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The Hulk -My First Card Ever Made-


Skulldemon

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Please don't be mean but, Tell me what needs to be fixed or needs to be worked on in my card making. Be specific. Rate...[url="http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Hulk&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Earth&level=7&magictraptype=None&rarity=Super%20Rare&picture=http://media.animevice.com/uploads/0/652/20523-303px_hulk_003_super.jpg&set1=Aveng&set2=ers&inset=true&type=Beast&description=%20This%20card%20can%20only%20be%20Special%20Summoned%2C%20Once%20per%20turn%20you%20can%20tribute%20a%20monster%20to%20increase%20the%20ATK%20of%20%22Hulk%22%20up%20by%20200.(max.%201600)%20%20&circulation=First%20Edition&atk=%3F%3F%3F&def=%3F%3F%3F&creator=Demon%20Corp.&year=2012&serial=05622675"]http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Hulk&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Earth&level=7&magictraptype=None&rarity=Super%20Rare&picture=http://media.animevice.com/uploads/0/652/20523-303px_hulk_003_super.jpg&set1=Aveng&set2=ers&inset=true&type=Beast&description=%20This%20card%20can%20only%20be%20Special%20Summoned%2C%20Once%20per%20turn%20you%20can%20tribute%20a%20monster%20to%20increase%20the%20ATK%20of%20%22Hulk%22%20up%20by%20200.(max.%201600)%20%20&circulation=First%20Edition&atk=%3F%3F%3F&def=%3F%3F%3F&creator=Demon%20Corp.&year=2012&serial=05622675[/url]

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[quote name='Skulldemon' timestamp='1341513217' post='5967904']
Please don't be mean but, Tell me what needs to be fixed or needs to be worked on in my card making. Be specific. Rate...[url="http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Hulk&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Earth&level=7&magictraptype=None&rarity=Super%20Rare&picture=http://media.animevice.com/uploads/0/652/20523-303px_hulk_003_super.jpg&set1=Aveng&set2=ers&inset=true&type=Beast&description=%20This%20card%20can%20only%20be%20Special%20Summoned%2C%20Once%20per%20turn%20you%20can%20tribute%20a%20monster%20to%20increase%20the%20ATK%20of%20%22Hulk%22%20up%20by%20200.(max.%201600)%20%20&circulation=First%20Edition&atk=%3F%3F%3F&def=%3F%3F%3F&creator=Demon%20Corp.&year=2012&serial=05622675"]http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Hulk&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Earth&level=7&magictraptype=None&rarity=Super%20Rare&picture=http://media.animevice.com/uploads/0/652/20523-303px_hulk_003_super.jpg&set1=Aveng&set2=ers&inset=true&type=Beast&description=%20This%20card%20can%20only%20be%20Special%20Summoned%2C%20Once%20per%20turn%20you%20can%20tribute%20a%20monster%20to%20increase%20the%20ATK%20of%20%22Hulk%22%20up%20by%20200.(max.%201600)%20%20&circulation=First%20Edition&atk=%3F%3F%3F&def=%3F%3F%3F&creator=Demon%20Corp.&year=2012&serial=05622675[/url]
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There's no way of determining his ATK beyond the power boost, so his starting ATK would be 0, which is rather silly for a Level 6 beatstick. While there's the ability to sacrifice a monster to power himself up, it's just 200 ATK and can only be used once per turn, and has a limit of eight uses. Summoning this card would result in a monster that could have 200 ATK at most and can be very easily killed during your opponent's turn, effectively wasting the monster you tributed to summon this card. I'm sorry, I know you didn't want the comments to be mean, but this really isn't good.

By the way, do you know how to embed cards? It would help avoid having to post a link to the card.

[quote name='BT ' timestamp='1341513864' post='5967919']
Can only be Special Summoned. Once per turn: You can Tribute 1 monster you control; Increase the ATK of "Hulk" by 200. (max. 1600)
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Please make your posts consist of more than OCG corrections.

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The picture also looks like it's squished. Hulk not like being squished, little man. Hulk smash if not stop squish!

The Hulk is known as the 'strongest there is' because he really is that strong, even to begin. And he only gets stronger still has he gets angrier. Without limit. Your card's stats do not accurately reflect his character, I believe. It may as well be a card for Bruce Banner, instead. I believe this card needs some major adjustments, and not just to the OCG, as suggested earlier.

I do like the idea that in order to summon the Hulk you need to make a sacrifice. Similarly, I made "Hulk" a Level-5 even when I made my Avengers set originally, so he could not be summoned directly to the field.

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I'm making an archeotype of cards including Hulk hope you like PD. Global Menace is a field card http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Avenger%20Hero%20-%20The%20Incredible%20Hulk&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Earth&level=8&magictraptype=None&rarity=Common&picture=http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110701224855/marvel/es/images/a/a1/Hulk_004.jpg&set1=isbnn&set2=01969&inset=false&type=Beast-Warrior&description=this%20card%20cannot%20be%20special%20summoned%20or%20set%20if%20there%20is%20another%20%22Avenger%20Hero%22%20monster%20in%20the%20field%20except%20if%20there%20is%20%22Global%20Mennace%22%20in%20the%20field.%20If%20this%20card%20is%20special%20summoned%20it%27s%20summoned%20in%20attack%20position%20and%20the%20ATK%20and%20DEF%20are%20halved%20until%20the%20next%20standby%20phase.%20this%20card%20cannot%20be%20destroyed%20by%20battle&circulation=limited%20edition&atk=4000&def=3500&creator=&year=2012&serial=93199970

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[quote name='charlie1989' timestamp='1342672775' post='5982559']
I'm making an archeotype of cards including Hulk hope you like PD. Global Menace is a field card http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Avenger%20Hero%20-%20The%20Incredible%20Hulk&cardtype=Monster&subtype=effect&attribute=Earth&level=8&magictraptype=None&rarity=Common&picture=http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110701224855/marvel/es/images/a/a1/Hulk_004.jpg&set1=isbnn&set2=01969&inset=false&type=Beast-Warrior&description=this%20card%20cannot%20be%20special%20summoned%20or%20set%20if%20there%20is%20another%20%22Avenger%20Hero%22%20monster%20in%20the%20field%20except%20if%20there%20is%20%22Global%20Mennace%22%20in%20the%20field.%20If%20this%20card%20is%20special%20summoned%20it%27s%20summoned%20in%20attack%20position%20and%20the%20ATK%20and%20DEF%20are%20halved%20until%20the%20next%20standby%20phase.%20this%20card%20cannot%20be%20destroyed%20by%20battle&circulation=limited%20edition&atk=4000&def=3500&creator=&year=2012&serial=93199970
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Last I checked, this was Skulldemon's thread, not yours.

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