Robbin' Redcap [Single Challenge 35/100]

[Ren✧]

Once per turn: You can destroy 1 Level 4 or higher monster you control, except this card, to target 1 card in your opponent's Graveyard and banish 1 card from your Deck with the same name as the targeted card; add the targeted card to your hand. You can only control 1 face-up "Robbin' Redcap".

 

Allows you to grab generic cards, like Monster Reborn/Torrential/etc. and then could really come in handy if you and your opponent are using similar decks. I am thinking it may need another restriction, or perhaps I need to raise the DEF and make it a Spellcaster?

[Zazubat]

OCG fix: Once per turn: You can destroy 1 Level 4 or higher monster you control to target 1 card in your opponent's Graveyard and banish 1 card from your Deck with the same name as the targeted card; add the targeted card to your hand. You can only control 1 face-up "Robbin' Redcap".

OCG notes, you're having multiple semi-colons in one effect, which you don't, so I changed it to say "and" instead as I assume you are suppose to do both to get your card. Also, I think I gone over this so many damn times now lol. Semi-colon: No capitalization (unless it's normally capitalized) colons: Always.

 

Doesn't something like this already excist? It's slightly different, but Graverobber kind of does the same, sadly it's a Trap, meaning you have to set it up, plus, unless that card is a quick-play it won't be very helpful, where this card is way better as it can destroy itself (which I think it shouldn't be able to IMO). As a B-Warrior, it's searchable with Tenki, though it's not really breaking this card all too much as this is pretty situational and does -1 yourself if you use it. As for changing the type and such, nah keep it as it is.

[Ren✧]

OCG fix: Once per turn: You can destroy 1 Level 4 or higher monster you control to target 1 card in your opponent's Graveyard and banish 1 card from your Deck with the same name as the targeted card; add the targeted card to your hand. You can only control 1 face-up "Robbin' Redcap".

OCG notes, you're having multiple semi-colons in one effect, which you don't, so I changed it to say "and" instead as I assume you are suppose to do both to get your card. Also, I think I gone over this so many damn times now lol. Semi-colon: No capitalization (unless it's normally capitalized) colons: Always.

 

Doesn't something like this already excist? It's slightly different, but Graverobber kind of does the same, sadly it's a Trap, meaning you have to set it up, plus, unless that card is a quick-play it won't be very helpful, where this card is way better as it can destroy itself (which I think it shouldn't be able to IMO). As a B-Warrior, it's searchable with Tenki, though it's not really breaking this card all too much as this is pretty situational and does -1 yourself if you use it. As for changing the type and such, nah keep it as it is.

 

Yeah, I don't know what I was thinking, in terms of OCG. I changed it so it can't destroy itself. Good now?

[Zazubat]

Yeah it's pretty good, still situational, has a pretty strong effect, but also seems well balanced. Good job

[Sleepy]

It's a sort of toolbox for staples.

Though it depends on what your opponent's Graveyard is, meaning at least half the time it depends on the actions someone else does.

Their Heavy, Monster Reborn, Mystical, Dark Hole, Torrential, Effect Veiler.

It's a +0 on itself, and even if what it gives you can plus, it still is somewhat situational. 

I think it's pretty ok.

 

It's just an added bonus that it works with Rekindling and Fire Formations. 

It has potential.