That’s not weak…” Most lulzy line in history. Also, the reason why Tenkai acted like such a dick is cause he's always been a dick (at least in my eyes) now he's just an EVIL dick. BTW...so......he beats two guards EASILY............EASILY......and yet gets the f*** beat out of him by one guy, who Saki beat the f*** out of.... Man, Tenkai's weak >>;; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 The heck's with you DL? You're being a Negative Nancy in every thread I go to -.- And no, your chapters are shorter. Or they definitely seem that way. And if not, then definitely around the same length. As for Tenkai's strength, well he's the main character, he has to start off not so good to get stronger :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 Alright, I'll clear things up in one go! Fusion, think of what the Rock Village has sone to him. They killed a Kazekage, beat the sh!t out of him, and kidnapped the girl he LOVES. >:T Dra-man, see above reasoning. Burt yeah, it WAS a dick move. DL.... where do I begin.... 1. The mission's chance for getting attacked by enemy nins was small. They just happened to be there. 2. Raikegan allows instant escape, so they can trust him with such stuff 3. Most of my chapters make yours look small.... I just slipped a little in length a few times, and even then they're around the same length as some of yours are 4. That line was put there as a joke for someone to find, and you did! XD 5. How was he a dick in your eyes? D: 6. I knew I would have to explain this... Okay, so first off, the Daven situation: Daven is like Kage level, and Tenkai wore him out some, so when he faced Saki's squad he was already injured and reduced chakra. Plus, both Saki and Tenkai (for teh plot!) get strength enhancments when they think the other is in danger. Now, for the gaurds: Tenkai was pissed, and as Naoto said, he goes beyond Jonin level on something involving a person close to him (in this case, Saki). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 [quote name='El Make' timestamp='1285871993' post='4668897'] Alright, I'll clear things up in one go! Fusion, think of what the Rock Village has sone to him. They killed a Kazekage, beat the sh!t out of him, and kidnapped the girl he LOVES. >:T Dra-man, see above reasoning. Burt yeah, it WAS a dick move. DL.... where do I begin.... 1. The mission's chance for getting attacked by enemy nins was small. They just happened to be there. [b]Two random highly-skilled ninja, strolling by the forest, ooh, what do they see? A kid! So let's stalk the kid, and learn of what he holds! Ooh, he has a bright thing, let's steal him, and be dicks about it, then hope the shiny thing sells well![/b] 2. Raikegan allows instant escape, so they can trust him with such stuff [b]Ooh, I have an awesome teleportation jutsu, but I'll just stroll through the forest of highly-skilled ninjas with too much time on their hands.[/b] 3. Most of my chapters make yours look small.... I just slipped a little in length a few times, and even then they're around the same length as some of yours are [b]I doubt yours are two pages, but even so, they're the same length, about[/b] 4. That line was put there as a joke for someone to find, and you did! XD [b]Let's add a joke to the story, that makes Tenkai sound like little kid~[/b] 5. How was he a dick in your eyes? D: [b] IDK, I could just picture him going off on a raeg without too much wow factor, which is actually good.[/b] 6. I knew I would have to explain this... Okay, so first off, the Daven situation: Daven is like Kage level, and Tenkai wore him out some, so when he faced Saki's squad he was already injured and reduced chakra. [b]And yet he still kicked their asses to high heaven before the lone girl beat the crap out of him[/b] Plus, both Saki and Tenkai (for teh plot!) get strength enhancments when they think the other is in danger. [b]Everyone loves cliche plot devices[/b] Now, for the gaurds: Tenkai was pissed, and as Naoto said, he goes beyond Jonin level on something involving a person close to him (in this case, Saki). [b]Refer to above comment~[/b] [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 Why did I know you would be a dick in your response. >____________> 1. Who said highly skilled? LRN2RD. And your over thinking this too much. 2. Your comment... made no sense.... =.= 3. Only 7 and 8 were a little less than two pages, the rest are all longer than 3 1/2 4. Now you're just acting like a dick 5. wuuuuuuuuuuuuuut? 6. Ami...... Pwned. 6v2. Yes, don't we all? (sooooooo called that one) 6v3. Oh, like Daisuke wouldn't get stronger when Sayuki's life was on the line. >________________________________> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 DL using it would wore him out and if he stoped and be attacked he would be deffensles.3 Jounin from Rock can't find a special kunai and Naruto does it in 3 minutes while looking for a corps(YES IT"S FILLER) Ununportant ninjas no matter what rank fail at logic at any possible situation.They would stop and put a tree on fire for not giving them directions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 [quote name='El Make' timestamp='1285873960' post='4668984'] Why did I know you would be a dick in your response. >____________> 1. Who said highly skilled? LRN2RD. And your over thinking this too much. [b]So Tenkai was having trouble with non highly skilled ninja.........and now suddenly he can go beyond jonin....okay yeah....I can live with that.[/b] 2. Your comment... made no sense.... =.= [b]Tenkai strolling through the forest instead of teleporting to his destination makes no sense either[/b] 3. Only 7 and 8 were a little less than two pages, the rest are all longer than 3 1/2 [b] cool~ So half the chapters you posted in the past week[/b] 4. Now you're just acting like a dick [b]critic, there is a difference[/b] 5. wuuuuuuuuuuuuuut? [b]it's belieavable to me he could be a dick[/b] 6. Ami...... Pwned. [b]Ami who?[/b] 6v2. Yes, don't we all? (sooooooo called that one) [b]Not really[/b] 6v3. Oh, like Daisuke wouldn't get stronger when Sayuki's life was on the line. >________________________________> [b]He'd try harder, but there would be no magical power-ups incoming, I'm afraid[/b] [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 1. He was a Genin at the time 2. Raikegan = a good amount of chakra drain, plus it doesn't allow him to go from village to village! >:T 3. THAT is a dick comment 4. About as much different as.... a forget it 6. My point was, if Ami (12) could beat up Daisuke, why couldn't Saki beat up Daven? 6v3. I'm afraid you're lying. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 [quote name='El Make' timestamp='1285876337' post='4669110'] 1. He was a Genin at the time [b]So he should have ben with 2 other people and a Jonin, at least. Ya know aside from how genin usually are sent to like babysit and pick up trash, they usually are in a team.[/b] 2. Raikegan = a good amount of chakra drain, plus it doesn't allow him to go from village to village! >:T [b]So how could he fight and all after using it with the Rock thugs?[/b] 3. THAT is a dick comment [b]Not really, I was just stating the fact[/b] 4. About as much different as.... a forget it 6. My point was, if Ami (12) could beat up Daisuke, why couldn't Saki beat up Daven? [b] Cause Ami was powered by Dai's chakra and Nine tails chakra.[/b] 6v3. I'm afraid you're lying. :3 [b]I'm afraid I'm not[/b] [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 By now, the only logical arguement you have is number 2.... 2. It's called "Epic". It occurs when a main character is pissed/abnormally powered up. Anything that would normally drain energy now seems to do nothing! >:3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted September 30, 2010 Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 Still doesn't explain number one...which you dodged.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted September 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2010 Fine, if you're going to keep at it.... 1. It's called "Naruto". A plot type in which kids are stronger than adults, and break the normal rules of their world. Happy? Remind me to make a comment about EVERYTHING I see slightly off in KS next time a new chapter is added.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 I actually would appreciate that. It's criticism, and when taken care off makes the author's writing better. So I'm just sayin: They break the rules of the normal world, but not THEIR world. So technically it makes no sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 DL anime lacks logik in every way.It cannot posibily be compared to the real world. LRN2ANIME Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 No, I'm saying Tenkai broke the rules of THEIR world. Not following Real world rules is one thing, but not following THEIR (the story's) world is just instability of the story's part. DON'T TELL AN OTAKU THAT HE NEEDS TO LRN2ANIME >O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 Any main character can pull of breaking laws of worlds.It's why they are main. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 [quote name='Dranzer' timestamp='1285953114' post='4671141'] Any main character can pull of breaking laws of worlds.It's why they are main. [/quote] YES! XD And get your @$$ out of a knot DL, it's not even that big deal... >___> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 I'm jsut saying it to improve your writing, so you'll think about making more sense next time. Not trying to b**** for no reason. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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