Yu-Gi-Oh! Climax Crisis [PG-16]

[.Nu-13]

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So, it's my first serious fanfic attempt. Saying in advance, English is not my primary language, so there might some little errors every now and then, but they shouldn't make the reading harder or anything. I'll try to update every Friday, maybe more often if I manage to. And saying in advance, fic will contain a romantic plot.

[spoiler=Prologue]
[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]„...wait, you're kidding, right?”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]„No. Why would I?”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Two voices sounded across a long, pitch-black hall. A single person was walking down it, slowly, their footsteps could be easily picked up in the silence broken only by the conversation and silent whirring sound that was following the man. The hallway was narrow enough that every now and then, a sound of clothing rubbing on the walls could be heard. After a moment, it stopped, implying the corridor was getting wider.[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]„Because it's stupid, immoral, and most important of all, impossible.”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]„Silence!”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]The man shouted in anger at the second voice. Each step he took, the corridor was getting lighter and lighter, thanks to big, glowing tubes filled with some strange liquid that surely wasn't water. Each of them had an number of wires coming out of it and sinking in the ground. The amount and density of tubes was getting bigger and bigger the further in the hallway the person advanced. Details on man's clothing and were getting clearer and clearer. He was wearing a red, leather coat, full of various golden ornaments, and under it, a snow-white shirt, with its top buttons opened, revealing the top part of man's chest. A golden necklace in a weird shape that looked a cross with the ends of its horizontal arm pointing up, and a sharply-ended vertical arm, was hanging from his neck. The mysterious man held his hands in pockets of his black trousers. However, his entire face was covered by something that looked like a bandage, leaving only two small holes for his eyes, which had red irises.[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]„I'm just stating facts.”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]„Then I'll prove you wrong.”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]„Face it. You're not God. Either way, why are you doing this in first place?”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]„Revenge.”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]The man's eyes squinted, face under the bandage probably twisting into a grimace expression. His voice tone got very sharp and blunt. Clearly, he was holding a great grudge against someone, for some reason.[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]„Revenge? Wait, you mean, that kid was involved in...the incident?”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]„Yes...it was all their fault...”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Finally, the hallway was fully lit, thanks to large amount of tubes sitting next to walls, not leaving even a single centimeter between each other. Finally, one could see a metallic ball with one big, blue, glowing eye, attached to a rail under the ceiling. The little robot continued the conversation.[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]„Are you sure? I mean, they don't seem too dangerous...”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]„Don't let appearances mislead you. Something is sitting in that child. Something powerful, something beyond our comprehension...”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]„I'm getting scared of you. You don't have morals or limits at all.”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]„I lost them when „it” happened. I'll never forget that day...it marked me for my entire life...now all I seek is revenge!”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]„Well, I won't dwell more. You seem really dedicated to this. So, have any plan how will you do it?”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]„In fact, I do.”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]„Well, then I'd love to hear it.”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]„It's none of your business what is it.”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]After those words, the man reached end of corridor, and stood in front of big, white iron door, bearing a gold symbol looking exactly like man's necklace. Next to them, on the wall, was sitting a small device. The man raised his hand, and laid it on it. After a few seconds, a voice sounded.[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]“Handprint analysis complete. Opening the door.”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]The metallic gate opened itself slowly, making grinding noises. Man slowly stepped inside. It was a small, round room, completely empty, except for a single tube, similar to the other ones. The man stood there, and stared at it.[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]“So...it's here?”

“Yes.”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]“You can still give up on this plan.”[/font]

[font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]“I never will, until I take my vengenace. Now, begin the search...”[/font]
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[Blake]

You try a little too hard with description, but it's not too bad =3

Can't wait to see more.

[.Nu-13]

Honestly, I'd rather do too much, than too little.

[Not-so-Radiant Arin]

[quote name='-Makoto-' timestamp='1324097479' post='5712148']
Honestly, I'd rather do too much, than too little.
[/quote]

Just don't go overboard with it.

[quote]Unless one character had purple dreadlocks and the other a green afro, character description is just going to be another unnecessary detail.[/quote]

And of course, what makes me so popular amongst the Fan-Fiction forum...

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I'll post a full review (Devil's Advocate's "Heartfelt" Review) once you put up the first Chapter. I usually don't do prologues.