El Make Posted October 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 Sure seems like it at times. :3 Then again, I'm a b**** in your FF.... XD But yeah, chapter 10 is almost done, and I'm making it longer! >:3 Chapter 10 added, beginning to add bios now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 Not a bad chapter. BTW, When I read the chapter's title... Hero started playing in my head =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 [quote name='Tainted Black' timestamp='1285960383' post='4671351'] Not a bad chapter. BTW, When I read the chapter's title... Hero started playing in my head =3 [/quote] That.... was my intent. >:3333 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 1, 2010 Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 Nice bios and good chapter 10 bro. I should post mine >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 1, 2010 Chapter 10 was made long to celebrate making 10 chapters... XD And Saki's pic.... was the least dirty thing I could find. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted October 2, 2010 Report Share Posted October 2, 2010 S***.....I love it...... And that's scary cuz I hate Naruto, but then again, he isn't here so that's fine.......... Again, they're fricking awesome, can't wait for more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted October 2, 2010 Report Share Posted October 2, 2010 Just checked on the bios.So that's why mist wanted the crystal so badly. Also Koji's pic in the bio suits him well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2010 [quote name='Black Diamond Duelist' timestamp='1286001988' post='4672771'] S***.....I love it...... And that's scary cuz I hate Naruto, but then again, he isn't here so that's fine.......... Again, they're fricking awesome, can't wait for more! [/quote] >:333333 [quote name='Dranzer' timestamp='1286023746' post='4673058'] Just checked on the bios.So that's why mist wanted the crystal so badly. Also Koji's pic in the bio suits him well. [/quote] The crystal's full power will be revealed in the next couple of chapters. Expect Koji to kick some @$$! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted October 2, 2010 Report Share Posted October 2, 2010 Can't....waiit... Please o the next 2 chapters ASAP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 Chapter 11 added! >:3333333 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 You characterized Dranzer as Koji perfectly xP Not a bad fight either, so good chapter. I noticed you're taking your time with introducing other members...I've mixed feelings, but it's fine, looking forward to 12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 Wow my jutsu realy does kick ass. I realy liked chapter 11 only that Shisen healed too quickly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 Fusion, I said I wasn't going to introduce members until later. This isn't a FF like yours or DL's... =.= But yay, approval. :3 And Dra-man, wait till you see what your Kekkei Genkai allows you to do! >:3333333 And really? NO ONE commented on the Raikegan? I could have sworn someone would say something about the Sharingan, I even had a speech typede up to defend myself.... XD inb4darklink401 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 I well if it is 500 years later Doujutsu must have evolved. Also I must be able to kill people with Chakra Dragon.I can't imagin something more epic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 Dra-man, you basically have complete manipulation over chakra... and all the chakra that should have been released if it wasn't for the crystal... = SHITLOAD of chakra.... XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 CHAKRA PILLAR SMASH!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 Chapteer 12 added! >:33333333333333333333333 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 4, 2010 Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 So Koji basically pwned him, got kicked in the back, and just in time for backup for the enemy to arrive? Yeesh. Sucks >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2010 Yes, because Koji must be seriously injured and have bad luck fall upon him for plots to advance! XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrystalCyae Posted October 5, 2010 Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 1: WOW, epic Kekkei Genkai 2: Perfect timing from the Rock Shinobi 3: Damn, I'm lost just reading You must continue this! Also, Shisen= Fail Koji= Epic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted October 5, 2010 Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 El I have one question.How can a guy that has nearly gotten killed,lost his arm and is bleading multiply do that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 [quote name='Dranzer' timestamp='1286300291' post='4681293'] El I have one question.How can a guy that has nearly gotten killed,lost his arm and is bleading multiply do that? [/quote] Were you NOT reading everytime I mentioned him drawing power from the ground? >___> And I'm sure you'll like the next Chapter Dra-man. >:3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted October 5, 2010 Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 I thought the ground shaking wasn't from him. My mistake sorry. Also if you say so...can't wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
El Make Posted October 5, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 New Chapter added. Not sure of the quality, I felt sick while writing it.... T-T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fusion X. Denver Posted October 5, 2010 Report Share Posted October 5, 2010 Yeah Koji's screwed >.> Imo I would have described Daven by his appearance rather than his name to heavily imply it was him and to give a narrative in the 3rd person perspective from someone's point of view, this case being Koji. But you were unsure of the writing's quality, so it makes sense. Good chapter, and nice, back to the Hidden Sand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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