Aix Posted February 6, 2013 Report Share Posted February 6, 2013 Was originally going to do something different and more original with this image, but decided that this guy (remotely) resembled Utopia, so I made this. But, it's still a cool card and I'd say definitely a staple if made. Notes: His effect is mandatory. Please rate, review or comment. Even if just to say that this card is fine. However, reps for proper reviews. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted February 6, 2013 Report Share Posted February 6, 2013 It's certaiy not a bad card, and it definitely has its usability niche. It safeguards against MF, lance, and Dprison as well as preventing stuff like sangan/card trooper/zenmaines/maestroke/gachi from going off, which allows the controller to bust through the stall wall and get the game moving again. It's overall a well-designed card that might become a staple depending on the format. If anything, I don't think the self-burn is necessary. I'd also make the effect optional, or else it chains on itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimeAceJohn Posted February 6, 2013 Report Share Posted February 6, 2013 Just to make it more anti-Utopia, you COULD increase his ATK by 100...? I kind of like it in a sense that it negates summons similar to how utopia negates attacks. It helps put off all those monsters your opponent throws at you which is a great way to stop it. The '1000' damage drawback is great. At first I thought it was too much, but then I realized that u basically destroyed 2 monsters which is so much for a lvl 4 xyz. My fixes: Make it more Utopia-like, yet not Utopia-like... For example, as I said, bring it to 2500 OR you can reverse the ATK and DEF of Utopia 2000 ATK and 2500 DEF. Take out the 'take 1000', even though its good, and add in discard 2 cards....but im scared this would be awesome for fables and dark worlds so idk... I would you reccoment using this pic, but the 'SAMPLE' crap is stupid: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted February 6, 2013 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2013 Increased ATK to 2500 and kept the 1000 damage for balance. Kept mandatory though made sure it didn't chain, mandatory allows your opponent to waste resources to get rid of this card... might remove, what do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted February 6, 2013 Report Share Posted February 6, 2013 preventing stuff like zenmaines/maestroke/gachi from going off Incorrect. Their effects are continuous and do not activate, though Zenmaines activates in the End Phase. The card itself seems not half bad. It's 2500, it stops Battle Phase floaters, and it has a drawback if it stops those. If it actually blows up via its effect, I don't know how you got it to there, so it seems a bit non-existant. Overall, just seems like a very solid card. My only problem is that it promotes OTKs because they can't D-Prison/Mirror Force/Etc. during your BP, provided you run it. Maybe make it once per turn? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted February 6, 2013 Author Report Share Posted February 6, 2013 Okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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