·Toot Posted May 21, 2011 Report Share Posted May 21, 2011 [center][img]http://img845.imageshack.us/img845/6271/242084g.jpg[/img] [quote] [color="#006400"]This card inflicts piercing damage. You can send this face-up card to the Graveyard to inflict 700 damage to your opponent. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Beast or Beast-Warrior-Type monster from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. That monster is destroyed during the End Phase. [/color][/quote] [color="#00ffff"]How Is It?[/color] [color="#000080"]OCG Fixes Appreciated[/color] [color="#ff0000"]I Give Reps For Constructive Feedback.[/color] [/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted May 21, 2011 Report Share Posted May 21, 2011 Its is seriously cute and fully... the whole OCG about "Piercing damage" isn't actually OCG approved... but we all know what it means... I'm sorry, but I am too lazy to search a card to find the actualy OCG for you... I think there may be too many abilities on this card though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted May 21, 2011 Report Share Posted May 21, 2011 Actuall OCG is somthing along the lines of "When this card battles a card in defense position, deal the differance between this cards ATK and that cards DEF to your opponents Life Points" Somthing like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted May 21, 2011 Report Share Posted May 21, 2011 nice, you kill it yourself and still burn your opponent personally for that, 700 burn is a bit too high for it, given its piercing ability and the special summoning at the end 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted May 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2011 lol ok thnx for the FB guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted June 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Niv-Mizzet Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 "Piercing" is now official OCG. Konami says. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 this is why you're supposed to pet him with a chainsaw "When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Beast or Beast-Warrior-Type monster from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard" <---for that effect, I would also add if the monster you choose is Furret Slash, its effect gets negated 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted June 7, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 thnx for the fb man/lady or manlady Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 Even with the new OCG, your card is still wrong: -It is not [i][b]piercing damage[/b][/i] but [i][b]P[/b]iercing [b]Battle D[/b]amage[/i] -It is not [b][i]as a result of battle[/i][/b] but [i][b]by battle[/b][/i] -Lastly, if you are using the latest OCG it is better that you go all the way through. The new OCG has a bunch of : and ; separating Conditions, Costs, and Effects as well as distinguishing chainable from non-chainable effects. It would looks something along the lines of: [b]This card inflicts Piercing Battle Damage. By sending this face-up card to the Graveyard: Inflict 700 damage to your opponent. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard: You can select 1 Level 4 or lower Beast or Beast-Warrior-Type monster from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard; Special Summon it. Then, it is destroyed during the End Phase.[/b] But enough of OCG. The card itself is great. Piercing Level 4 Tuner that can Special Summon another one when destroyed by battle. Also, because it can Special Summon from the Graveyard too, that means that it can Special Summon itself. Making it a lot like Colossal Fighter. This card + Rainbow Life = Infinite Life Points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 That monster is destroyed during the End Phase seems bit unuseful IMO, make it second End Phase Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ren✧ Posted June 7, 2011 Report Share Posted June 7, 2011 Love the pic. Love the effect. I must have made at least 3 cards with this pic. Anyway very useful. MEGA adorable. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted June 8, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2011 thnx for the fb guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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