kevin7653 Posted December 22, 2011 Report Share Posted December 22, 2011 this is just an idea i had constructive feed back welcome [img]http://img542.imageshack.us/img542/6280/218546.jpg[/img] lore: This card cannot be special summoned.The third turn this card was summoned to the field change its name to Blue-Eyes White Dragon Baby and raise its level 2 and raise ATK 500 and DEF 300.The eighth turn this card was summoned to the field change this card name to Blue-Eyes White Dragon and raise this cards level 5 and raise this cards ATK 2400 and DEF 2000. hope you like it THREE MORE DAYS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted December 22, 2011 Report Share Posted December 22, 2011 Utterly unintelligible and useless anyway. 8 turns for a vanilla Blue-Eyes? You have got to be kidding me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Resident Fascist Posted December 22, 2011 Report Share Posted December 22, 2011 will die by the next turn. Suffers from great moth syndrome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted December 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2011 well i tried it was just an idea any way to improve it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted December 22, 2011 Report Share Posted December 22, 2011 To be honest, it's a redundant concept. Dragon Ravine/FuFu/Foolish Burial + REDRUM does the exact same thing in 1/8 the time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted December 22, 2011 Report Share Posted December 22, 2011 Ooh, here's an idea! I can summon this when I've already got another monster on the field, then Tribute both for a Blue-Eyes the next turn! That's more than twice as fast! [I hate to say this, but herp derp] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted December 22, 2011 Report Share Posted December 22, 2011 This is pointless. The great moth summoning is actually better due to a reasonable defence stat (though also pointless). With cards like Future Fusion, REDMD, Dragon Reincarnation, Monster Reborn, Eclipse Wyvern and White Stone around there is no need to include such a vulnerable card. If you had made it a card which was special summoned by tributing White Stone, then when it is destroyed you can special a blue eyes from hand or deck it would have been a bit better, though also unlikely to be ran due to all the previously mentioned cards. Edit: Can't forget decoy dragon XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted December 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2011 what if i add an effect that this card cant be destroyed by a monster with more than a thousand atk points unless if this cards name is blue eyes white dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted December 22, 2011 Report Share Posted December 22, 2011 Still pointless really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted December 22, 2011 Report Share Posted December 22, 2011 [quote name='kevin7653' timestamp='1324569478' post='5723198'] what if i add an effect that this card cant be destroyed by a monster with more than a thousand atk points unless if this cards name is blue eyes white dragon [/quote] That still doesn't buff this card. You can still destroy it with card effects, or with any monster with less than 1000 ATK. Don't bother; this card is useless. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted December 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2011 well i tried and really how many cards hve less then 1000 atk that can possibly destroect add an eff and what if i add an effect that lets this card tribute summon any level 5 or above card with one less tribute Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted December 22, 2011 Report Share Posted December 22, 2011 Just adding effect after effect isn't the solution. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted December 22, 2011 Report Share Posted December 22, 2011 This card seems severly underpowered as most cards in the current game do not stay out longer than 3 turns (unless your against a bad player, or your dominating). I would much rather just run a regular blue eyes and normal summon it. Just a suggestion, but maybe make it "During the 3rd Standby Phase that this card is face-up you can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Blue Eyes White Dragon" from your hand or Deck." It would still be a little bit underpowered but there isn't really much more I can suggest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 22, 2011 Report Share Posted December 22, 2011 at 3 turns, I'm unsure if it'll even last on the field for that long and even then the raising of the stats is too weak for the 8 turn effect, that's WAY too long, will never get there not to mention Blue Eyes is only a vanilla, if you're going to do that, at least give it an effect for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted December 22, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2011 what if i add an effdect that when you trubute 500-1000 life points this card gains 1000 atk and def or that when this card is summoned you may tribute 100-1500 life points and for every 100 life point tributed this card gains 100atk and def Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stan Alda Posted December 22, 2011 Report Share Posted December 22, 2011 [quote name='kevin7653' timestamp='1324584135' post='5723636'] what if i add an effdect that when you trubute 500-1000 life points this card gains 1000 atk and def or that when this card is summoned you may tribute 100-1500 life points and for every 100 life point tributed this card gains 100atk and def [/quote] You're missing the point. The concept of the card is flawed, and is outclassed by all sorts of other strategies, even with all these effects you're suggesting. The two effects are roughly the same anyway, and both are useless. Neither will make it more survivable. I suggest just abandoning this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 22, 2011 Report Share Posted December 22, 2011 [quote name='kevin7653' timestamp='1324584135' post='5723636'] what if i add an effdect that when you trubute 500-1000 life points this card gains 1000 atk and def or that when this card is summoned you may tribute 100-1500 life points and for every 100 life point tributed this card gains 100atk and def [/quote] I don't see how that'd even work the point is you're just trying to get a vanilla out, and that's just not worth it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 I suddenly felt too lazy to read the above comments to detail, but I'll tell you this: Casual Blue Eyes Decks (even the ones that don't use Red Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon) are still capable of Special Summoning Blue Eyes every turn. Sometimes even more than one copy of it. Your card is way too weak for a Blue Eyes Deck. Here's an idea of a similar but different approach: Level 1/ 200 ATK/ 400 DEF [b]You can banish this face-up card. Once per turn: Place 1 Grow Counter on this banished card (max 7). By removing 1 Grow Counter on it during either player's turn, while banished: Reduce 1 damage to 0. During your Main Phase: you can remove all Grow Counters on this card and return it to the field with 1 more Level, 400 more ATK, and 300 more DEF, for each Grow Counter removed this way.[/b] ^it somewhat serves a purpose while growing, and it's a lot harder to disrupt (not that your opponent would need to. Other suggestions include: Make it Special Summon-able. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 ^Then you'd have a completely unrelated card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 [quote name='gimmepie' timestamp='1324624579' post='5724940'] ^Then you'd have a completely unrelated card. [/quote] It's not "completely unrelated" as it still addresses the idea of a small egg gradually growing into Blue Eyes, but I see what you mean. Also, let's face it, original card is kinda, unplayable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 [quote name='~Applejack~' timestamp='1324618448' post='5724855'] I suddenly felt too lazy to read the above comments to detail, but I'll tell you this: Casual Blue Eyes Decks (even the ones that don't use Red Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon) are still capable of Special Summoning Blue Eyes every turn. Sometimes even more than one copy of it. Your card is way too weak for a Blue Eyes Deck. Here's an idea of a similar but different approach: Level 1/ 200 ATK/ 400 DEF [b]You can banish this face-up card. Once per turn: Place 1 Grow Counter on this banished card (max 7). By removing 1 Grow Counter on it while banished: Reduce a damage to your Life Points, to 0. During your Main Phase: you can remove all Grow Counters on this card and return it to the field with 1 more Level, 400 more ATK, and 300 more DEF, for each Grow Counter removed this way.[/b] ^it somewhat serves a purpose while growing, and it's a lot harder to disrupt (not that your opponent would need to. Other suggestions include: Make it Special Summon-able. [/quote] explain why you want to drop the LP all the way down to 0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1324627367' post='5724963'] explain why you want to drop the LP all the way down to 0 [/quote] I'm not droping anyone's life to 0, I'm dropping a [b]damage[/b] to 0. I can see why the wording is a bit odd though. I think I'll edit that bit for a clearer wording. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 sorry that was my bad, stupid computer at times wouldn't load all the words in a post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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