OCG Fix Please

[TheBigCheese]

Hello to all you good and lovely people here on YGCM. Some of you OCG boffins could really help me out and prove your own konwledge as well as kindness at the same time. My problem is simple, could you please fix my OCG?

Here is what I have written:

 

"Offer this card as a tribute to remove all cards in you are your graveyard from play and inflict 100 x every card removed from play."

 

If there are any nice people who could give this and OCG fix, it would be much appreciated.

 

Thanks and regards...

 

TheBigCheese

[Sleepy]

I think this is the wrong section for that.

 

Regardless what you are looking or is:

Tribute this card; banish all cards in your Graveyard, and inflict 100 damage to your opponent for each card.

[TheBigCheese]

I think this is the wrong section for that.

 

Regardless what you are looking or is:

Tribute this card; banish all cards in your Graveyard, and inflict 100 damage to your opponent for each card.

 

Thank you very much Sleepy :) Out of interest, what section should this be in?

[Zazubat]

There's a thread in Realistic Singles called About OCG. It appears to be gone. I wonder where it is. Also, I suggest this fix instead: "You can Tribute this card to banish all cards in your Graveyard; inflict 100 damage to your opponent for each card banished by this effect." Now, this depends on if you want the banish to be a cost, which it normally would, but it's up to you. I also changed a few other things from Sleepy's fix, as it makes it look more like a real card, but either is fine really.

[Sleepy]

There's a thread in Realistic Singles called About OCG. It appears to be gone. I wonder where it is. Also, I suggest this fix instead: "You can Tribute this card to banish all cards in your Graveyard; inflict 100 damage to your opponent for each card banished by this effect." Now, this depends on if you want the banish to be a cost, which it normally would, but it's up to you. I also changed a few other things from Sleepy's fix, as it makes it look more like a real card, but either is fine really.

Yeah, I looked around for it a while ago. It's nowhere to be found, and accessing it from a Google link gives me an error. I wasn't notified about it either.

 

Mihails Tals DID say it was just a temporary sticky and from the looks of the cards I've been looking at in the section, the person posting them either didn't read the thread, or just already knew how to use the grammar anyways.

 

Still, I can't help but think it was downright deleted.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

As for the OCG, yes, it can be an alternative, depending on the nature of the banishing bit (cost/effect). Also, I should have added the "you can" part as well. If you have more doubts about this, feel free to ask.