Techi☺ Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 Welcome to the Reanimated Beasts custom, but realistic, set. A few things: [s]So far, I only have monsters.[/s] I've pooled together what little knowledge I have on OCG... but Idk if it's okay... Just because the Set name includes Beasts doesn't mean all monster cards and all support cards will be about beast-typed monsters, however, a decent amount of monsters will be beast-type because their pics are easier to find and effects just roll out of my head for them. The name wouldn't be as epic without the Beasts, so it was a nessacery evil. [spoiler=Monster cards] [spoiler=Effect Monsters(+tuners)] [spoiler=Reanimated Angel of Hope] [img]http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/5183/243934h.jpg[/img] When this monster is Summoned, you can draw 1 card. At the End Phase of either player's turn, this Face-Up card is sent to the Graveyard. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Linda the Reanimator] [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4440/243934s.jpg[/img] This monster can only be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. During the End Phase of each turn, you can Special Summon 1 "Reanimated" monster from your Graveyard. If this monster is removed from the Field, all monsters on your side of the field are banished. This monster can be considered as a "Reanimated" monster. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Reanimated Cerberus] [img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/2285/243934n.jpg[/img] You can declare an attack with this Face-Up monster on the start of your Opponent's Battle Phase. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Reanimated Cursed Dragon] [img]http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/9894/243934j.jpg[/img] Once per turn, during your Main Phase 1, you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "Reanimated" monster from your Deck. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Reanimated Gryphon] [img]http://img807.imageshack.us/img807/3548/243934o.jpg[/img] You can discard 1 card to Special Summon this card from your hand. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Reanimated Hell Beast] [img]http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/1579/243934q.jpg[/img] You can not declare an attack with this monster. If this Face-Up monster is selected as an attack target, you can switch the battle position of this monster and the battle continues normally. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Reanimated Mage] [img]http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/9929/243934p.jpg[/img] During your Main Phase 1, you can Special Summon this monster from your Graveyard and add 1 spell card from your Graveyard to your Hand. If this monster is Special Summoned to the field, the next time it leaves the field, it is banished instead. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Reanimated Dragon King] [img]http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/8751/243934v.jpg[/img] This monster can not be Normal Summoned. This monster can be Special Summoned by Banishing 3 "Reanimated" monsters from your side of the Field. This monster's ATK increases by 100 for each "Reanimated" monster in your Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can Banish 2 "Reanimated" monsters from yourside of the field to Special Summon this monster from your Graveyard. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Synchro] [spoiler=Reanimated Werewolf Angel] [img]http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/6066/243934a.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner Monster + 1 non-Tuner Monster Once per turn, if this monster is Face-Up on the Field, it can activate the effect of 1 other Face-Up "Reanimated" monster on the field. If this Monster is in the Graveyard, you can activate the effect of 1 other "Reanimated" monster in the Graveyard. Monster effects activated by this monster's effect are considered as this monster's effect.[/spoiler] [spoiler=Reanimated Machine Werewolf Angel] [img]http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/6946/243934i.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner Monster + 1 non-Tuner Synchro Monster Once per turn, if this monster is Face-Up on the Field, it can activate the effect of 1 other Face-Up "Reanimated" monster on the field. If this Monster is in the Graveyard, you can activate the effect of 1 other "Reanimated" monster in the Graveyard. Monster effects activated by this monster's effect are considered as this monster's effect. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Reanimated King Machine Dragon] [img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/8507/243934t.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner Monster + 1 "Reanimated Dragon King" Monster Once per turn, if this monster is Face-Up on the Field, it can activate the effect of 1 other Face-Up "Reanimated" monster on the field. If this Monster is in the Graveyard, you can activate the effect of 1 other "Reanimated" monster in the Graveyard. Monster effects activated by this monster's effect are considered as this monster's effect. This monster can not be targeted by effect or for battle by your opponent as long as there is at least 1 other "Reanimated" monster on the field. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spell cards] [Spoiler= The Reanimater's spell [img]http://img834.imageshack.us/img834/8751/243934v.jpg[/img] During Either Player's End Phase, you can Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "Reanimated" monster from your Graveyard. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hexcalibrate Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 you haven't made a set for awhile have you? the ocg is bad for example there is no gap between the synchro material and the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted July 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 [quote name='Paint Thinner For Blood' timestamp='1310171247' post='5339152'] you haven't made a set for awhile have you? the ocg is bad for example there is no gap between the synchro material and the effect. [/quote] (has been working on a life-long Dark realm set that I love and Adore) I already said I sucked a lot at OCG... anything else you wanna point out?I mean't spellcaster editing now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hexcalibrate Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 i'm not a expert either put i'm sure that "Face-Up" is just "face-up" and "deck" is "Deck" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted July 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 Someone told me It's Face-Up and I knew Deck was capped... I guess I didn't double-check hard enough... editing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hexcalibrate Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Vortex"]well heres a link to a card that say face-up[/url] for gryphon try using this ocg: "You can discard 1 card to Special Summon this card from your hand." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted July 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 [quote name='Paint Thinner For Blood' timestamp='1310171886' post='5339176'] [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Vortex"]well heres a link to a card that say face-up[/url] for gryphon try using this ocg: "You can discard 1 card to Special Summon this card from your hand." [/quote] Edits finished. I'm going with my friends advice with the caps on Face-Up, if anyone else complains I'll re-consider Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Ash Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 Cerberus is kinda crap. Effect isn't good, and there doesn't seem to be any use for it at all. Cursed Dragon is fairly nice, pull Synchro Material out of the deck quickly and easily. I worry about how easy it is to summon though. :/ Gryphon is The Tricky if it were a Tuner. Awesome. Run in Fableds. Hell Beast is pretty crap too tbh. Mage. Godly. Worried that it might be broken. Free revival from grave and recycle Monster Reborn/Mystical Space Typhoon/Dark Hole and stuff like that. Maybe cut the spell adding effect out. Werewolf Angel has an awesome effect. Seriously awesome. SS monsters off Cursed Dragon like crazy. Activates when in Grave too. Bit odd that no 2 of your monsters fit the materials though. Yeah, Werewolf and Dragon are fine, but a simple way to summon Cursed Dragon would really help out, as well as a direct way to Synchro Summon Werewolf Angel. Mage needs toning down - splashable and OP'd to hell. Hell Beast and Cerberus could do with better effects. Gryphon actually looks better in another Archetype than in it's own, perhaps you might want to tie it in to the Archetype a bit better. All in all, it's a bit hit and miss overall, but will be fine with some tweaking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted July 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 [quote name='Skizo' timestamp='1310172459' post='5339205'] Cerberus is kinda crap. Effect isn't good, and there doesn't seem to be any use for it at all. Cursed Dragon is fairly nice, pull Synchro Material out of the deck quickly and easily. I worry about how easy it is to summon though. :/ Gryphon is The Tricky if it were a Tuner. Awesome. Run in Fableds. Hell Beast is pretty crap too tbh. Mage. Godly. Worried that it might be broken. Free revival from grave and recycle Monster Reborn/Mystical Space Typhoon/Dark Hole and stuff like that. Maybe cut the spell adding effect out. Werewolf Angel has an awesome effect. Seriously awesome. SS monsters off Cursed Dragon like crazy. Activates when in Grave too. Bit odd that no 2 of your monsters fit the materials though. Yeah, Werewolf and Dragon are fine, but a simple way to summon Cursed Dragon would really help out, as well as a direct way to Synchro Summon Werewolf Angel. Mage needs toning down - splashable and OP'd to hell. Hell Beast and Cerberus could do with better effects. Gryphon actually looks better in another Archetype than in it's own, perhaps you might want to tie it in to the Archetype a bit better. All in all, it's a bit hit and miss overall, but will be fine with some tweaking. [/quote] Thank you sir for the full review of quality, these are the kinds of Reviews I'm looking for +rep XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 I'm gonna throw myself into the mix and say that I've always preferred "Face-Up" when you are talking about a specific card/monster on the field, like "Targets 1 Face-Up monster...", and "face-up" when you are talking about a whole group of cards, much like "Lightning Vortex" or "Malevolent Catastrophe". I don't know if it is right or not, but that is how I see it. Now, for the actual cards: I know you said that you were bad at OCG, so I'm not gonna count that in your rating. Usually, I'm pretty good with OCG and grammar; if I can understand the card effect, then I won't downgrade you. Gryphon could tie along very nicely with cards that are Graveyard-bound, or have effects that activate in Grave, or just any kind of archetype that relies on heavy discarding (like Fableds and Dark Worlds). Cerberus could have a better effect, maybe during the opponent's Battle Phase, this card gains XXX ATK or something. Mage is waaayy OP. Think about why "Magician of Faith" is banned and get back to me on that one. Hell Beast should have an effect to coincide with the switcharoo, like "if this card switches position, switch the ATK and DEF of this card until the End Phase" or some other effect like that. That would make it a bit better. Breakdown: 7/10 - Concept and originality 7/10 - OCG (don't worry, I didn't downgrade you too much) 8/10 - Artwork Total: 7.66/10 (Good) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted July 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 [quote name='Devil's Advocate' timestamp='1310173232' post='5339229'] I'm gonna throw myself into the mix and say that I've always preferred "Face-Up" when you are talking about a specific card/monster on the field, like "Targets 1 Face-Up monster...", and "face-up" when you are talking about a whole group of cards, much like "Lightning Vortex" or "Malevolent Catastrophe". I don't know if it is right or not, but that is how I see it. Now, for the actual cards: I know you said that you were bad at OCG, so I'm not gonna count that in your rating. Usually, I'm pretty good with OCG and grammar; if I can understand the card effect, then I won't downgrade you. Gryphon could tie along very nicely with cards that are Graveyard-bound, or have effects that activate in Grave, or just any kind of archetype that relies on heavy discarding (like Fableds and Dark Worlds). Cerberus could have a better effect, maybe during the opponent's Battle Phase, this card gains XXX ATK or something. Mage is waaayy OP. Think about why "Magician of Faith" is banned and get back to me on that one. Hell Beast should have an effect to coincide with the switcharoo, like "if this card switches position, switch the ATK and DEF of this card until the End Phase" or some other effect like that. That would make it a bit better. Breakdown: 7/10 - Concept and originality 7/10 - OCG (don't worry, I didn't downgrade you too much) 8/10 - Artwork Total: 7.66/10 (Good) [/quote] Yay ^_______^ Another good Review... That makes 3 people already? I'm so glad this wasn't overlooked O_O + rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted July 9, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 Added a New Effect Monster+ Going to be working on Spells and Traps Soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 Cerberus's effect isn't all that useful 1100 atk is weak, and won't last long against much you should have made it 1600 atk instead Gryphon's effect is boring. It's the same as The Tricky, so give it another effect 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted July 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1310464138' post='5347573'] Cerberus's effect isn't all that useful 1100 atk is weak, and won't last long against much you should have made it 1600 atk instead Gryphon's effect is boring. It's the same as The Tricky, so give it another effect 8/10 [/quote] thanks for the review! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1310464138' post='5347573']Gryphon's effect is boring. It's the same as The Tricky, so give it another effect[/quote] It doesn't need another effect. Being a Tuner more than makes up for that, and there are plenty of cards that share effects, although those just tend to be direct attacks or piercing. Angel of Hope is fun to spam, and works as the other requirement for Werewolf Angel. Calling Linda "The Reanimator" is pointless when you could just make her name "Reanimated Linda" or something that implies that she's the necromancer of the archetype. I'll admit that I like her stats. Hell Beast seems like nothing more than a wall and Synchro food. Reanimated Mage reminds me of Quillbolt Hedgehog, but fetching a used Spell sounds nice. Dragon King weakens itself when it's revived, but I suppose that balances it out. It's nothing more than a pseudo-immortal beatstick though. Reanimated Angel is awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted July 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 [quote name='Phantom Roxas' timestamp='1310613889' post='5353360'] It doesn't need another effect. Being a Tuner more than makes up for that, and there are plenty of cards that share effects, although those just tend to be direct attacks or piercing. Angel of Hope is fun to spam, and works as the other requirement for Werewolf Angel. Calling Linda "The Reanimator" is pointless when you could just make her name "Reanimated Linda" or something that implies that she's the necromancer of the archetype. I'll admit that I like her stats. Hell Beast seems like nothing more than a wall and Synchro food. Reanimated Mage reminds me of Quillbolt Hedgehog, but fetching a used Spell sounds nice. Dragon King weakens itself when it's revived, but I suppose that balances it out. It's nothing more than a pseudo-immortal beatstick though. Reanimated Angel is awesome. [/quote] +rep Thank you for the great review Card updates coming soon... aiming for a few spell and traps next round.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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