RickiMinaj Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [center][img]http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/7599/yertdy.png[/img][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 WOW!!!! This card is amazing. It is: Original Balanced Perfect OCG Good Pic 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dementuo Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 Wow. That's really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='Talos the Wind Ninja' timestamp='1295243048' post='4940204'] WOW!!!! This card is amazing. It is: Original Balanced Perfect OCG Good Pic 9/10. [/quote] Well... Ya know... I try ;D [quote name='Dementuo' timestamp='1295243057' post='4940205'] Wow. That's really good. [/quote] Baby I know... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 The "Once, the equipped monster..." thing looks awkward. It's a pretty solid card. It's not truly amazing, but it's solid, with no problems I can see right now. Pretty nice, Gphaku Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='Yankee' timestamp='1295243223' post='4940210'] The "Once, the equipped monster..." thing looks awkward. It's a pretty solid card. It's not truly amazing, but it's solid, with no problems I can see right now. Pretty nice, Gphaku [/quote] Gah... D:< I thought I removed that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='Essence' timestamp='1295243311' post='4940211'] Gah... D:< I thought I removed that! [/quote] Yankah gets no sexahness...I get it, fine XD Sadface? Make your changes I guess ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='Yankee' timestamp='1295243437' post='4940215'] Yankah gets no sexahness...I get it, fine XD Sadface? Make your changes I guess ^^ [/quote] Tooo lazy.. Dint save the PSD format... only the png... so now I have to remake the entire card just to make some changes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 Quite an interesting card. I like how you can get it back if the equipped monster chooses to flip itself face-down. The controlling what its stats become is also well done - basically turning it into The Unhappy Maiden (stat-wise). That image is also very nice....and I want it. =D Quite practical as a suicide card - but not that great as a defense card (since I can still tribute the monster instead of usings its effect to give it back to you - unless my monster has a nice Flip Effect). It does have all that nice Plant support floating around nowadays - which is a plus. Your OCG is pretty solid aside from Yankee's note. I can't bring myself to give you anything less than a 9.5/10 for this. Great job! =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 Normally I am very critical when I see cards being made by people, usually ending up in arguments as to why this is OPed or what not, but I have to say . . . This is absolutely got to be one of the best cards I've seen [size="1"]don't take that too happily since I don't critique cards a lot[/size] I can honestly see this as a card that Konami would make in the future. It's level is spot on for the ATK and DEF it is holding, which coupled with the effect fits even more perfectly. As for the effect the first part I did not mind, since there is a lot of cards out there that become equip cards when they are destroyed by battle and equip to the monster which destoryed them. Now when the next part said "The Monster equipped with this card cannot be destoryed" I was wondering, "What is this going to mean? Is it a lead up to more in the effect or possibly a combination with a Spell/Trap?" That is when the next part added even more to the excellence which this card is. When the equipped monster is an attack TARGET, meaning during YOUR turn, it's ATK and DEF become the equipped monster cards. I've never seen this and makes it perfectly fair, a weak monster on YOUR turn and the original ATK/DEF on THEIR turn. If you had left it at that I would have given it a lower score, seeing as it can easily be abused with multipule attacks leading to OTKs. Yet you figured that out and added a way in the effect to destory it and recycle the card at the same time. Once the monster can flip down into face-down defense mode and 'Poisonus Delicacy' is returned to the owner's field in face-down defense mode as well; thus almost returning the field back to the way it was. From there it acts as a detrement and shield for your LP; since the opponent KNOWs what it is they might be unwilling to attack it. Fair, even, d*mn well balanced . . . *looks around* WHY HASN'T THIS BEEN MASS PRODUCED YET?! I WANT IT IN [b]MY[/b] PLANT DUELING DECK RIGHT F*CKING NOW! X3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='Omega Red' timestamp='1295243584' post='4940220'] Quite an interesting card. I like how you can get it back if the equipped monster chooses to flip itself face-down. The controlling what its stats become is also well done - basically turning it into The Unhappy Maiden (stat-wise). That image is also very nice....and I want it. =D Quite practical as a suicide card - but not that great as a defense card (since I can still tribute the monster instead of usings its effect to give it back to you - unless my monster has a nice Flip Effect). It does have all that nice Plant support floating around nowadays - which is a plus. Your OCG is pretty solid aside from Yankee's note. I can't bring myself to give you anything less than a 9.5/10 for this. Great job! =D [/quote] To be quite honest... I hate plant support... I wish plants were outcasts once again... Fighting flowers just piss me off. Black Rose Dragon isn't helping any cause either... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Murphy ☆ Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 This card Deserves a Golden Plaque Incredible Card 100/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted January 17, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [quote name='Jake the Sage' timestamp='1295243853' post='4940225'] Normally I am very critical when I see cards being made by people, usually ending up in arguments as to why this is OPed or what not, but I have to say . . .This is absolutely got to be one of the best cards I've seen [size="1"]don't take that too happily since I don't critique cards a lot[/size]I can honestly see this as a card that Konami would make in the future.It's level is spot on for the ATK and DEF it is holding, which coupled with the effect fits even more perfectly. As for the effect the first part I did not mind, since there is a lot of cards out there that become equip cards when they are destroyed by battle and equip to the monster which destoryed them. Now when the next part said "The Monster equipped with this card cannot be destoryed" I was wondering, "What is this going to mean? Is it a lead up to more in the effect or possibly a combination with a Spell/Trap?"That is when the next part added even more to the excellence which this card is. When the equipped monster is an attack TARGET, meaning during YOUR turn, it's ATK and DEF become the equipped monster cards. I've never seen this and makes it perfectly fair, a weak monster on YOUR turn and the original ATK/DEF on THEIR turn.If you had left it at that I would have given it a lower score, seeing as it can easily be abused with multipule attacks leading to OTKs. Yet you figured that out and added a way in the effect to destory it and recycle the card at the same time.Once the monster can flip down into face-down defense mode and 'Poisonus Delicacy' is returned to the owner's field in face-down defense mode as well; thus almost returning the field back to the way it was. From there it acts as a detrement and shield for your LP; since the opponent KNOWs what it is they might be unwilling to attack it.Fair, even, d*mn well balanced . . .*looks around*WHY HASN'T THIS BEEN MASS PRODUCED YET?! I WANT IT IN [b]MY[/b] PLANT DUELING DECK RIGHT F*CKING NOW! X3 [/quote] Well thank you sir. I quite appreciate the positive feedback. [quote name='iShadow' timestamp='1295250281' post='4940291'] This card Deserves a Golden PlaqueIncredible Card100/10 [/quote] How fast did you join the bandwagon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted January 17, 2011 Report Share Posted January 17, 2011 [color=blue][b]Poisonous Delicay[/b][/color] The card is quite unusual. But by being so, this makes it somehow, very original. It can in the right Deck, can be used to slowly take down your opponent's monsters one by one. I see no use though having it's DEF decreased straight to 0, yet you keep it's ATK at a mere, mere 100. I feel so stupid not knowing how it can be used in the current Meta and whatnot D: Care to explain please? Otherwise, it's just....intriguing? xD +Rep for you for screwing with my mind :P But at the least, all I can give as of now is a [b]6.9/10[/b] (ucwutididthar? ;D) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted January 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 [quote name='Anbu-of-Sand' timestamp='1295308707' post='4941789'] [color=blue][b]Poisonous Delicay[/b][/color] The card is quite unusual. But by being so, this makes it somehow, very original. It can in the right Deck, can be used to slowly take down your opponent's monsters one by one. I see no use though having it's DEF decreased straight to 0, yet you keep it's ATK at a mere, mere 100. I feel so stupid not knowing how it can be used in the current Meta and whatnot D: Care to explain please? Otherwise, it's just....intriguing? xD +Rep for you for screwing with my mind But at the least, all I can give as of now is a [b]6.9/10[/b] (ucwutididthar? ;D) [/quote] Of course... When a monster attacks, it cant change it's battle position during the turn. But with this monster equipped, the opponent has 1 of 2 choices... It can keep it in attack, let its own monster die, and get it destroyed as well. Or it can change it to f/d defense position, which will reinstate the cycle of life all over again. It's an attack loop. You need a card effect to truly take it out. Now we will go on how the choices may consequence the opponent. If they select to flip it face down, they have just given you a fodder. A tribute. It can be used for whatever you want, be it synchro, card effect, or anything else. This is well paired with a monarch really, giving you a free sustainable tribute monster. If they select to not flip it face down, then you can take full advantage of the decreased ATK of the enemies monster. Dealing a blow which can nearly make you win, or break your opponent from winning. Either way, this card poses an advantage for you. Looking at it as I am right now though, I wouldn't be surprised if this card was limited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted January 18, 2011 Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 [quote name='Essence' timestamp='1295310201' post='4941848'] Of course... When a monster attacks, it cant change it's battle position during the turn. But with this monster equipped, the opponent has 1 of 2 choices... It can keep it in attack, let its own monster die, and get it destroyed as well. Or it can change it to f/d defense position, which will reinstate the cycle of life all over again. It's an attack loop. You need a card effect to truly take it out. Now we will go on how the choices may consequence the opponent. If they select to flip it face down, they have just given you a fodder. A tribute. It can be used for whatever you want, be it synchro, card effect, or anything else. This is well paired with a monarch really, giving you a free sustainable tribute monster. If they select to not flip it face down, then you can take full advantage of the decreased ATK of the enemies monster. Dealing a blow which can nearly make you win, or break your opponent from winning. Either way, this card poses an advantage for you. Looking at it as I am right now though, I wouldn't be surprised if this card was limited. [/quote] Thank you for the explanation, now I can see the card is actually quite the threat / force to be reckoned with. This also though makes me feel slightly stupid, not being able to see the attack loop in the first place D: Though, I can, yet cannot see the card getting Limited. This being Semi-Limited would be quite stupid. This being unlimited could be a problem. But I just can't see this being banned or Limited. Either way though, now understanding the card, I see it is quite useful. -Edit- Oh lookie, my 2400th post. Almost halfway from reaching 5000 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Communityreborn Posted January 18, 2011 Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 BROKEN! What happens when a monster with 0 ATK equipped with this card gets it's ATK decreased by 100? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted January 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 [quote name='Communityreborn' timestamp='1295314245' post='4942014'] BROKEN! What happens when a monster with 0 ATK equipped with this card gets it's ATK decreased by 100? [/quote] Broken how? And since it says decrease, obviously, anything with ATK lower than that is unaffected by the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted January 18, 2011 Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 [quote name='Communityreborn' timestamp='1295314245' post='4942014'] BROKEN! What happens when a monster with 0 ATK equipped with this card gets it's ATK decreased by 100? [/quote] It's attack is decreased [b]to[/b] 100, not by 100. Also, explain the brokenz you find because I think the card is fine, maybe semi limited but not brokenz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted January 18, 2011 Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 He means broken as in it doesn't work. But it does. ...so I think. Your lack of posted lore makes iPod viewers sad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted January 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 [quote name='Smesh' timestamp='1295320844' post='4942175'] He means broken as in it doesn't work. But it does. ...so I think. Your lack of posted lore makes iPod viewers sad. [/quote] Sorry. I'm too lazy to type it up. Wanna do it for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anbu-of-Sand Posted January 18, 2011 Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 Out of boredom, I'm up for posting the lore. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, it is treated as an Equip Card and is equipped to the monster that destroyed it. A monster equipped with this card cannot be destroyed by battle. When the equipped monster is selected as an Attack Target, decrease the ATK to 100 and the DEF to 0. Once, the equipped monster can flip into face-down Defense Position. If it does, then this card is Special Summoned to the original owners side of the field in face-down Defense Position By the way, Attack Target I believe should be lower cased, and you forgot a period at the end :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted January 18, 2011 Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 isn't Attack Target supposed to be attack target... about the decreasing the ATK to 100 and DEF to 0... shouldn't decrease be reduce in that sentence... original owner[b]'s[/b] side of the field shouldn't [i]Once,...[/i] be [i]Once per Duel,...[/i] other than that... extremely balanced card.... awesome effect... image is great.... why is the attribute japanese? great name too... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Chess Posted January 18, 2011 Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 I liked it because its original. But I'm pretty sure that attack target is written with no capital letter. I think you meant decrease the ATK by, not to (I think its OP this way). This card can be re-used if the monster is flipped, so I'm not sure about the balance. So my rate will be a good one, not an excelent one. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted January 18, 2011 Report Share Posted January 18, 2011 It's original, I give you that, but far from useful. Since it has low stats, it's obvious that you'd set it, and then people would just play around it since the possibility of Ryko always exists. And sure, it takes monsters down, but really, it's just a 1-4-1 card that doesn't destroy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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