MibeR Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 [center][center][img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/2130/humanoidcoresuitmare.png[/img][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][i]When this card is targeted for an attack by a Xyz Monster: You can pay up to 1000 Life Points; add the same amount you paid to this card's ATK, until the End Phase. Once per turn: You can detach all Xyz Materials attached to a face-up Xyz Monster on the field; both players draw 1 card for each Materials detached. When this card is destroyed: Reveal the top 3 cards from your Deck and send 1 card among them to the Graveyard, then return the rest into its original position; both players cannot Xyz Summon until your opponent next End Phase.[/i][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][i]CnC is appreciated. and a rep also get a rep in return ^^[/i][/center][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 Looks balanced to me, and OCG also (as always). Good stats, drawing your opponent in for attacks. Good job as always Syns. Liking the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marco Polo Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 Too 'hardcore', it's just not stable enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 Wow, I haven't played with Xyz yet, but this one looks a super anti card, since Xyz effecs are around their materials this is just a suggestion, but wouldn't be a little more balanced if you lowered the card atk a little by every material removed? or made it level 5, but this is just a suggestion, I do not find this as an error in your card but in anyway the card looks pretty flawless to me, nice work \o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
â–¼AlcaNdeRâ–¼ Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 I don't like the second effect, you get the Xyz Materials removed and still you draw cards too? I just don't like it, some Xyz are destroyed if they don't have Xyz Materials like "Utopia" not to mention that most Xyz are useless without their Materials; I say you add another drawback or make it Level 5 like Touya said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted September 11, 2011 Report Share Posted September 11, 2011 major anti-Xyz effect you got there personally though, for the draw effect, that should be given only to your opponent, not you as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted September 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2011 Making Level 5 is too slow IMO, i dunno if it is balanced enough. But yeah, this is super anti Xyz. and only working against Xyz. And the material detached sometimes also support our Xyz like Gem Knight Pearl, which the Xyz materials is not used. For now, i keep it as it is. I will make change if someone make me do it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pimp_7 Posted September 12, 2011 Report Share Posted September 12, 2011 It have too many effects, besides they are good. Maybe if you focus just in 1 of these effects, people wouldn't think this card is overpowered. Specialy the detach effect. Like AlcaNdeR said, some XYZ are destroyed without materials, or are just useless... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted September 12, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 12, 2011 [quote name='Syns' timestamp='1315794755' post='5508872'] Making Level 5 is too slow IMO. This is super anti Xyz. and [b][size=5]only working against Xyz[/size][/b]. And the material detached sometimes also support our Xyz like Gem Knight Pearl, which the Xyz materials is not used. [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiina Posted September 12, 2011 Report Share Posted September 12, 2011 Very nice card. I'm making my contest entry card into a topic in the finished sets forum. There aren't many ways to stop and Xyz. Need more ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pimp_7 Posted September 12, 2011 Report Share Posted September 12, 2011 Syns: "Making Level 5 is too slow IMO. This is super anti Xyz. and [b][size=5]only working against Xyz[/size][/b]. And the material detached sometimes also support our Xyz like Gem Knight Pearl, which the Xyz materials is not used." Very soon everyone will be using XYZ. The intention of Konami is to substitute Synchros for them. So this is what I was worrying about...maybe, very soon this card will be overpowered. But anyway, I liked the card, especially the detach effect. All of us could focus on cards with similary effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted September 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 [quote name='pimp_7' timestamp='1315869916' post='5510614'] Very soon everyone will be using XYZ. The intention of Konami is to substitute Synchros for them. So this is what I was worrying about...maybe, very soon this card will be overpowered. But anyway, I liked the card, especially the detach effect. All of us could focus on cards with similary effects [/quote] i know, but Synchro is also used nowadays. what i tend to do is make an anti-Xyz, that is, thanks for leaving a comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NumberCruncher Posted September 13, 2011 Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 [quote name='Syns' timestamp='1315762345' post='5507404'][center][center][img]http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/2130/humanoidcoresuitmare.png[/img][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][i]When this card is targeted for an attack by a Xyz Monster: You can pay up to 1000 Life Points; add the same amount you paid to this card's ATK, until the End Phase. Once per turn: You can detach all Xyz Materials attached to a face-up Xyz Monster on the field; both players draw 1 card for each Materials detached. When this card is destroyed: Reveal the top 3 cards from your Deck and send 1 card among them to the Graveyard, then return the rest into [b]their[/b] original position;[b] Neither player may [/b]Xyz Summon until your opponent next End Phase.[/i][/center][/center] [center][center] [/center][/center] [center][center][i]CnC is appreciated. and a rep also get a rep in return ^^[/i][/center][/center][/quote] Other than that, like the card. Creative and balance 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MibeR Posted September 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2011 Thank you bro ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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