Maeriberii Haan Posted September 26, 2013 Report Share Posted September 26, 2013 "I'll be the last hero of this world, even if that means I'll have to kill all the other heroes!" 3 Level 1 Monsters You can Xyz summon this card using a rank 4 or higher DARK Xyz Monster you control (Xyz Materials on that monster become attached to this card as well). If this card's ATK is 2100 or less: It cannot be targeted for an attack or by a card effect. Once per turn during your End Phase if there is another monster on the field, detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and banish 1 card from your hand: Destroy all monsters on the field with higher ATK than this card, then this card gains 1000 ATK. You cannot conduct your next battle phase if you activated this card's effect. Okay, this should be close to a final version. If you CXyz Change using a used-up Blackship of Corn, you'll just remove a material from this card, since all other monsters are just going to get destroyed anyway. The Battle Phase prevention made you be unable to make any kind of push after the nuke, so your opponent can just hold on to their resources and maybe bait the destruction effect. If this card have 2100 or more ATK in any way, then it's fair game. 2100 is not a hard threshold to beat these days. List of counters so far: -Spellbook of Fate -Fissure, Hammer Shot, Smashing Ground -Conservative Play(not a card, obviously.) -Starlight Road and The Huge Revolution is Over -Some other less used cards. If this is still too troublesome, I'll just make it to only dodge monster effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted September 26, 2013 Report Share Posted September 26, 2013 Mainly just some OCG fixes here. You know the drill: hover your mouse over the underlined parts to see the changes. [quote]You can Xyz summon this card using a rank 4 or higher Xyz Monster you control [acronym='Standard Chaos Xyz Change wording.'](Xyz Materials on that monster become attached to this card as well)[/acronym]. [acronym='This is a condition, not a Continuous Effect, since it is only active while you have Xyz Materials.']If this card has an Xyz Material: It cannot be targeted for an attack or by a card effect your opponent controls[/acronym]. Once per turn, [acronym='You need to specify a proper phase to activate this effect. For conciseness, I'll just say at the start of your Main Phase 1.']at the start of your Main Phase 1[/acronym], detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and banish 1 card from your hand: Destroy all monsters on the field with higher ATK than this card, then this card gains 1000 ATK. You cannot conduct your battle phase the turn you activated this card's effect.[/quote] Not bad as it stands right now, but it's power might change severely depending on what Phase you decide to place the mandatory nuke on. it pretty much guarantees that it will destroy at least SOMEthing your opponent drops, so making it during your opponent's End Phase would wreck their strategy, which I highly advise against. If you manage to Chaos Xyz Change into it, it can potentially turn into a 4100 beater after burning through all of its materials. But during that time, it can't be targeted or destroyed by any effects, which can actually make it quite dangerous. I'd suggest maybe only a 600-800 ATK increase? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted September 26, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2013 How about during the end of your main phase 1? and thanks for your suggestion. And I don't think you'll summon this with 4 material, since the only viable target for this to occur while not being gimmicky is by using ouroboros and holding yourself from using its effect. Might think something about this though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted September 26, 2013 Report Share Posted September 26, 2013 Oh, I didn't realize that it still can be destroyed, just not targeted. That's much better than what I had originally thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted September 26, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2013 Well, Isshun Boshi in thy myth is really small, so it should logically be able to dodge most conventional attacks or spells easily. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted September 26, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2013 Bump. Slight edit made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted September 26, 2013 Report Share Posted September 26, 2013 You cannot conduct your battle phase the turn you activated this card's effect. You do realize that the part that makes no sense, given that you're activating that effect in the End Phase. Anyways, card is broken, that's already implied with the protection effect + nuke, but what makes is go over the top crazy is the fact that any player can just throw it into the Extra Deck and call it a day. The reason is because Number 50: Blackship of Corn exists. You just go into Corn, get rid of a monster your opponent controls, if any, or just get it with 3 materials instead of 2, stick it in Defense and just sit on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted September 26, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2013 If you battle that turn, you can't activate it. Same deal as duality. ...I might have to change some of the effect first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted September 26, 2013 Report Share Posted September 26, 2013 If you battle that turn, you can't activate it. Same deal as duality. Then make the last effect an optional effect, given that it's mandatory with its current wording. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted September 26, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 26, 2013 Ah, I see your point. Edited the card with fixes. Now the nuke effect is mandatory if there's another monster on the field, so this'll discourage the user from spamming monsters for OTK and the opponent can just hold their monsters without caring much for the first 2 nukes. Also, changed it into rank 5 or higher DARKs. Might change it back to rank 4 or higher if the current effect is fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted September 27, 2013 Report Share Posted September 27, 2013 Ah, I see your point. Edited the card with fixes. Now the nuke effect is mandatory if there's another monster on the field, so this'll discourage the user from spamming monsters for OTK and the opponent can just hold their monsters without caring much for the first 2 nukes. Also, changed it into rank 5 or higher DARKs. Might change it back to rank 4 or higher if the current effect is fine. The lore under the card still has it as Rank 4 or higher. Anyways, changing the Rank doesn't change much, given that unless your opponent has an out to this card, that being a non-targeting removal (and there are not many cards that are used in todays meta that do not target), they can't do much, and it all ends up it being a wall for you to sit behind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted September 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 27, 2013 And you can't even safely extend your plays and attempt to take control of the board while its on the field, since it'll blow your other monsters and skips your next BP. And the opponent can just wait for Fissure/something to take care of this. But, hmm. What if the dodging effect is reliant to its ATK, not materials? Something like 2100 as a limit or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted September 29, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2013 Well, updated. I hope this is fine now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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