[Thar] - Alpha-Longshot Scout

[Thar]

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[b]Once per turn, if your opponent summons a monster: You may reveal this card (from your hand) and discard a card; deal 1000 damage to that monster. If a monster targeted by this card is Set: Flip it face-up; negate any Flip effects that would normally activate. If this card is removed from your hand in any way: You may reveal your hand; shuffle this card into your Deck.[/b]

[Thar]

Bump

[Garthfunkle Vii Backwards]

seems perfectly fine nothing wrong with it but maybe 800 instead of 1000 but still fine

i think he meant to say burn effect or a select monster stats are decreased

either way 800 instead of 1000

[Sleepy]

The card has many inconsistencies:
-What does "1000 damage to a monster" mean?
-The card doesn't mention "targetting" at all in it's effect. It is only on the "flip" clause it mentions that if he targets something (which it doesn't because it it's effect does not mention "targetting" to begin with).

My OCG fix attempt would be:
[b]Once per turn, when your opponent Summons a monster: You can reveal this card in your hand, discard 1 card, and target that monster; Target looses 1000 ATK/DEF (face-down monsters are flipped face-up and FLIP effects cannot activate at this time). If this card leaves your hand: you can reveal your hand; shuffle this card into the Deck.[/b]

I'm not sure if "1000 damage to a monster" would imply that you want monsters to get destroyed if they are weakened to a certain degree, though.
Also, I'm not sure if you want it to be able to weaken multiple monsters that are Summoned at the same time (like with the effects of "Rekindling", "Rescue Cat", "Rescue Rabbit", "Nimble Momonga", "Scapegoats", etc)


Oh, also:
DAT Limited Edition.