Hyoreon, Lion King of the Ice Barrier

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

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[b]Lore:[/b]

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner WATER monsters
If this card attacks, Trap Cards cannot be activated during the Damage Step. Once per turn, if another "Ice Barrier" monster you control is destroyed by battle, it is not. When this card is removed from the field due to a card effect, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Ice Barrier" monster from your Graveyard. The monster Special Summoned by this effect has its effect(s) negated.


CnC and rate, please.

[Zeppeli Gyro Supreme]

First: "In the tundra, the might tundra..."
Second: Has some OCG errors, but overall is fine.
Third: Seems like there's too many powerful effects going on at once. I'd leave only the essentials.
Finally: Overall, it looks like a cool card. Just needs the changes I mentioned above. Good work.

EDIT: I hate rating cards, but... 7/10

[♫♪GoldenBoy♪♫]

Well this card is OP'ed to say the least. You restrict your opponent from special summoning, the drawback to that would be only if you count destroying a monster as a drawback, and when this card is destroyed you can Special Summon another card, and safe to say there are some pretty strong Ice Barriers at Level 4.

My rate 7/10

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

[quote name='slayer_supreme' timestamp='1290547365' post='4805650']
First: "In the tundra, the might tundra..."Second: Has some OCG errors, but overall is fine.Third: Seems like there's too many powerful effects going on at once. I'd leave only the essentials.Finally: Overall, it looks like a cool card. Just needs the changes I mentioned above. Good work.EDIT: I hate rating cards, but... 7/10
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Can you tell me where the errors are. I may not be up to date with the new OCG stuff.
Anyway, got rid of the Special Summon sealing effect and changed the Trap Card block for the damage step.

[quote name='CursdShiva' timestamp='1290547524' post='4805659']
Well this card is OP'ed to say the least. You restrict your opponent from special summoning, the drawback to that would be only if you count destroying a monster as a drawback, and when this card is destroyed you can Special Summon another card, and safe to say there are some pretty strong Ice Barriers at Level 4.My rate 7/10
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OK then, the restriction effect is removed and as for the Special Summoning, its effects are negated to balance it out.


But thank you both for your rating/comments

[Zeppeli Gyro Supreme]

"If this card attacks, Spell and Trap Cards cannot be activated during the Damage Step. Once per turn, when another "Ice Barrier" monster you control would be destroyed by battle, it is not. When this card is removed from the field due to a card effect, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Ice Barrier" monster from your Graveyard."

That would be my fix, including OCG errors and my idea of what would make it a better card overall.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

OK, that can be fixed.