A Card from my future Archtype

[BullxFritz]

Well im not so sure about If im good or bad with the cards so im actually making this test so please give me your most honest opinion?

 

btw..Im not so good with the english, so excuse my bad english if there is mistakes in it, or in the card. 

 

[AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW]

There is a problem with the card, and it isn't the semi-awkward ATK score: It's that we have no clue what this archetype is, what it does, or how it's supposed to be played for maximum effect. As it is, the only monster you can Summon with this effect is another copy of this card or Dark Titan of Terror.

 

Given what I am given to work with, the ability for this effect to go off when Special Summoned is not a good idea. Depending on how well you can get her into your hand, you can end up Summoning her (even with Monster Reborn or Call of the Haunted) to SS (Special Summon) another version of her just to Summon yet another card. Either let it exclude itself or restrict the effect to only activate when she is Normal Summoned. Depending on what else is in your archetype, the latter option may be a better choice, or perhaps only the first one would be necessary. It really depends on what your archetype contains, something we don't know.

[Blake]

*sigh* I'm sorry, but you must post the written/typed version of the effect separate of the card.

 

It's also hard to gauge it as is, because we don't know what it interacts with.

[BullxFritz]

What you sau actually have a lot of sense! Thanks for your Advices, btw, so i better, post the entire archtype so you coukd se how they interact?, I guess that would be  Better so you could give a better opinion seeing how the deck could have a synergy in it