Makο Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [img]http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/7366/258841h.jpg[/img] 1 Tuner + 1 Non-Tuner Monster When this card is Special Summoned: Destroy 1 face-up card you control; activate one of the following effects based on the card you destroyed: Spell Card - Draw 1 card. If that card is a Level 4 or lower monster: You can discard 1 card; Special Summon that monster. Trap Card - This card cannot be targeted by Trap Card effects. Monster - Each player must discard 1 card OR destroy all cards they control. Took a shot in the dark with this one. Thanks to mister Binary Code for the OCG fix. cnc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
101100111000 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 The OCG is definitely off at some points. Before I give you my criticism, would you like me to correct it? Edit: Forget it, I'm correcting it anyway :3 My rendition: "When this card is Special Summoned: Destroy 1 face-up card you control; activate one of the following effects based on the card you destroyed: Spell Card - Draw 1 card. If that card is a Level 4 or lower monster: You can discard 1 card; Special Summon that monster. Trap Card - This card cannot be targeted by Trap Card effects. Monster - Each player must discard 1 card OR destroy all cards they control." Overall, the effects are great, EXCEPT for the last "monster draw" effect thing. I recommend, instead of destroying all cards, destroy all monsters. It'll be more "balanced". Otherwise, I have no complaints. The art is nice, and the name's fitting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andrew Long Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 LOL really dude I try and set up the tri card idea and you try and copy it LOL could have at least waited a day till i worked out the kinks first then rip it off lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
101100111000 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [quote name='Andrew Long' timestamp='1326001149' post='5754010'] LOL really dude I try and set up the tri card idea and you try and copy it LOL could have at least waited a day till i worked out the kinks first then rip it off lol [/quote] Okay okay, woah, no, don't start accusing people of ripping off an idea here. 1. It's a card effect for a children's card game, big deal. 2. This idea isn't new, not original, so it doesn't matter anyway, as it means you ripped it off too. Besides, both card effects aren't exactly alike, and both are great effects. So, instead of accussing him, help him fix it, if you can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makο Posted January 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [quote name='101100111000' timestamp='1326001074' post='5754006'] The OCG is definitely off at some points. Before I give you my criticism, would you like me to correct it? Edit: Forget it, I'm correcting it anyway :3 My rendition: "When this card is Special Summoned: Destroy 1 face-up card you control; activate one of the following effects based on the card you destroyed: Spell Card - Draw 1 card. If that card is a Level 4 or lower monster: You can discard 1 card; Special Summon that monster. Trap Card - This card cannot be targeted by Trap Card effects. Monster - Each player must discard 1 card OR destroy all cards they control." Overall, the effects are great, EXCEPT for the last "monster draw" effect thing. I recommend, instead of destroying all cards, destroy all monsters. It'll be more "balanced". Otherwise, I have no complaints. The art is nice, and the name's fitting. [/quote] Woah. OCG seems spot on dude. Thanks. And naw, I think it's good the way it is. I like the concept in general. And thanks bro. [quote name='Andrew Long' timestamp='1326001149' post='5754010'] LOL really dude I try and set up the tri card idea and you try and copy it LOL could have at least waited a day till i worked out the kinks first then rip it off lol [/quote] Wow. I think I died a little bit on the inside while reading this. Along with what 10's points, it's not like I check RC on a daily basis. In fact, this is the first time I've been here in weeks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 only 1 thing you need to change, Mako you said for the last effect that both players must destroy all cards on his/her side of the field if he/she can't discard given the word "must", so what happens if your opponent doesn't have anything on the field? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
101100111000 Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1326011355' post='5754161'] only 1 thing you need to change, Mako you said for the last effect that both players must destroy all cards on his/her side of the field if he/she can't discard given the word "must", so what happens if your opponent doesn't have anything on the field? [/quote] A player without cards in his hand AND has nothing on the field? Then that's just sad. I'd be sincerely ashamed of myself if that happened to me. The effect is fine anyway, you're suggesting a situation no self-respecting duelist would ever let happen. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1326011355' post='5754161'] given the word "must", so what happens if your opponent doesn't have anything on the field? [/quote] Nothing happens then, obviously. Gawd, this has been explained to you countless times, ragnarok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted January 12, 2012 Report Share Posted January 12, 2012 [quote name='Andrew Long' timestamp='1326001149' post='5754010']LOL really dude I try and set up the tri card idea and you try and copy it LOL could have at least waited a day till i worked out the kinks first then rip it off lol[/quote] [IMG]http://images.wikia.com/yugioh/images/8/8c/CyberValleyLCGX-EN-UR-1E.jpg[/IMG] And that's just one example. Do you really think that you were the first to come up with this concept? In any case, this is a good card, especially since it's a generic Synchro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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