jjkiki Posted March 18, 2013 Report Share Posted March 18, 2013 this is my deck ( i do not know if these cards should be in this forum or the other one so please do not get mad at me) here that are this is the deck that I have made please post if you think somthing neads changing I have one other cards but the pics on them will not work even though that have before I will show you these cards here [spoiler=cards that the pics whould not work][/spoiler] I know that these cards are the worst but the reason i made this topic is because I want to see how good these cards can get if you said your ideas this is the only reason I made these cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swag swag swag swag swag s Posted March 18, 2013 Report Share Posted March 18, 2013 I can't even review these cards, since they're not really... cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted March 19, 2013 Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 EDIT: You made more? Oh bloody hell. For the love of humanity, stop until you learn more. Please? Pretty please with a f****** knife gun on top? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted March 19, 2013 Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 Okay, okay, okay... you REALLY need to go actually play Yu-Gi-Oh! before you make any more cards... cuz... honestly... no offense... but... seriously... these cards are terrible, totally random and have nothing to do with each other and so in no way do they work as a deck. They also have nothing to do with the already existent Gogogo cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrimJr1393 Posted March 19, 2013 Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 Yeah I believe these are not 'Realistic' at all, though I like your effort! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeRainbowDash Posted March 19, 2013 Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 dat video.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted March 19, 2013 Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 EDIT: You made more? Oh bloody hell. For the love of humanity, stop until you learn more. Please? Pretty please with a f****** knife gun on top? BTW, Neph, where do you get all these gifs? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jjkiki Posted March 19, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 yes i only made these cards becouse I want you to tell me how to change them someway that is the only reason I posed them this is to see how people can change these cards EG (you should make this effect onto this card or - this effect). I whanted to see how it went so if you have an Idea please post on here and then at the end of the week I will do up all the things that you tell me to do I wanted to see how that woud work so this is the reason I made up all the cards I know that thay are all bad I made them this way so that people could change them so next week I will update it with all the changes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Resident Fascist Posted March 19, 2013 Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 I am 12 and what is this? ...just what...? ... Have you ever played the Yu-Gi-Oh! Trading Card Game or Official Card Game before? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrimJr1393 Posted March 19, 2013 Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 I am 12 and what is this? I am 13 XD, it seems like a Rainbow Child pooed on these cards XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jjkiki Posted March 19, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 this is a topic that you have to give ideas about how to make these card better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Resident Fascist Posted March 19, 2013 Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 I am 13 XD, it seems like a Rainbow Child pooed on these cards XD ...You completely failed the joke. If you thought I was actually 12, you're doing the internet wrong. this is a topic that you have to give ideas about how to make these card better 1. I'll do what the fuck I want, don't tell me what the hell to do, you aren't staff kthxbai. if you was staff i'd listen but no 2. Read actual cards, play the game, then make cards. It's best to just scrap this whole idea and start over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pepperyena Posted March 19, 2013 Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 These... cards... Can't even be made better. They're just so ridiculous, so nondescript, and so unrealistic that there's no way for a longshot we can help you "improve" them without changing 90% of them or just making completely new cards. I feel like you're rather young and inexperienced, so I'm going to offer you this: Try to freshen up your English and Grammar skills, as well as learning fully how YuGiOh works, before even deciding on posting a topic - and when you do post a topic, please, look at your cards and decide whether they're "reaslistic" or not. These... aren't. These... cards... Can't even be made better. They're just so ridiculous, so nondescript, and so unrealistic that there's no way for a longshot we can help you "improve" them without changing 90% of them or just making completely new cards. I feel like you're rather young and inexperienced, so I'm going to offer you this: Try to freshen up your English and Grammar skills, as well as learning fully how YuGiOh works, before even deciding on posting a topic - and when you do post a topic, please, look at your cards and decide whether they're "reaslistic" or not. These... aren't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted March 19, 2013 Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 Guize, guize, guize, you lucky there ain't no advanced clause yet. Okay, I will be serious: Cards cannot be made better if the very idea of them is retarded. If a card's concept is solid, then, it can be balanced and improved upon, however, these cards are utterly worthless. My best suggestion is for you to go on Dueling Network for at least a month or two, and play until you have a rating of 500, before you come back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jjkiki Posted March 19, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 EDIT: You made more? Oh bloody hell. For the love of humanity, stop until you learn more. Please? Pretty please with a f****** knife gun on top? no way woud I make more of these cards the only reason i made them was to get you to say your ideas and then at the end of the week I will change them and I want to see how good that have become These... cards... Can't even be made better. They're just so ridiculous, so nondescript, and so unrealistic that there's no way for a longshot we can help you "improve" them without changing 90% of them or just making completely new cards. I feel like you're rather young and inexperienced, so I'm going to offer you this: Try to freshen up your English and Grammar skills, as well as learning fully how YuGiOh works, before even deciding on posting a topic - and when you do post a topic, please, look at your cards and decide whether they're "reaslistic" or not. These... aren't. These... cards... Can't even be made better. They're just so ridiculous, so nondescript, and so unrealistic that there's no way for a longshot we can help you "improve" them without changing 90% of them or just making completely new cards. I feel like you're rather young and inexperienced, so I'm going to offer you this: Try to freshen up your English and Grammar skills, as well as learning fully how YuGiOh works, before even deciding on posting a topic - and when you do post a topic, please, look at your cards and decide whether they're "reaslistic" or not. These... aren't. I will post the cards that I did do good for making them up next week on here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pepperyena Posted March 19, 2013 Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 I... sir...? You just failed at quoting. Instead of actually replying, you jammed your reply into my quote... ...Uh... Yyeaaaahh... Like I said before, we CAN'T make them better. We can tell that you're... very... young, and inexperienced, with this sort of thing, so my humble request to you is to not bother replying to us and research this stuff more clearly. You can't really expect a bunch of people to "make them better" when they... ...I don't even know how to explain it. It's that bad... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted March 19, 2013 Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 [spoiler='I suppose you hadn't realized that I had sent a PM to you, so I shall place it in a more obvious location']By the looks of your cards, it is really showing that you really don't know anything about cardmaking. Normally, someone who knows nothing of it would do even better than the "Gogogo" cards you're making that have no connection to the pre-existing "Gogogo" archetype whatsoever, but I have a feeling you're like, 10, or something. I personally think that someone that young should really avoid the internet until he/she is older and can understand things he/she sees better. It may also benefit you in other ways as you would be able to understand what archetypes need to be supported, like how "Gogogo" monsters tend to focus on getting many Level 4 monsters on the field, and your jumble of cards is, as I said before, not doing anything of the sort. Your feelings would have also been toughened by the arrogance all people gain with their puberty and would therefore be able to tolerate the hateful replies you've received in the places you've posted your cards, whether they be a thread you have created or someone else's that you've hijacked. To reiterate the important parts of this lengthy message: I feel that you should just take a leave from this site, and the internet in general, until you've had several more years of maturation. Then, you can return, and if this site still stands, have a fresh start with cards that will show that you have had a better grasp on making cards. [/spoiler] As for your cards, they seem so random and unfocused that you are much better off starting over in several years. Only when you can put together that Gogogo's need cards that don't include a Level 12 Ritual monster can we give better (and less hurtful) comments about what you've made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jjkiki Posted March 19, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 please lock topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Just Crouton Posted March 19, 2013 Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 The posts in this thread are significantly worse than the opening post, and undermine what the Advanced Clause is meant to accomplish, that is to provide quality posts to help people make better cards. Thank you YCM for proving how moronic and childish you are, and for your failure to be constructive in a section that really needs it. Concerning the cards, it's weird that they're all Gogogo cards, intentional or not. With that said, I like how they're all targets for Gogogo Giant, and that some are vanillas (Treeman and Ninja Army,) meaning you have Rescue Rabbit targets which can be used for Giant later. It's established that Gogogos are various Types (Rock, Zombie, Machine,) so it's not a weird idea Honestly, while most (if not all) aren't very good, the least useful is the GX card, which doesn't have anything going for it. Gogogo Monster is absurd with the million LP gain. Beast is ridiculous with it's choice of field or hand nuke on top of being a 3200 body. The main problem is the lack of synergy. These cards are all randomness, which makes it hard to review them collectively as a set. The cards all do their own thing in a way worse than Photons, making it impossible to play them together. The higher levels aren't worth playing, and the traps are outclassed by existing cards (Call of the Haunted is better than Gem Chain,) and most of the vanillas are pointless. EDIT: Was typing/posted as TC asked to lock topic. EDIT #2: There's a wiki page for Gogogos if you want to see how the existing cards work. Also, Burning Knucklers are a great example of how archetypes work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrimJr1393 Posted March 19, 2013 Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 Ummm, I cannot give advice for these cards :l... My only advice is to be more Creative and 'Realistic' when making your cards the way you make them! Hope this helps! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jjkiki Posted March 19, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 yes it was Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrimJr1393 Posted March 19, 2013 Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 Also you should try not to make cards that have names that are real cards (For Example: Gogogo, it has already been made) There is no need to add on to the Maker's of Yu-Gi-Oh's ideas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jjkiki Posted March 19, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 these cards were only for a test and for this topic only I have discarded the cards already please lock this topic now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrimJr1393 Posted March 19, 2013 Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 Unfortunately I cannot close this Topic since I was not the one to make it, I suggest going to the 'Shop' tab at the top of the page and buying the 'Delete Topics' App(or whatever it's called) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jjkiki Posted March 19, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 and the reason I made them all gogogo is because I wanted people to give ideas about these cards names if people would please read my posts thay would know why I made these cards so bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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