MibeR Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 [center]Yes July 12th was my birthday. I want to Celebrate it! Goals Get Min 19+rep (I kidding myself, there's nothing that can be happening) Get Min 19 Comments Why 19? Thats my Age now D-Hero FTW! Y know, Dragoon need some Rivals also a partner. [img]http://img215.imageshack.us/img215/681/203203g.jpg[/img] [i]1 DARK monsters + 1 or more Destiny HERO monsters When this card is Fusion Summoned: banish all Fusion Material Monsters used for Fusion Summon this card to reduce this card's ATK equal to the half of the combined ATK of all banished monsters. Once per turn: You can add 1 "HERO" Trap Card from your Graveyard to your hand; reduce this card's ATK by 500 points. Whenever this card's ATK become 0: You can destroy cards on the field up to the number of cards in your hand; your opponent takes 500 damage for each card destroyed. [s]You can only activate this effect once per duel[/s]. This card cannot be destroyed by battle if its ATK is 1000 or less (Damage Calculation is applied normally). Whenever you Summon "HERO" monster while this card's ATK is 0: Target that monster; increase the ATK of this card equal to the targeted monster's ATK +300 (permanently)[/i].[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 Happy (early) 19th Maha! (It's the 11th over in U.S.) As for your card... [quote][b]When this card is Fusion Summoned: banish all Fusion Material Monsters used for Fusion Summon this card to reduce this card's ATK equal to the half of the combined ATK of all banished monsters.[/b] Once per turn: You can add 1 "HERO" Trap Card from your Graveyard to your hand; reduce this card's ATK by 500 points. Whenever this card's ATK become 0: You can destroy cards on the field up to the number of cards in your hand; your opponent takes 500 damage for each card destroyed. You can only activate this effect once per duel. This card cannot be destroyed by battle if its ATK is 1000 or less (Damage Calculation is applied normally). [b]Whenever you Summon "HERO" monster while this card's ATK is 0: Target that monster; increase the ATK of this card equal to the targeted monster's ATK +300 (permanently).[/b][/quote] The bold points are the points that I want to cover. First off, I like the idea of this card, but if for the first effect, you used both D-HERO Dreadmaster and D-HERO Dogma? Dogma was 3400 ATK right off the bat, and Dreadmaster's ATK varies according to the total ATK of all other D-HERO monsters on the field. If both Dogma and Dreadmaster were out on the field (which is hard to get, but I am just using it as an example), that totals out to 6800 ATK when this card is Fusion Summoned. Half is 3400 ATK, so Underworld Agent gets all of his effects, since he only has 2400 ATK to start off with. To me, that seems a bit harsh to do that to your opponent. Of course, that is a worst case scenario, but if this card were real, it would be the undeniable truth that people will abuse this card's effect with that same strategy. Second, if you wanted to keep the effect of destroying the field according to Hand Size, then why would you go an add an effect that [b]increases[/b] attack? Sure D-HEROs can't swarm THAT fast and they don't have that great of ATK/DEF, but once Underworld Agent goes back above 1000, he's vulnerable to attack again. And about the destruction effect (I don't want you to change your card or anything, but this is what I would do), I would get rid of the once-per-duel limitation, and replace it with another cost, like reducing the ATK of all face-up monsters you control to 0. Again, I know this card is special, and I wouldn't want you to change it, but I would at least change that effect. OCG looks good, artwork is vey detailed. I like. Breakdown: 8/10 - Concept and originality 9/10 - OCG 9/10 - Artwork Total: 8.66/10 (Near-Perfect) BTW: FIRST! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 "you can destroy cards on the field up to the number of cards in your hand; your opponent takes 500 damage for each card destroyed. You can only activate this effect once per duel" That's a little bit like Chaos Emperor Dragon's effect, though it's more balanced not likely you'll burn your opponent more than 1500, so it should be fine "Whenever you Summon "HERO" monster while this card's ATK is 0: Target that monster; increase the ATK of this card equal to the targeted monster's ATK +300 (permanently)" <---and here I wouldn't make it permanent 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 Thank you both Devil and Rags. Yes, i appreciate your detailed comments. As for once per duel, it is fair enough for me since it can both destroy and burn. So i wouldnt change it, Why i choose permanent? So in order to keep this card useful when its MAJOR effect is activated. If i wouldnt make it permanent then this card is trash in the field, without able to attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZombieDeath98 Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 Wow. Now that's what i call a balanced yet powerful card! Great addition to the D-Heroes and the Picture's not that bad either. Here's a full 10/10, especially since it's your birthday Also here's a rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 Thank you Zombie. Because i luv D-Hero ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexandros002 Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 Well, since HEROes have started to become one and the same, I would say change the + 1 or more Destiny HERO Monsters to + 1 or more HERO Monsters otherwise it's awesome 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 HERO monster? Then we can use E-Hero for this. I keep it that way, btw thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightmare Moon Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 [font=Arial]Happy Birthday, Maha! ^^ *hugs* Great card you have there, dude. And since it's your birthday, I shall give thee a +Rep! ^^ And again, happy birthday. Hope you have fun. [/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexandros002 Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 oh i forgot to say happy b day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OmegaWave Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 [center][size="6"][b]First of all, Happy 19th Birthday[/b][/size] [b](OCG Fix)[/b] 1 DARK monster + 1 or more "Destiny HERO" monsters The Fusion Material Monsters used to Fusion Summon this card are banished instead of being sent to the Graveyard and this card's ATK becomes equal to half the combined ATK of the banished monsters. Once per turn, you can have this card lose 500 ATK to add 1 "HERO" Trap Card from your Graveyard to your hand. Once per duel if this card's ATK is 0, you can destroy cards on the field equal to the number of cards in your hand. Your opponent takes 500 damage for each card destroyed by this effect. If this card's ATK is 1000 or less, it cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card's ATK is 0, when you Summon a "HERO" monster, you can select it. This card gains ATK equal to half the ATK of the selected monster + 300. I hope this is what you were going for, because the wording was a bit confusing. If the first effect is correct, it would be a better idea for the monster to have 0 ATK, since monsters with variable ATK effects tend to have 0 ATK by default. [b](Review)[/b] OCG: 2/4 Picture: 3/4 Balance: 3/4 Total: 8/12 (Divided by 3): 2.66/4 = C+ [b](Rant)[/b] I gave a 2/4 on OCG because your OCG was both outdated and confusing. However, it looked like you were trying, so I gave you effort points. The picture looks okay, not bad, not good. It's alright, albeit being pixelated in some spots. Unfortunately for you, I removed the "Uniqueness" portion of my review, since few people ever make "Unique" cards. However, this effect is quite interesting. If I still had a rating for uniqueness, you would've gotten a higher score. At first, I thought this card was a little much. However, when my common sense kicked in, I thought otherwise. This card's highest possible starting ATK is 3500 (Raviel, Lord of Phantasms + Destiny Hero Dogma). That's perfectly fine, since running Raviel in a D-Hero deck simply for this purpose would be a horrible idea due to the possibility of a dead draw. It's second effect has few targets: - Change of HERO: Reflector Ray - HERO Barrier - HERO Blast - HERO Counterattack - HERO Signal Which are all E. Hero supports.......so it's not helping you much unless you run an E./D. HERO hybrid deck. It's mass destruction effect seems a little much, though. I'd take out the burn damage. Its battle destruction immunity is alright. Its last effect is also fine, since cards that "target" are easily countered, and HERO monsters tend to have low ATK besides Fusions anyway, so you wouldn't gain much, even with the +300. So, thinking about it, this card's only GOOD use is for field destruction, and that's limited. I actually wouldn't run this. It's to much effort to summon and maintain, honestly.[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 lololololol, you think that this card can rival Dragoon? Lets see, bad first effect (since nobody would want to banish D-HEROES from the Grave), bad searching effect (because even old-school D-HERO decks don't run the archtype trap cards), mediocre burn effect, okay battle protection effect, and a mandatory effect that doesn't even match with the point of the card, which is ATK reduction and gaining effects from it. So yeah, this card wouldn't rival Dragoon in any way. Happy b-day anyways. [quote name='OmegaWave' timestamp='1310473851' post='5347750'] [center][b](OCG Fix)[/b] 1 DARK monster + 1 or more "Destiny HERO" monsters The Fusion Material Monsters used to Fusion Summon this card are banished instead of being sent to the Graveyard and this card's ATK becomes equal to half the combined ATK of the banished monsters. Once per turn, you can have this card lose 500 ATK to add 1 "HERO" Trap Card from your Graveyard to your hand. Once per duel if this card's ATK is 0, you can destroy cards on the field equal to the number of cards in your hand. Your opponent takes 500 damage for each card destroyed by this effect. If this card's ATK is 1000 or less, it cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card's ATK is 0, when you Summon a "HERO" monster, you can select it. This card gains ATK equal to half the ATK of the selected monster + 300. I gave a 2/4 on OCG because your OCG was both outdated and confusing. However, it looked like you were trying, so I gave you effort points.[/center] [/quote] Get with the freaking times Omega, this is the NEW OCG that was introduced with Problem Solving Text, by Konami. So don't go fixing OCG when it's already correct, kay? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 Thank you everyone for your comment. This one made me win contest. So yeah, But i think i'd change. What if i added Spell? and thinking something add banished card return to Grave? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 Major bumping Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 14, 2011 Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 Happy late Birthday, thought id contribut to the goal of getting 19 comments, oh and the card, holy cow, at first i didn't know where it was going and then everything changed, plus, its not really overpowered, cause your bound to take damage while lowering his ATK. Thirdly, since you said the ATK lowering effect can only be used once per duel, the adding effect is great to help keep it useful, and finally, great pic. I rate 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 14, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2011 thank you ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 Idk about HEROS, the only one I remember is Elemental hero Clayman. lol (just a thought) do you think increasing the ATK by the level x300 would be better or worse than copying ATK +300? (plz don't change, just something to think about :3) p.s only 2 more posts to reach your goal!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 No i need 14 more reps XD, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 18, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2011 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2011 BUMPIDITY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2011 BUMP90X Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted July 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 Hello anybody Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 23, 2011 Report Share Posted July 23, 2011 if you just add a support here there'll be the activity, Maha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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