Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted March 3, 2012 Report Share Posted March 3, 2012 Yeah. Since I got sick of making cards and spending time thinking for effects, I made a vanilla. It's good I think. Maybe too good. The ATK :/. [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/850/472406.jpg[/img] A particularly vicious species of dinosaur thought to be extinct that has reappeared in the wild, now stronger than ever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted March 3, 2012 Report Share Posted March 3, 2012 ... Why, just why Chaos food, Dinosaur, 2000 ATK (Though not so bad), DARK for the inevitable GOOD Rank 4s that need DARK monsters, etc. Card is bad design because of these facts, and the fact that Rabbit exists. You basically threw everything to make it amazing at it. Granted, DARK atm is outweighed by Verz Heliotrope, but that doesn't change the fact it's even better Evolzar food than Sabersaurus, sans Gozen Match. You can't make cards willy nilly without considering everything that would factor in to them. Also, the pic looks nothing like a dino ._. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted March 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2012 I am aware the picture is ...... unsuitable. But it's all I could find. But the point was that it would be every one of those things you said, and that's why I made it this way, so I don't really know how to reply... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted March 3, 2012 Report Share Posted March 3, 2012 Yusuru Otonashi said everything. Card is good, to the point it's unhealthy for the game. 2000 ATK is the top ATK for Level 4s these days. One would expect that that's as much as it gets. Then we see it can become food for Evolzar and BLS food at the same time. The disadvantage of regular vanilla dinos is having an unfavorable Attribute and/or good but not amazing ATK stat. I'm not gonna say OMGoverpowered! but you could probably make it more tactical than "absolute good" I really can't think of much tu suggest. I thought I was seeing a Dark World when I looked at it xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 3, 2012 Report Share Posted March 3, 2012 sorry my friend, but a vanilla here isn't exactly the best choice first off there's no spell/trap support for it, so that really brings it down it's good to see dinosuars again, I'm just a bit unsure though if 2000 is considered a good idea or what not. DARK is what really gets it going given that attribute's popularity and all that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted March 3, 2012 Report Share Posted March 3, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1330813090' post='5854483'] sorry my friend, but a vanilla here isn't exactly the best choice first off there's no spell/trap support for it, so that really brings it down it's good to see dinosuars again, I'm just a bit unsure though if 2000 is considered a good idea or what not. DARK is what really gets it going given that attribute's popularity and all that [/quote] This is what the card does appart from high ATK ( read the first 2 and connect the dots): [img]http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20111108030134/yugioh/images/thumb/1/18/RescueRabbit-PHSW-EN-ScR-1E.jpg/300px-RescueRabbit-PHSW-EN-ScR-1E.jpg[/img] [img]http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20111109201213/yugioh/images/thumb/f/fd/EvolzarLaggiaPHSW-EN-UR-1E.jpg/300px-EvolzarLaggiaPHSW-EN-UR-1E.jpg[/img] [img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20111011064345/yugioh/images/4/43/BlackLusterSoldierEnvoyoftheBeginningGLD4-EN-GUR-LE.png[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted March 4, 2012 Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1330813090' post='5854483'] sorry my friend, but a vanilla here isn't exactly the best choice first off there's no spell/trap support for it, so that really brings it down it's good to see dinosuars again, I'm just a bit unsure though if 2000 is considered a good idea or what not. DARK is what really gets it going given that attribute's popularity and all that [/quote] I think you're starting to do a bannable offense. It's called being stupid. [url=http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/265230-lagia-yay-super-ancient-tricerabeast/]BTW, funny that this topic oe mine got only positive responces, but this one of yours is met with negative. I think my card was a worse idea.[/url] In fact, thinking back my idea was utterly stupid. I wasn't thinking. 1950 is the best line a Dino Vanilla can go. But well, why did people rate mine positive? Simple. I gave my card a way cooler name, a way cooler art, and way cooler lore. At least, [i]I[/i] think "[i]A legendary creature with a hide of steel and horns of roaring thunder.[/i]" is way better than "[i]A particularly vicious species of dinosaur thought to be extinct that has reappeared in the wild, now stronger than ever.[/i]" A good vanilla needs all of the above aspects, plus a way to abuse it (in this thing's case, Rabbit Laggia). In short, you're lacking all of them except the last one. I'd change its ATK to 1950 (just so it can kill Rai-Oh) and its DEF to 0. Then, I'd give it better art and lore. That's it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted March 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 ^^ Looking at your card ~ It has more ATK, has the same attribute as mine, and overall it's really similar. But all the stuff people said was bad about mine: [quote name='Yuzuru Otonashi' timestamp='1330805611' post='5854316'] ... Why, just why Chaos food, Dinosaur, 2000 ATK (Though not so bad), DARK for the inevitable GOOD Rank 4s that need DARK monsters, etc. Card is bad design because of these facts, and the fact that Rabbit exists. You basically threw everything to make it amazing at it. Granted, DARK atm is outweighed by Verz Heliotrope, but that doesn't change the fact it's even better Evolzar food than Sabersaurus, sans Gozen Match. You can't make cards willy nilly without considering everything that would factor in to them. Also, the pic looks nothing like a dino ._. [/quote] Is the same stuff people said was good about yours: [quote name='evilsoul' timestamp='1318113092' post='5568780'] this card is amazing DARK Dinosaur for the 2 Evolzar Xyz monsters 2050 ATK Rabbit i came.....10/10 [/quote] That can't all be down to the name and lore.... Anyway I'm looking for a better picture. Also if anyone could suggest a new lore...be helpful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted March 4, 2012 Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 Honestly, I would've called Darkplant's bad design, too, I just didn't see it =T I didn't even read the lore on yours, to be honest, and the flavor doesn't have anything to do with its place in the game, at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted March 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 That's what I thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WhoAreYou? Posted March 4, 2012 Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 [quote name='Yuzuru Otonashi' timestamp='1330805611' post='5854316'] Also, the pic looks nothing like a dino ._. [/quote] [IMG]http://i1252.photobucket.com/albums/hh561/JenLynnDoesIt/tumblr_lxzbc9acxy1r519k2o1_400.png[/IMG] do you not see the freaking skull and the spine? OT: would use for Rabbit, then Evolsar Xyzs, a couple Verz Xyzs, the story continues, ALL BECAUSE IT'S A DINOSAUR. Make it have an effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted March 4, 2012 Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 [quote name='DJVD' timestamp='1330887484' post='5856331'] [img]http://i1252.photobucket.com/albums/hh561/JenLynnDoesIt/tumblr_lxzbc9acxy1r519k2o1_400.png[/img] do you not see the freaking skull and the spine? [/quote] I do, but that looks more demonic than dinosaur. Do you not see the freaking fox fur, ears, tails, nose, and paws? I mean, it looks like a multi-tailed fox, but instead of actually lookign at the art and thinking, you just show your ass, hm? Just lower the attack to 1950, and giving it an effect as opposed to Vanilla would be a balancing factor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WhoAreYou? Posted March 4, 2012 Report Share Posted March 4, 2012 [quote name='Yuzuru Otonashi' timestamp='1330887992' post='5856344'] I do, but that looks more demonic than dinosaur. Do you not see the freaking fox fur, ears, tails, nose, and paws? I mean, it looks like a multi-tailed fox, but instead of actually lookign at the art and thinking, you just show your ass, hm? [/quote] [IMG]http://i533.photobucket.com/albums/ee333/Junkers08/Random%20Pictures/who-cares.jpg[/IMG] It's fine the way it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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