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This is the fourth archetype for my upcoming booster pack. I decided to have them be centered around placing themselves face-up in the deck. Please rate!!! Constructive criticism is welcome.

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Lore: This monster cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by it's own effect. During the battle phase, if their is a face-up monster on top of your deck you can increase this card's attack by the defense of the monster, for the battle phase only. If this card is removed from the field, place it face-up on top of your deck and shuffle your deck. During either player's standby phase, if this card is face-up on top of your deck, you may discard one card to special summon it.

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Lore: If this card is removed from the field, place it face-up on top of your deck and shuffle your deck. During the standby phase, if this card is face-up on top of your deck, you can remove this card from play to summon "Ultimate Clock-Rex" from your hand or deck, ignoring summoning conditions.

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Lore: If this card is removed from the field, place it face-up on top of your deck and shuffle your deck. During the standby phase, if this card is face-up on top of your deck, you can destroy one "Clockwork" monster you control to inflict damage to your opponent's life points equal to the destroyed monster's level x200.

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Lore: If this card is removed from the field, place it face-up on top of your deck and shuffle your deck. During the standby phase, if this card is face-up on top of your deck, you can destroy one "Clockwork" monster you control to destroy an opponent's monster whose DEF is lower than the destroyed monster's DEF.

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Lore: If this card is removed from the field, place it face-up on top of your deck and shuffle your deck. During the standby phase, if this card is face-up on top of your deck, you can discard a card to special summon this monster. During the standby phase, you can select one face-up monster in your deck and place it on top of the deck (face-up). This card cannot attack the turn you activate this effect.

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Lore: If this card is removed from the field, place it face-up on top of your deck and shuffle your deck. During the standby phase, if this card is face-up on top of your deck, you can send it to the graveyard to send face-up monster in your deck to the top of your deck. During the standby phase, you can tribute this face-up monster to send one face-up monster in your deck to the top of your deck.

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Lore: If this card is removed from the field, place it face-up on top of your deck and shuffle your deck. During the standby phase, if this card is face-up on top of your deck, you can tribute a face-up "Clockwork" monster to gain life points equal to that monster's defense points. You can tribute this face-up monster to gain 1800 life points.

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Lore: If this card is removed from the field, place it face-up on top of your deck and shuffle your deck. During the standby phase, if this card is face-up on top of your deck, you can select look at your opponent's hand and select one card: destroy it.

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Lore: If this card is removed from the field, place it face-up on top of your deck and shuffle your deck. During the standby phase, if this card is face-up on top of your deck, you can tribute a face-up "Clockwork" monster to view two of your opponent's face-down cards. Tribute this face-up monster to view three of your opponent's face-down cards.

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Clockwork Hunter, it's a Synchro needs a requirement, and how does Clockwork Hunter place it in face-up in the top of your Deck? Clockwork Hunter is in the Extra Deck, not the Deck.

And for the OCG fixes, it should be Deck not deck, and it should be Standy Phase not standby phase, and graveyard should be Graveyard,

Send it to the top of your Deck? I think its "you can
tribute this face-up monster to
add 1 face-up monster in your Deck and place it in the top of your Deck"

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