Tristan Taylor Posted September 21, 2012 Report Share Posted September 21, 2012 [b]Undead Nightmare[/b] [img]http://i.imgur.com/RLuqW.jpg[/img] [size=3](if you can't read it)[/size] [b]Effect[/b] : This card cannot be special summoned. If this card is destroyed by battle You can pay 100 Life Points, to return it to your Hand. [size=2](side note : set id is : Lord of The Dead - English 015)[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted September 21, 2012 Report Share Posted September 21, 2012 If you're gonna make up type then plz post this in the Any Other Card forum, if not then plz change it to Zombie. [s]summonable with call of the mummy and pyramid turtle[/s](<i'm an iddot for not seeing the no special summon). Tribute monsters aren't huge during the current meta or last meta or the one b4 that. Also its effect is pretty close to useless, it has 3500 so barely anything can destroy it by battle. Your ocg (official card grammar) is off too (though u r new so this is understandable), use this as guide: [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/162881-the-ocg-grammar-card-presentation-thread/"]http://forum.yugiohc...ntation-thread/[/url]. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loyalist Posted September 21, 2012 Report Share Posted September 21, 2012 A 3.5k beater... easy to reuse.. level 9.. A simple card that can be reused if you have tribute fodder and the special summon limitation makes it resistant to monster reborn but increases the difficulty of getting it out after its returned to your hand. "Undead" is not a official yugioh monster type and the card doesn't appear to be strong enough to go against the current meta but as one of your first cards its very nice and I see no major OCG errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted September 21, 2012 Report Share Posted September 21, 2012 Spamming Double Coston with the classic Zombie ways (Zombie Master, Mezuki, Book of Life, Monster Reborn, Pyramid Turtle) and Normal Summoning this card by Tributing it, actually sounds casually respectable. Other than that, it's just a beatstick, which is ok. Colossal Fighter gets destroyed by battle with it's 2800 or more ATK so, I see no reason why this wouldn't. It won't happen ALWAYS, but occationally. Excalibur can bring it down at the very least. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tristan Taylor Posted September 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 [center][size=6]FIXED[/size][/center] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/Vf9gr.jpg[/img][/center] [center]Description : This card cannot be Summoned if your Gaveyard is empty. If this card is destroyed by battle You may pay 1400 Life Points, to Add it to the top of your Deck.[/center] [center][size=3]please excuse some OCG issues just tell me i'll fix.[/size][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted September 22, 2012 Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 Well, this is an completely different effect than the 1st The 1st: Since it cant be Special Summoned, you always have to Tribute 3 monsters to Summon a 3500 ATK monster. ( since you can easily Special Summon 3 monsters nowadays this isnt to bad) and it can return to your hand when destroyed by battle. Kinda like that The 2nd: I wouldt take this card back to the top of my deck for a good reason. Summoning 3 monsters again for a monster wich has already been destroyed by battle with a stronger (or even) monster? no thx. Paying 1400 Life Points after having a monster of mine destroyed by a monster witch damn high ATK ? No thx...Add it to the top of my deck to prevent me from drawing a useful card? no thx..Well the only positive thing is, you can Special Summon it now with Pyramid Turtle. I prefer the 1st one ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loyalist Posted September 22, 2012 Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 Actually its not that bad because level 9s and 10s actually only require 2 tributes (I know it doesn't sound right but that's when google says) unless the card (Like most e.g. God cards) says otherwise so a 3500 ATK beater would be quite tough and being returned to the deck isn't so bad as long as you have tribute fodder but I see where you are coming from. It has does meny issues. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted September 22, 2012 Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 Ewwwww, why did you change it to returning it to the top of your deck instead of hand? That makes the card horrible. The first version of the card was already balanced to begin with, and even then, it's just a beatstick that [i]could [/i]be ran in Frog Monarchs, but I wouldn't count on it, as Frog Monarchs already run better monsters (ie Light and Darkness Dragon, the monarchs etc.). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tristan Taylor Posted September 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 22, 2012 thanks i really need to stick with the first one. but instead of destroyed by battle, i'll make it destroyed by spell/trap or battle. so the new effect would be : This card cannot be Summoned if your Gaveyard is empty. If this card is destroyed, You may pay 500 Life Points, to Add it to your Hand. yay or nay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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