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Does this card seem like it could be real...

EFFECT: This card cannot be normal summoned or set unless you pay 1000 life points and remove from play 1 thunder type monster and 1 dark monster. If you tribute a monster with the words grim reaper in there name you may special summon this card from your hand. Once per game you may remove this card from play to inflict half of this cards attack to your opponent's life points.

 

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they are part of the set I'm making.

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Too OPed,

 

Suggestion to make this card less OPed along with OCG fix:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set unless you pay 1000 Life Points and remove from play 1 Thunder-Type and 1 DARK monster. This card cannot be destroyed by battle if your Life Points is 2000 or less,

 

Of course lowered the Level around 8 / 9, and ATK / DEF to 2800. Thunder and DARK being in one Deck seems hard for me though, unless it is Summoned Skull is the only option for this. So, i suggest to make it more playable

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All three cards appear to be from the same set, so I have merged the two topics and placed all cards on the first post. Please ensure that further additions to this particular set are edited into the first post.

 

Commander of Lightning is nothing more than a beatstick, and just making it immortal in battle doesn't mean it's good. The cost is too ridiculous for a card like this.

 

The Executioner is good, but I would recommend a drawback to the summoned monster. OCG fix: "When this card is sent to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 "Grim Reaper" monster from your Deck."

 

Fallen Death has good defense, but the "... or the ones he reaped" line just sounds awkward grammatically.

 

Decent start. Follow the above advice if you want to improve your card making skills.

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