Locomotion R-Genex

[Toffee.]

Supersonic R-Genex -WIND-
Lvl9
[Machine/Synchro/Effect]
1 "Genex" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner WIND monsters.
When this card is Synchro Summoned, select up to 2 cards on your Opponent's side of the field and send them to the Graveyard. Then send the top of both player's decks to the Graveyard.
2500ATK / 2000DEF

Hydraulic R-Genex -WATER-
Lvl9
[Machine/Synchro/Effect]
1 "Genex" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner WATER monsters.
When this card is Synchro Summoned, look at the top 3 cards of your Opponent's deck, and select and Remove from play up to 2 of them. Shuffle the remaining card into your Opponent's deck, and inflict 800 points of damage to your Opponent's Lifepoints.
2500ATK / 2000DEF

Canyon R-Genex -EARTH-
Lvl9
[Machine/Synchro/Effect]
1 "Genex" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner EARTH monsters.
When this card is Synchro Summoned, inflict 1000 points of damage to your Opponent's Lifepoints. during the End Phase of the turn in which this card is Synchro Summoned, add 1 monster card from your deck to your hand.
2500ATK / 2000DEF

Clockwork R-Genex -EARTH-
Lvl9
[Machine/Synchro/Effect]
1 "Genex" Tuner + 1 level 6 monster.
Once per turn you can return 1 monster you control to your hand to Special Summon 1 Genex Token [EARTH/Machine/Level 4/1000ATK/1000DEF] to either side of the field. If a Genex Token is destroyed as a result of battle, draw 1 card.
2500ATK / 2000DEF

Eruption R-Genex -FIRE-
Lvl9
[Machine/Synchro/Effect]
1 "Genex" tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner FIRE monsters.
When this card is Synchro Summoned, select 1 attack position monster on the field. Special Summon 1 monster from either player's Graveyard to your side of the field, in face-up defense postion, that has the same type as the selected monster. The effect of the Special Summoned monster is negated. Then, change the battle position of the selected monster.
2500ATK / 2000DEF

R-Genex Retrieval -Quick-Play Spell-
Select 1 level 9 "R-Genex" Synchro monster you control to activate. Return the selected monster to your Extra deck to draw 3 cards, then discard 1.

[Zeppeli Gyro Supreme]

The cards seem overpowered in a way, but that really depends on the pacing of Genex decks. I've never gone up against one, or watched one being played, so I can't say much.

Overall, they look good, and I like their effects. Mostly original, and not bland.

[Toffee.]

[quote name='slayer_supreme' timestamp='1290013801' post='4791218']
The cards seem overpowered in a way, but that really depends on the pacing of Genex decks. I've never gone up against one, or watched one being played, so I can't say much.[/quote]
Effectivly I wanted to give more options, then the standard Birdman + Caius.
The would also let you use Thestalos, Mobius, Granmarg, etc

[quote name='slayer_supreme' timestamp='1290013801' post='4791218']Overall, they look good, and I like their effects. Mostly original, and not bland.
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I kinda designed these to be a bit Monarch like

[Zeppeli Gyro Supreme]

Yeah, I can see that now that I look at it. One of your cards says "EATER monsters" though xD

[Vector Nightmare]

Eh. They're all quite decent, except Supersonic R-Genex, which is... quite overpowered actually. The others are fine balance-wise, maybe even a tad underwhelming. I like the concept though. Especially Canyon, Clockwork and Hydraulic are great, but I'd pick better names for Eruption and Supersonic.

[Toffee.]

[quote name='~ Epic Hero - Saber ~' timestamp='1290033111' post='4791927']
Eh. They're all quite decent, except Supersonic R-Genex, which is... quite overpowered actually.[/quote]
Why? Because it bypasses Stardlight Road?

[quote name='~ Epic Hero - Saber ~' timestamp='1290033111' post='4791927']but I'd pick better names for Eruption and Supersonic.
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The names have to be along the lines of 'Locomotion'.
Though Locomotion's origional name, R-Genex Kurokishian, which translates to "Real Genex Black Engine"(its sounds badass), so I would have to come up with names along those lines.
.........
And "Green Aero" sounds cheesy. Same with "Red Inferno"
>_>
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[Vector Nightmare]

[quote name='Armadilloz' timestamp='1290040543' post='4792271']
Why? Because it bypasses Stardlight Road?[/quote]

I see a +3 for a turn that's even more versatile than Trishula or Mist Wurm which bypasses destruction immunity, and all you see is a way to bypass SLR? =S

[quote name='Armadilloz' timestamp='1290040543' post='4792271']
The names have to be along the lines of 'Locomotion'.
Though Locomotion's origional name, R-Genex Kurokishian, which translates to "Real Genex Black Engine"(its sounds badass), so I would have to come up with names along those lines.
.........
And "Green Aero" sounds cheesy. Same with "Red Inferno"
>_>
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I'm sure you could find something better without ruining the naming scheme.

[Toffee.]

[quote name='~ Epic Hero - Saber ~' timestamp='1290042040' post='4792353']
I see a +3 for a turn that's even more versatile than Trishula or Mist Wurm which bypasses destruction immunity
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Trish and Mist also bypass destruction immunity.
Trish and Mist use 2 non-Tuner, this use 1 non-Tuner of a specific attribute, as well as limiting it to target 1 less thing. Therefor, its on the same level as Trish and Mist.
The "both players draw 1" effect is a +0, ergo, doesn't count.
In short, Supersonic is the same as Mist and Trish.

[Vector Nightmare]

[quote name='Armadilloz' timestamp='1290043209' post='4792388']
Trish and Mist also bypass destruction immunity.
Trish and Mist use 2 non-Tuner, this use 1 non-Tuner of a specific attribute, as well as limiting it to target 1 less thing. Therefor, its on the same level as Trish and Mist.
The "both players draw 1" effect is a +0, ergo, doesn't count.
In short, Supersonic is the same as Mist and Trish.
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Mist Wurm sends 3 cards on the field back to their owner's hand. It can get rid of up to 3 zones on your opponent's field. If your opponent has less, it does not fully perform. And they are not utterly lost, which makes it most suitable for OTKs.

Trishula gets rid of 1 card in the hand, graveyard and field. It's more versatile than Mist Wurm because it promotes overall advantage, but you don't clear their field as easily.

Your Supersonic not only gets rid of 2 cards on the field completely, also making it ideal for pushing OTKs, but it provides you with a new card, that could more than likely also be used to push. Also even if you accept your opponent having 3 cards you need to get rid of on a consistent basis out, he generally won't have more than 4, which makes this card a much better target for De-Synchro like the other 2 since you keep hand advantage. And your opponent also drawing won't really matter, since you'll be pushing for OTK.

Difficulty in summoning does not matter, in a dedicated deck this is as easy to bring out as either of the aforementioned, and just thinking of the fact that you'll probably have used Raiza with this, essentially translating the whole process into: return a card to your opponent's hand, send 2 cards to the Graveyard, and draw 1 card, it's very very powerful.

The drawing part should happen during the End Phase, fix that and it's fine, otherwise too OTK-friendly. And don't bring up using Tuningwares for Trishula or Mist Wurm and De-Synchro - that requires quite more setup than bringing this out.

[Toffee.]

[quote name='~ Epic Hero - Saber ~' timestamp='1290058172' post='4792878']
the fact that you'll probably have used Raiza with this, essentially translating the whole process into: return a card to your opponent's hand, send 2 cards to the Graveyard, and draw 1 card, it's very very powerful.
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Because everyone loves Raiza xD
Oh, and I edited Supersonic's effect to seem a little more ridiculous when combined with the "perfect" Synchro material monster.

[byak]

How is it a +2 if you use several resources to summon your guy.

Also I thought the point of R-Genex was to tutor cards.

Also Trishula is better than Super Sonic by far.

[Toffee.]

[quote name='ze super cat' timestamp='1290123542' post='4794149']
How is it a +2 if you use several resources to summon your guy.[/quote]
I don't get it either. I only changed the effect just to make him "happy".

[quote name='ze super cat' timestamp='1290123542' post='4794149']Also I thought the point of R-Genex was to tutor cards.[/quote]
These are synchros that are similar to Locomotion, that would use a repsective Monarch to summon.
Seriously... Locomotion, Birdman, and Caius are a hilarious set.

[quote name='ze super cat' timestamp='1290123542' post='4794149']Also Trishula is better than Super Sonic by far.
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The old version of Supersonic was where after it sends 2 cards, both players draw 1.

[byak]

Trish is still better.

[Toffee.]

[quote name='ze super cat' timestamp='1290134910' post='4794753']
Trish is still better.
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For the record, I was kinda' wanting it to be a +0.
You think the 1st version was better?