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Imbose Newbie

Imbose

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thanks dude :> umm o yea umm heres my song: I was borrrrrn on the sides of L.A....

a long time agooo..... all day and niiiiiighhht I was in the allllllyyyyy. some on once came to pick me UUUUPPPPP he said he was my father. I did't say any thiiiiiinnggg about it. i went into his car he drove me aaawwwaaaaay frooom L.A. I did't tell him how proud I was but he said he would love me forever was borrrrrn on the sides of L.A....

a long time agooo..... all day and niiiiiighhht I was in the allllllyyyyy. some on once came to pick me UUUUPPPPP he said he was my father. I did't say any thiiiiiinnggg about it. i went into his car he drove me aaawwwaaaaay frooom L.A. I did't tell him how proud I was but he said he would love me forever

 

hey I writen some songs for my school dont for get ok yumidog

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Junk Raver

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WTF no. are you drunk

 

I am lol

 

Well tipsy, just had a can of cider, and some red bull and vodka, im bored lol

 

Well technically it was red rooster, a cheap crappy version of red bull ^_^

 

 

I like the idea of this thread, but i dunno if my song would personally be suiting, it contains alot of swear words lol

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altemon Newbie

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I like writing songs. Here's one I came up with last year.

 

V1

I thought I was done

Thought I was the one

That had done it all…

I thought I’d come through

Thought I had nothing left to do…

 

HOOK

The game’s not done till the sun sets in our lives

Still some secret we haven’t realised

The game’s not done till the sun sets in our lives

Even when the game may seem to be set in our minds

The game’s not done till the sun sets in our lives

 

CHORUS

I got the whole world ahead of me

So much to do

We’ve only just begun

I got the whole world ahead of me

So much to do

Miles left to run

 

V2

Never will I think again

That this is the end

The final chapter…

Because there’s always something new

For you to do…

 

HOOK

 

INSTRUMENTAL

 

CHORUS x2

 

I thought I was done

Thought I was the one

That had done it all…

 

Oh, and yeah, games section.

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altemon Newbie

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Here's another one.

 

The sun shines bright

‘Til way into the night

Dawn is not too far from twilight.

But if you look into my eyes

You’ll see no pride

All you’ll see is another me

The one that hasn’t died

 

Days come, days go

I don’t even know

To and fro

My life will flow

I feel nothing

See nothing too

Goodbye to my life

Goodbye to you

Sunrise, sunset

Let’s leave it at that

It’s all been said

It’s all we’ll get

I don’t need anything

So go away

I’ll talk to you

Another day.

 

It’s raining in my mind

There’re clouds in my eyes

I can’t wait until the night

The sun may shine, but it’s not what I see

You may think this way of livin’s easy

But it’s raining in summer,

It’s raining in summer for me.

 

Days come, days go

I don’t even know

To and fro

My life will flow

I feel nothing

See nothing too

Goodbye to my life

Goodbye to you

Sunrise, sunset

Let’s leave it at that

It’s all been said

It’s all we’ll get

I don’t need anything

So go away

I’ll talk to you

Another day.

 

It doesn’t hurt anymore…

It’s alright if I leave it alone…

It doesn’t hurt anymore…

Nooooooo……

 

Instrumental

 

Days come, days go

I don’t even know

To and fro

My life will flow

I feel nothing

See nothing too

Goodbye to my life

Goodbye to you

Sunrise, sunset

Let’s leave it at that

It’s all been said

It’s all we’ll get

I don’t need anything

So go away

I’ll talk to you

Another day.

 

The sun shines bright

‘Til way into the night

Dawn is not too far from twilight.

But if you look into my eyes

You’ll see no pride

All you’ll see is another me

The one that hasn’t died

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Imbose Newbie

Imbose

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my song is off the internet

 

ALL StAr BY SMASH MOULTH

 

Somebody once told me the world is gonna roll me

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

In the shape of an "L" on her forehead

 

Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming

Back to the rule and I hit the ground running

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

 

So much to do so much to see

So what's wrong with taking the back streets

You'll never know if you don't go

You'll never shine if you don't glow

 

[Chorus:]

Hey now you're an All Star get your game on, go play

Hey now you're a Rock Star get the show on get paid

And all that glitters is gold

Only shooting stars break the mold

 

It's a cool place and they say it gets colder

You're bundled up now but wait 'til you get older

But the meteor men beg to differ

Judging by the hole in the satellite picture

 

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

The waters getting warm so you might as well swim

My world's on fire how about yours

That's the way I like it and I never get bored

 

[Repeat Chorus 2x]

 

Somebody once asked could I spare some change for gas

I need to get myself away from this place

I said yep what a concept

I could use a little fuel myself

And we could all use a little change

Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming

Back to the rule and I hit the ground running

Didn't make sense not to live for fun

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

So much to do so much to see

So what's wrong with taking the back streets

You'll never know if you don't go

You'll never shine if you don't glow

 

[Repeat Chorus]

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Imbose Newbie

Imbose

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$@^@$#^es this is writing song

 

here's mine

 

oo once that night i wassss all allone. but the bight light shined about me in the black lonely room all about black ness. the light took me away AAANNNNDDDD choris: in to the liiight all about the world. out of the black ness into the real world.;choris stoped I was once told that the world was all alone. just like me. in the room oo once that night i wassss all allone. but the bight light shined about me in the black lonely room all about black ness. the light took me away AAANNNNDDDD choris: in to the liiight all about the world. out of the black ness into the real world.;choris stoped I was once told that the world was all alone. just like me. in the room

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Careless Whisper

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about the song I'm playing next weekend in North Carolina, Head Down by Sound Garden

 

We see you laugh

We see you dance

We take that away

Every day

 

We see you cry

We turn your head

Then we slap your face

 

We see you try

We see you fail

Some things never change

 

We hear you cry

We hear you wail

We steal that smile from your face

 

Bow down to live

Your life

Head down, hide that smile

Head high got to smile

 

Head high like a song you like

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i wrote this rap over the past few weeks. it was actually really hard.

 

For all you new jacks that never heard me spit

bring beats rhymes and freaks and watch me split sheet

bang like bloods and crips too legitimate to quit

MC's talk big but sonic waves crack they helmets

before long, the chicken heads crush they pelvic bones

i blow up spots, slam microphones

thinkin bout racin i'll adjust ya tone

funk rhymin, i leave your eyes shinin like chrome

rims, main course knuckle sandwich and ten

you try and whip me, i multiply like gremlins

i'm a vet in the game, i know the outs and ins

still i'm constantly movin like cowboys and indians

i'm a star, like Gene Star when

kickin that crazy sheet like a soccer hooligan

so buddy, break yaself ya know whats good for ya health

they call me ninja nine cuz i move in stealth

mode, after this joint ya head phones explode

i rhyme in beeps and blips so i can rhyme in morse code

flow like ocean, salt water erode

when the mic is in my grip its sure to corrode and

i glide across the beat like jordan

leave competition, holy like a mormon

hopin as ducks i got ya all stumblin

smoke too much you space the funk out like flash gordon

rock this sheet, from mornin to mornin

its so hot it have rappers wanna stop recordin

so i'm not super man, so lois lane reportin

start a fight with an eagle name-a jay johah jamison

if i miss i take aim again

throwin fire like the human torch, leavin yall funkers flamin

playa of yourself if ya think i'm gamin

create earthquakes that have ya core, tremblin

me, number nine like the love potion

cant clock my moves cuz i move in slow motion

motion

motion

motion

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