necromancer908 Posted August 15, 2011 Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 Hey guys. This is my first archtype so i want to know what you guys think. All criticism is appreciated! <pre class="prettyprint">[color="#666600"][[/color][color="#000000"]spoiler[/color][color="#666600"]=[/color][color="#000000"] Monsters [/color][color="#666600"]][/color][color="#000000"] [color="#666600"][img]http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/9082/469544.jpg[/img][/color][/color][color="#666600"][img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/9082/469544.jpg[/img][img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/9082/469544.jpg[/img][img]http://img822.imageshack.us/img822/9082/469544.jpg[/img][img]http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/9082/469544.jpg[/img][/[/color][color="#000000"]spoiler[/color][color="#666600"]][/color]</pre><pre class="prettyprint">[color="#666600"][spoiler= Spells] [img]http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/1395/469544r.jpg[/img][img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/9082/469544.jpg[/img] [img]http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/9082/469544.jpg[/img][img]http://img571.imageshack.us/img571/9082/469544.jpg[/img][img]http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/8593/469544h.jpg[/img][/spoiler][/color]</pre><pre class="prettyprint">[color="#666600"][[color="#000000"]spoiler[/color]=[color="#000000"] Traps [/color]][color="#000000"] [color="#666600"][img]http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/9082/469544.jpg[/img][/color][/color][img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/9082/469544.jpg[/img][img]http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/9082/469544.jpg[/img][img]http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/9082/469544.jpg[/img][img]http://img853.imageshack.us/img853/9082/469544.jpg[/img][/[color="#000000"]spoiler[/color]][/color]Again criticism is appreciated. (Im kinda iffy on some of the cards.) and thanks to JazinKay for amazing images.Thanks!</pre> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blackscorpion Posted August 15, 2011 Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 First of all your first card of SKELETON is awesome. good try..but Inferno wall is just too powerful.here the changing:-[color=#666600][color=#000000] [/color][/color] [color=#666600][color=#000000][color=#666600]you can only active this card when your opponent declare attack destroy all monsters on your opponents side of the field that are in face up[/color][/color][/color] attack position. this card is similar to [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Mirror_Force"]http://yugioh.wikia....ki/Mirror_Force[/url] but this card is banned..there are many mistakes like this you have to take care of.like summon guardian/warrior you should have to pay life points to do this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 15, 2011 Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 Skeletoken you need to put an alternative in case your opponent has no cards in his/her hand Prototype Cerberus you shouldn't halve the atk PERMANENTLY Inferno Wall is little more than Mirror Force + a little burn, it's unimpressive Tainted Trap Hole is basically like Change of Heart, just slightly more specific, so it's OPed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
necromancer908 Posted August 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 I edited this but i didnt mean to post this thread. how do i delete it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 15, 2011 Report Share Posted August 15, 2011 Tainted Trap Hole is like Intercept, so IMO it's not Oped @blackscorpion : Mirror Force isn't Banned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 16, 2011 Report Share Posted August 16, 2011 [quote name='Cyrus Angelius' timestamp='1313445861' post='5445839'] Tainted Trap Hole is like Intercept, so IMO it's not Oped @blackscorpion : Mirror Force isn't Banned [/quote] why not? Even Change of Heart doesn't allow PERMANENT control Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nede Posted August 16, 2011 Report Share Posted August 16, 2011 Just check, it allows you TO control it PERMANENTLY [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Intercept"]http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Intercept[/url] but maybe this card it's a bit Oped because "2000 ATK or higher" monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 16, 2011 Report Share Posted August 16, 2011 [quote name='Cyrus Angelius' timestamp='1313480087' post='5446656'] Just check, it allows you TO control it PERMANENTLY [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Intercept"]http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Intercept[/url] but maybe this card it's a bit Oped because "2000 ATK or higher" monster [/quote] yeah that one is more versatile because it's ANY lv5 or higher yes there aren't too many lv4 with 2000 or more base atk, but still Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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