New Card

[Vulkan]

One of the cards in a new deck, feedback appreciated!

[img]http://i.imgur.com/GDakJ.jpg[/img]

[Aerion Brightflame]

A nice change to a beater. Rather than the usual. Switch to defence and die immediately afterwards. The problem is. Infernity love this. They have no hand, so no drawback, and this helps empty the hand whilst building advantage. Personally, i would make the discarding a card a cost in order for it to attack. That way, it always has the drawback, instead of this turning into a Alexandrite Dragon after a certain amount of time. On top, raise its attack by 100. That way it might get run instead of alexandrite. But, those are my suggestions. A nice start.

[Thar]

[u]OCG fix:[/u] [i]If this card destroys an opponent's monster in battle[b][color=#ff0000]:[/color][/b] Discard [color=#ff0000][b]a[/b][/color] card [color=#ff0000][b](from your hand.)[/b][/color][/i]

Not really digging the 3D model feel in the image, but that's just me.
Though, personally I'm not that impressed with the card design. Usually if a player discards a card, he/she is traumatized or baffled in some way. In what way does the cost affect the player as far as actuality?

[Vulkan]

Thanks for the advice and when I made this card I was going for a similar idea to chainsaw insect and put in the discarding effect to balance the fact that it has 2000 attack

[Aerion Brightflame]

Oh damn. Dark worlds. Discarding isn't a cost here, its an effect. This thing would make dark worls even more insane. You need to make the discard a cost for declaring the attack so Dark World couldn't break it.

[Vulkan]

Updated card version

[newhat]

It's OK, not great. In a generic Beatdown Deck I'd prefer Gene-Warped Warwolf or Alexandrite Dragon. In a Warrior Deck I'd prefer Jain, Lightsworn Paladin or Koa'ki Meiru Bergzak.

[Sleepy]

It's a nice card.
The discard has plenty of uses.
Dark Worlds, Fableds, or other Graveyard-liking cards (Shield Warrior, Necro Gardna, Necro Defender, Quibolt Hedgehog, Plaguespreader Zombie, A/D Changer, etc)

Granted that, some of the above uses have faster and more consistent ways of discarding, but it's still a respectable card in a fun and casual way.

One thing to point out though, there's a very similar IRL card:
[img]http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20111020044350/yugioh/images/thumb/b/b7/Brron%2CMadKingofDarkWorldSDGU-EN-C-1E.jpg/300px-Brron%2CMadKingofDarkWorldSDGU-EN-C-1E.jpg[/img]


but I think I like your card more, design-wise.

[vipermatt96]

I agree with everyone else it quite simply needs to be cost

[Sleepy]

No it doesn't need to be a cost. It's perfectly fine as is.

[Cherz]

[quote name='HiveNet' timestamp='1343004633' post='5985960']
A nice change to a beater. Rather than the usual. Switch to defence and die immediately afterwards. The problem is. Infernity love this.
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Its not like they would use it anyways. TBH, why would they?
OT: Its an iffy card. It upstages mad king of DW, with a whopping 200 more attack, and allows a discard, but it doesnt get benifits from the field spell that the one deck that would use it. It seems well, UP if you ask me. generic beaters are eh, but at least alexandrite and gene warped have rabbit going for them.