Valkyrus Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 [IMG]http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb278/mario1092/nj.jpg[/IMG] Lore: [quote]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play one "Jinzo" in your Graveyard. When this monster is sent from the field to the Graveyard, destroy all face-up trap cards on your Opponent's side of the field. During the turn in which this card is sent to the Graveyard you can discard 1 card to Special Summon this monster on your side of the field[/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 bump for comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 Great idea and a good, new version of the old, boring Jinzo card. Love the pic too! Opponent doesn't need a capital "O" i don't think..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evilhorus Posted April 4, 2011 Report Share Posted April 4, 2011 It's worse than Jinzo. Like the idea, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HauntedShadow Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 nice idea, kinda original nice pic (where did you get it??Please REP) Not so bad effect 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endphase Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 [font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2]Are you guys serious?! This card is Op'ed as hell. [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2] [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2]Picture: 7/10 [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2]OCG: 17/20 [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2]Balance: 14/30 [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2]Originality: 30/40 [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2] [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2]Total: 68%[/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2] [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2]Why this card is Op'ed: Send it to the Graveyard (as cost, as tribute, etc.), and all your opponent's face-up Trap Cards are destroyed. Then, discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon it back, and use it again. It's ATK is to high either.[/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2] [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2]OCG correction: [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2][font="Arial"][size="2"][size=2]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Jinzo" from your Graveyard. When this monster is sent from [/size][/size][/font][font=Arial][size=2]the field to the Graveyard, destroy all face-up Trap Cards on your opponent's side of the field. During the turn in this card is sent to the Graveyard you can discard 1 card from your hand [/size][/font][font=Arial][size=2]to Special Summon this card.[/size][/font][/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2][font=Arial][size=2] [/size][/font][/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"]I think that's correct.[/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"] [/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"]Better next time![/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unbreakerable Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 AARRGGHH!!! MY CURSE CARD! KEEP IT THE HECK AWAY FROM ME! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Todiros Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 I like the idea, but nothing else. Stars are too much, ATK/DEF are fine. 5/10 from me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xzMasteRzx Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 It's meh. The pics good, but the effect is nothing to jump about. Also, he lost his great no Trap effect, so it's not that good for a real life duel. Score: 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 [quote name='Brendan Saux' timestamp='1302020836' post='5116200'] Are you guys serious?! This card is Op'ed as hell. [/quote] The fact is that this card isn't overpowered. It's even worse than the regular Jinzo. Why make a Jinzo card when it doesn't even negate the effects of Trap Cards in the first place? And the fact that it's a Semi-Nomi, meaning that it cannot be revived, even by it's own effect, unless you add "ignoring the Summoning Conditions" to the end of the card. As I was saying, who makes a Jinzo card without adding the Trap Card negation effect? The fact is that this so called Jinzo card is vulnerable to every Summoning negation card that are currently released in the OCG/TCG. And let's not forget that it's vulnerable to cards like Phoenix Wing Wind Blast, Compulsory Evacuation Device...BASICALLY any Trap Card that removes monsters/cards from the field. Regular Jinzo is only vulnerable to what? Solemn Judgment/Solemn Warning/any other Counter Trap Card that will negate the Summoning of it. And you call this card overpowered? And the Trap destruction effect isn't that good either. Oh boo hoo, it can destroy face-up Trap Cards. What a tragedy! And another thing? You think that it's ATK is "too much"? Man, it's only like 400 points stronger than Jinzo, and that's not even that much, being that this card is even worse than Jinzo. Man, get a better knowledge of the damn game before you start commenting on peoples cards and calling the cards overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
richbonner93 Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 [quote name='Brendan Saux' timestamp='1302020836' post='5116200'] [font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2]Are you guys serious?! This card is Op'ed as hell. [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2] [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2]Picture: 7/10 [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2]OCG: 17/20 [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2]Balance: 14/30 [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2]Originality: 30/40 [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2] [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2]Total: 68%[/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2] [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2]Why this card is Op'ed: Send it to the Graveyard (as cost, as tribute, etc.), and all your opponent's face-up Trap Cards are destroyed. Then, discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon it back, and use it again. It's ATK is to high either.[/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2] [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2]OCG correction: [/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2][font="Arial"][size="2"][size=2]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Jinzo" from your Graveyard. When this monster is sent from [/size][/size][/font][font=Arial][size=2]the field to the Graveyard, destroy all face-up Trap Cards on your opponent's side of the field. During the turn in this card is sent to the Graveyard you can discard 1 card from your hand [/size][/font][font=Arial][size=2]to Special Summon this card.[/size][/font][/size][/font][font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2][font=Arial][size=2] [/size][/font][/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"]I think that's correct.[/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"] [/size][/font] [font="Arial"][size="2"]Better next time![/size][/font] [/quote] I think it would be This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster can only be Special Summoned by its on effect or by removing from play "Jinzo" from your Graveyard... That's just my opinion cause it has that on "Stardust Dragon/Assault Mode." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 UP'ed and unplayable. It could easily be Bottomlessed and be done with. Honestly, I would even say that Jinzo-Lord would be better than this, since at least it stops Traps from activating, and Jinzo Lord itself is still crap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted April 5, 2011 Report Share Posted April 5, 2011 [quote name='Brendan Saux' timestamp='1302020836' post='5116200'] [font=arial, verdana, tahoma, sans-serif][size=2]Are you guys serious?! This card is Op'ed as hell. [/size][/font][/quote] [img]http://i.imgur.com/YlES5.gif[/img] I wouldn't run this in any Deck. Decree would be the main card you destroy, and why bother when you have a Jinzo in your Deck? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Hate Snatch Steal Posted April 6, 2011 Report Share Posted April 6, 2011 [i]This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play one "Jinzo" from your Graveyard. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, destroy all face-up trap cards your opponent controls. During the turn this card is sent to the Graveyard you can discard 1 card to Special Summon this card.[/i] ^Fixed. Reminds me of [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Guardian_Dreadscythe"]guardian dreadscythe[/url] from the anime since it keeps coming back. The face-up trap effect is just bland icing on the already delicious cake of its other effect and easy summoned requirement. (keep it so the card is still jinzo esque though) Could be decent in the right deck if you can abuse its ability to revive itself. Edit, its not overpowered since there are many counters to its ability to revive. Ex: Caius, dark core, divinewrath ect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
judedudemude Posted April 6, 2011 Report Share Posted April 6, 2011 nothing new ive seen stuff like this before but nerco jinzo is a okay card [Spoiler= for Gandorator if he wants to read this] you could make Nerco Jinzo a level 10 Cosmic Monster ??? ex Lore 2 Level 10 Cosmo Monsters + 1 Level 10 non Cosmo Monsters This card can only be Cosmic Summon by using the above Cosmic material Monsters. When this monster is sent from the field to the Graveyard, destroy all face-up trap cards on your Opponent's side of the field. During the turn in which this card is sent to the Graveyard you can discard 1 card to Special Summon this monster on your side of the field if you do not know what a cosmo monster or a cosmic monster is please go here GO HERE FOR MORE INFORMATION : http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/245241-let-the-cold-black-heart-of-my-dark-machine-engulf-you/ [/Spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted April 6, 2011 Report Share Posted April 6, 2011 [quote name='judedudemude' timestamp='1302052383' post='5117475'] nothing new ive seen stuff like this before but nerco jinzo is a okay card [Spoiler= for Gandorator if he wants to read this] you could make Nerco Jinzo a level 10 Cosmic Monster ??? ex Lore 2 Level 10 Cosmo Monsters + 1 Level 10 non Cosmo Monsters This card can only be Cosmic Summon by using the above Cosmic material Monsters. When this monster is sent from the field to the Graveyard, destroy all face-up trap cards on your Opponent's side of the field. During the turn in which this card is sent to the Graveyard you can discard 1 card to Special Summon this monster on your side of the field if you do not know what a cosmo monster or a cosmic monster is please go here GO HERE FOR MORE INFORMATION : http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/245241-let-the-cold-black-heart-of-my-dark-machine-engulf-you/ [/Spoiler] [/quote] You're not helping OP with anything in regards to his card. You're only editing it so it would be you so called "Cosmic" monster. Here's a news flash for you, nobody cares. If you're going to comment on cards, give CnC. Just stick to your own cards and stop trying to promote your thread in other peoples threads already. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted April 6, 2011 Author Report Share Posted April 6, 2011 Oh I guess I didn't think far enough with this card I'm sorry guys.. I really need to rework the trap cards involving effect and also I should make it so it can be Special Summoned through his own effect. Thanks for the tips and reminders and fixes I'll be sure to take them into consideration! ^^ Expect me to post a reworked version of it sometime soon! ^^ Also, someone asked, I get my images mainly from danbooru, it's the largest imageboard I know, but I've also looked on deviantart. For some cards I design and draw the cards myself too ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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