Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 [center][center]Both cards are exactly the same, just different artwork. I'm leaning towards the first one, but I'll hear your opinions first. [spoiler=Demon of the Ashes] [img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/DemonoftheAshes1.png[/img][img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/DemonoftheAshes2.png[/img] Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Special Summoned by its own effect. You can Special Summon this card from (your hand) by Banishing 1 DARK monster and 1 FIRE monster in your Graveyard. You can Special Summon this card (from your Graveyard) by Banishing 1 DARK monster and 1 FIRE monster from your Deck. This monster's attribute is also treated as FIRE. Once per turn if this monster destroys another monster by battle: You can discard 1 DARK monster from your hand and send 1 FIRE monster from your Deck to the Graveyared; draw 1 card. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Chaos Frost] [img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/ChaosFrost.png[/img] Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Special Summoned by its own effect. You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by Banishing 1 DARK monster and 1 WATER monster from your Graveyard. You can Special summon this card (from your Graveyard) by Discarding 1 DARK and 1 WATER monster from your hand. This card's Attribute is also treated as WATER. Once per turn: You can Banish 1 DARK or WATER monster from your Graveyard; Destroy 1 card on the field. Any battle damage in a battle involving this card during the turn it activated its effect is reduced to 0. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Destroyer Stag] [img]http://i472.photobucket.com/albums/rr84/Metagross386/Yugioh/DestroyerStag.jpg[/img] Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Special Summoned by its own effect. You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by Banishing 1 DARK monster and 1 EARTH monster in your hand. You can Special Summon this card (from your Graveyard) by returning 1 DARK and 1 EARTH monster on your side of the field to your hand. This card's Attribute is also treated as EARTH. Once per turn: You can discard 1 DARK or EARTH monster from your hand; Destroy 1 monster your opponent controls whose DEF is lower than this cards original ATK. This card's ATK is halve during the turn it activates it's effect. [/spoiler] Oh, and I'm also iffy on the second Special Summon clause. I wanted to actually be used more than Simorghs, but I'm not sure if what I did was good or not.[/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raine Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 [s]I hate them! And I hate you! And their stupid! Because your stupid![/s] There pretty good, i don't think their OP because you still need to accommodate the FIRE attribute part and last time I checked their isn't a huge amount of FIRE staples. By banishing from the deck though seems kind of fast, maybe something like from the graveyard would make it slightly more balanced in terms of speed. 4I/3O.5 (DAMMIT! I NEED TO LEARN NUMBERS!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted August 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 Yeah that's why I was iffy on the second summon part, but my reasoning was that the most prominent FIRE decks are Flamvell and Laval, all of which like to be in the Graveyard.Oh, and if this gets good feedback I'll try my hand at the remaining attributes, WATER and EARTH Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Metallium Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 OMG!!!! 9/10 awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted August 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 [quote name='METALMAXIMAL' timestamp='1314290292' post='5467837'] OMG!!!! 9/10 awesome [/quote] Tells me absolutely nothing. Why a 9 and not a 10 or 0? I need CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, not "COOL CARDS BRO!" Sorry if I sound like an ass, but that's my PoV Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 Seems like a cool tech in Flamvell Zombies? Provides a 2300 beat and a mill engine + draw enigine of sorts? Like the concept. With Birdman it can make Locomotion which is also a nice bonus to the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 [s]COOL CARDS BRO![/s] Nice. Everone else said everything though. And for artwork, I like the first one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 awww...nothing to say that raine didn't...however I love both pics, but like the cartoonish one on the left better...would be wicked if you made them LV's. nice job! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 I guess it could be used in Flamvell Zombies. Since TourSan plays are so easy, you can easily banish Firedog and something, then go for Leviair and return 1 of the monsters you banished to Summon it + get a card from Sangan if you play by TCG rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted August 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 Cards were based off of Chaos Sorcerer and Dark Simorgh, so I didn't think making them levels would be good :/ I just looked for pics and found these two that both seemed to suit the card. I'm working on a WATER version right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 The parentheses in the effect text regarding Special Summons are interesting. I don't think I've seen that on any other card but I don't want to call it an error since you're clearly trying to indicate where the card is being summoned from. I also believe these are the 1st cards I've seen to use "Banish" in the text rather than "Remove from play" again I don't want to call this an error because "Banished" is a generally accepted term amongst the playerbase. Moving past OCG I'd like to say i found the artwork on the cards quite cool to look at. Did you draw them yourself? I love their comboability with Flamvells and alot of other sets. 9.5/10 just shy of perfection. If I had so suggest anything it would be (and i hate being petty like this) some slight adjustment to the OCG in the places I mentioned. And that'd be it. Excellent cards man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted August 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 New OCG format dude. RFG has become banish and those parenthesis are added as well. Look at the new OCG topic that pinned here. Thanks for the comment though. And as said in my sig, I do not do my own art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The D.M. Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 [quote name='Miror B.' timestamp='1314312978' post='5468731'] New OCG format dude. RFG has become banish and those parenthesis are added as well. Look at the new OCG topic that pinned here. Thanks for the comment though. And as said in my sig, I do not do my own art. [/quote] Ah. That's entirely my bad. I admittedly haven't been keeping up with OCG changes since Zexal (if that's what it is now) That being the case i can find nothing wrong with the cards. 10/10 (lol there goes my credibility as a card rater xD) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nathanael D. Striker Posted August 25, 2011 Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 [i]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Special Summoned by its own effect. You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by banishing 1 DARK monster and 1 FIRE monster in your Graveyard. You can Special Summon this card (from your Graveyard) by banishing 1 DARK monster and 1 FIRE monster from your Deck. This monster's attribute is also treated as FIRE. Once per turn, if this monster destroys another monster by battle: You can discard 1 DARK monster from your hand and send 1 FIRE monster from your Deck to the Graveyard; draw 1 card.[/i] I did a bit of nitpicking, but OCG was fine. Great card Miror. I agree with some of the others on the uses and such. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted August 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2011 Well, with the good feedback I posted I decided to add the WATER chaos that I've been working on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 26, 2011 Report Share Posted August 26, 2011 only thing is I don't get why you didn't say Chaos Frost is also treated as a WATER monster beyond that I don't see anything wrong with them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted August 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 26, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1314340840' post='5469843'] only thing is I don't get why you didn't say Chaos Frost is also treated as a WATER monster [/quote] It did in my mind >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted August 26, 2011 Report Share Posted August 26, 2011 coughblueblackcontrolreferencecough good card is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 27, 2011 Report Share Posted August 27, 2011 [quote name='Miror B.' timestamp='1314362124' post='5470080'] It did in my mind >_> [/quote] ok now I can see the change to that lore, so now you get the 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted August 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2011 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Toffee. Posted August 30, 2011 Report Share Posted August 30, 2011 Chaos Frost would be incredible in a Frog.dek that just-so-happens to main the infamous 3x Tour Guide + Sangan. Considering Frogs can mill themselves efficiently, and DARKs already live off self-milling and what-not, Chaos Frost would pretty much be gg the turn you summon it. (Regardless of it being un-able to deal battle damage) [quote name='Miror B.' timestamp='1314718512' post='5479468'] [image] [/quote] Made me LOL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ieyasu Tokugawa Posted August 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2011 ...Is that good or bad about Frost? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted August 30, 2011 Report Share Posted August 30, 2011 [quote name='Miror B.' timestamp='1314719343' post='5479481'] ...Is that good or bad about Frost? [/quote] IMO, that's a good thing. If Frost can end up with an engine that can let him function like another DAD or JD, while still being balanced, then its a great design overall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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