shonenhikada Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 card effect: During your Standby phase. Inflict 750 points of damage to your opponent for each face-up monster on your side of the field with "harpie" in it's card name. When this card is destroyed and sent either to the Graveyard or is Removed From Play, inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent's for each monster with "harpie" in it's card name that resides in your Graveyard.---------------------------------------------Card art was made by me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 Nice effect, nice picture, overall very nice. ^_^ Just remember that you must post a disclaimer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 The picture is nice.It may be overpowered though.And I spy with my little eye, an errorCapitalize the first letter in card names. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sirbeanalot Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 What CrazyKev said And post a disclaimer and credit the images artist I think it's a bit overpowered, maybe 500 not 750 damage? for each Harpie? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 What CrazyKev said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 Try finding a picture with a more unique background, so that the outcome of your card will look even better, and so it can show the high quality of effort you put into your cards. The effect, you did a great job with, but still can have more variations attached to it. Overall, you did an excellent job. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 -.- glasstin is loosing his softness...... overpowerd, since the harpie combos rely on many of them on the field... love the picture though... 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 Good pic, overall ok 7/10 :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 what people said in front of me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exiro Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 Nice pic, really harpy-like. And the effect is cool, would run it in a harpy deck.7,2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 A few errors, but it's okay. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hamcha Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 i think it's a great card but it should be at least 600 not 750 lifepoints Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Dude64 Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 good card "resides" isn't correct ocg, i'm pretty sure. i think this would be better: "inflict 300 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points for each monster with "Harpie" in it's card name in your Graveyard." though, i'm not entirely sure on the capitalizations (i never remember what's capped and what's not....) overall-10.01/13.69 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master52394 Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 9/10with a effect like that I would make it a level 6 monster if you changed it I would give you a ten Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master52394 Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 9/10with a effect like that I would make it a level 6 monster if you changed it I would give you a ten Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 I think personally its overpowered, due to far to much direct damage The picture of the harpie herself, its ace, the background could be abit more suiting the OCG could be improved but its overall quite a good attempt ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shanec007 Posted March 27, 2008 Report Share Posted March 27, 2008 Nice pic, cool effect 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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