Mehmani Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 [center][img]http://img852.imageshack.us/img852/3866/85880.jpg[/img] [quote]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 1 Ritual Spell Card and 2 Ritual Monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard (this is treated as a Ritual Summon). When this card is Summoned, select 1 monster on the field. This card gains ATK equal to the selected monster's ATK x1.5. When this card is removed from the field, destroy the selected monster. You can remove 1 Ritual Monster in your Graveyard from play to flip 1 face-up card on the field face-down. This card's effect is treated as Spell Speed 3. When this card is destroyed, you can remove 2 Ritual Monsters in your Graveyard from play to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard.[/quote] [/center] Written Cards was giving me no comments for anything, so I was forced to post here. If you post badly written reviews without justifying your criticisms, except wrath. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Icy Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 Why not equip it? If you're hogging for Zones, then have the equipped card stay on their side of the field but still in the Spell/Trap Zone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 not proper ritual monster ocg all ritual monster should have this at least then if you want a effect to go with it This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "[Ritual Spell]". and you need a ritual spell card as well ... with this "This card is used to Ritual Summon "[Ritual Monster]". You must also Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal _ or more." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted March 23, 2011 Report Share Posted March 23, 2011 [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1300919359' post='5092258'] not proper ritual monster ocg all ritual monster should have this at least then if you want a effect to go with it This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "[Ritual Spell]". and you need a ritual spell card as well ... with this "This card is used to Ritual Summon "[Ritual Monster]". You must also Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal _ or more." [/quote] It's ritual summoned a different way. And don't use the excuse "That's how it's always been done", because I've seen threads where people said using 2 tuners for a Synchro Summon was impossible. I disagree Josh, with the ease of summoning it can have, giving it the attack and eliminating a monster would be too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted March 24, 2011 Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 Ok, this is a fair enough card. I like the effect, tho it kinda confuses me. Lols. So this card gains the atk of the selected monster's, plus another half of the atk? Meaning it will always be stronger than the selected monster by half of the ATK? How does the spell speed 3 has to do with it? Since you'll have to activate the effect when it's summoned. Meaning this card's effect can chain to counter traps? But wouldn't you have to activate the effect first anyways, since it's your turn and you have priority? If this card can't be special summon except by it's "ritual summon", wouldn't that prohibit itself from being summon from the graveyard (last effect)? -Dreamz- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted March 24, 2011 Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 [quote name='Phantasy Dreamz' timestamp='1300937657' post='5092894'] Ok, this is a fair enough card. I like the effect, tho it kinda confuses me. Lols. So this card gains the atk of the selected monster's, plus another half of the atk? Meaning it will always be stronger than the selected monster by half of the ATK? How does the spell speed 3 has to do with it? Since you'll have to activate the effect when it's summoned. Meaning this card's effect can chain to counter traps? But wouldn't you have to activate the effect first anyways, since it's your turn and you have priority? If this card can't be special summon except by it's "ritual summon", wouldn't that prohibit itself from being summon from the graveyard (last effect)? -Dreamz- [/quote] Mikail is currently offline, so I'll rebuttle for him. "This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 1 Ritual Spell Card and 2 Ritual Monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard [b](this is treated as a Ritual Summon).[/b]" That allows it to be SS'd fromthe Grave since it was properly ritual summoned in the first place. Also... You: I activate my effect to flip a card face-down Opponent: I chain skill drain You: Spell speed 3 t1t2 That's an example, I'm sure you can think of a much more useful situation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted March 24, 2011 Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 Oh crap? Where did you get the image? This card looks really legit and official and the effect of this card is way better than the original Relinquished and its summoning condition makes Relinquished easier to summon. YGO should really think about revamping Relinquished in the metagame. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted March 24, 2011 Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 1 Ritual Spell Card and 2 Ritual Monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard (this is treated as a Ritual Summon). When this card is Summoned, select 1 monster on the field. This card gains ATK equal to the selected monster's ATK x1.5. When this card is removed from the field, destroy the selected monster. You can remove 1 Ritual Monster in your Graveyard from play to flip 1 face-up card on the field face-down. This card's effect[b](s)[/b] is treated as Spell Speed 3. When this card is destroyed, you can remove 2 Ritual Monsters in your Graveyard from play to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. [color=red]^that's a suggestion because those are usually attached to a single effect in a card (or a single sentence effect, if that explains what I'm trying to say), not to the total amount of effects written in the card. Take for instance Rainbow Dragon. It has an effect that states it can activate during either player's turn, but it is only THAT one effect and not both of its effects. Also, it is attached to the sentence that states such effect. Your statement in there is not referring to any part in particular, nor is it part of any either. Either put that [b](s)[/b] to have this card become Spell Speed 3 in general, or move that to a parenthesis as an extension to the effect you want to use it on. I usually don't correct much OCG, and your OCG is pretty good, but this one change makes a difference depending on where it is. Other than that, its perfect. I personally don't like calculating x1[b].5[/b] but I guess its legit xD[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted March 24, 2011 Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 i used to the old ways Tsukasa Hiiragi - San ritual monsters usually need a ritual spell card to ritual summon them but This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 1 Ritual Spell Card and 2 Ritual Monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard (this is treated as a Ritual Summon). a cool way to do it like a entire deck and all the monsters are ritual monsters with This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 1 Ritual Spell Card and 2 Ritual Monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard (this is treated as a Ritual Summon). that would be something right ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted March 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted March 24, 2011 [quote name='Phantasy Dreamz' timestamp='1300937657' post='5092894'] Ok, this is a fair enough card. I like the effect, tho it kinda confuses me. Lols. So this card gains the atk of the selected monster's, plus another half of the atk? Meaning it will always be stronger than the selected monster by half of the ATK? [b]Yes.[/b] How does the spell speed 3 has to do with it? Since you'll have to activate the effect when it's summoned. Meaning this card's effect can chain to counter traps? But wouldn't you have to activate the effect first anyways, since it's your turn and you have priority? [b]It's to stop pesky negation.[/b] If this card can't be special summon except by it's "ritual summon", wouldn't that prohibit itself from being summon from the graveyard (last effect)? -Dreamz- [/quote] If it is destroyed after it has been Ritual Summoned it can be summoned from the Graveyard. [quote name='AsterikcAde' timestamp='1300939358' post='5092937'] Oh crap? Where did you get the image? This card looks really legit and official and the effect of this card is way better than the original Relinquished and its summoning condition makes Relinquished easier to summon. YGO should really think about revamping Relinquished in the metagame. [/quote] Thank you very much, I got the image from [url="http://s982.photobucket.com/albums/ae301/ninja_065/"]this archive[/url]. It's a .png so I had to download it, save it as a .jpg and reupload on my tinypic account. [quote name='sleepy' timestamp='1300946856' post='5093043'] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 1 Ritual Spell Card and 2 Ritual Monsters from your Deck to the Graveyard (this is treated as a Ritual Summon). When this card is Summoned, select 1 monster on the field. This card gains ATK equal to the selected monster's ATK x1.5. When this card is removed from the field, destroy the selected monster. You can remove 1 Ritual Monster in your Graveyard from play to flip 1 face-up card on the field face-down. This card's effect[b](s)[/b] is treated as Spell Speed 3. When this card is destroyed, you can remove 2 Ritual Monsters in your Graveyard from play to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard. [color=red]^that's a suggestion because those are usually attached to a single effect in a card (or a single sentence effect, if that explains what I'm trying to say), not to the total amount of effects written in the card. Take for instance Rainbow Dragon. It has an effect that states it can activate during either player's turn, but it is only THAT one effect and not both of its effects. Also, it is attached to the sentence that states such effect. Your statement in there is not referring to any part in particular, nor is it part of any either. Either put that [b](s)[/b] to have this card become Spell Speed 3 in general, or move that to a parenthesis as an extension to the effect you want to use it on. I usually don't correct much OCG, and your OCG is pretty good, but this one change makes a difference depending on where it is. Other than that, its perfect. I personally don't like calculating x1[b].5[/b] but I guess its legit xD[/color] [/quote] The Spell Speed 3 refers only to the flipping face-down effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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