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My first Xys


Kitsumonogatari

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I know it is quite bland, I dont really understand Xys a lot,Tell me what can i fix so shes Playable
at least :)

[b]Levianae - Deep Sea Mermaid[/b]
[img]http://i43.tinypic.com/jk87ma.jpg[/img]
[b]FISH[/b]
[b]2050/1300[/b]
Lore:[i]2 Level 4 WATER monsters[/i]
[i]Once per turn: you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. [/i]

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It's pretty bad, actually. Unless you're facing some stall deck, you're not going to find an opponent who uses any Continuous Spell / Trap Cards. At least make it be able to destroy any Spell / Trap Cards, face-down or face-up. And even then, it'll be a watered down, situational Scrap Dragon wannabee.

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Lore fix.

2 level 4 WATER monsters.
Once per turn: You can detatch one Xyz material from this card; destroy one face-up Spell/Trap card on the field.

Rating
Originality: 4/10, not that original.
Pic: 7/10, looks a little cartoonish. But still hawt. O.O
Effect: 5/10. Nothing new.
Usability: In todays format, with all those MST and Heavys floating around, only 4-5/10. But overall I'd say around 6.5/10.
Total: 22.5/40. A little over half XD.

Good card in general, keep making more.

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[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Lore:[/size][/font][/color]
[i]2 [b]Level[/b] 4 WATER [b]m[/b]onsters
Once per turn[b]: y[/b]ou can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card[b];[/b][b] d[/b]estroy 1 [b]f[/b]ac[b]e[b]-[/b]u[/b]p Spell or Trap [b]C[/b]ard your [b]o[/b]pponent controls. [/i]



It's effect is meh, as said above, it needs to be able to destroy any Spell/Trap Card to be of any real use. Even then, it would be more or less a WATER specific Breaker. It needs something else.
It's acceptable though, and it's image is pretty cool too.

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