Rank 1 / Forest Dragon-Fay

[BatMed]

 

3 Level 1 monsters

When this card is Xyz Summoned: Gain 500 Life points for each Xyz Monster in your Graveyard. Monsters you control gains 300 ATK for each Xyz Material attached to this card. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Special Summon 1 Rank 4 or lower LIGHT or EARTH Xyz Monster from your Graveyard in face-up Defense Position; increase its ATK and DEF by 300, and then attach 1 card from your hand to that monster and treat it as Xyz Material of that monster. If you do: Destroy that xyz monster during the End-Phase.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

OCG fix:

 

2 Level 1 monsters

When this card is Xyz Summoned: Gain 1000 Life points for each Xyz Monster in your Graveyard. Monsters you control gains 300 ATK for each Xyz Material attached to this card. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Special Summon 1 Rank 6 or lower LIGHT or EARTH Xyz Monster from your Graveyard in face-up Defense Position; increase its ATK and DEF by 300, and then attach 2 cards from your hand to that monster and treat them as Xyz Materials of that monster.

 

As for the card overall, the LP gaining effect is a bit high (especially if you use this late game w/some Xyz already in Graveyard). Second effect is okay. Third effect is a bit much (considering you have access to ANY Rank 6 or lower Xyz of those 2 Attributes; i.e. Photon Strike Bounzer, No. 6/102/104/105/C105/106/C106, Utopia/evos, Gauntlet Shooter, Pearl, etc.) and you give them 2 free Materials [in Hope/Utopia's case or for any monster that gets used for Rank Up purposes, essentially gives it more materials to use its effects].

 

For comments, lower the LP gain to around 500. Reduce the SS effect to Rank 4 or something and take out the attaching 2 card effect. Or make the detach cost both of its Materials for the monster that you're summoning now (and what I said in the last part of suggestion 2).

 

EDIT: New effect is more balanced now; nice.

[BatMed]

OCG fix:

 

2 Level 1 monsters

When this card is Xyz Summoned: Gain 1000 Life points for each Xyz Monster in your Graveyard. Monsters you control gains 300 ATK for each Xyz Material attached to this card. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Special Summon 1 Rank 6 or lower LIGHT or EARTH Xyz Monster from your Graveyard in face-up Defense Position; increase its ATK and DEF by 300, and then attach 2 cards from your hand to that monster and treat them as Xyz Materials of that monster.

 

As for the card overall, the LP gaining effect is a bit high (especially if you use this late game w/some Xyz already in Graveyard). Second effect is okay. Third effect is a bit much (considering you have access to ANY Rank 6 or lower Xyz of those 2 Attributes; i.e. Photon Strike Bounzer, No. 6/102/104/105/C105/106/C106, Utopia/evos, Gauntlet Shooter, Pearl, etc.) and you give them 2 free Materials [in Hope/Utopia's case or for any monster that gets used for Rank Up purposes, essentially gives it more materials to use its effects].

 

For comments, lower the LP gain to around 500. Reduce the SS effect to Rank 4 or something and take out the attaching 2 card effect. Or make the detach cost both of its Materials for the monster that you're summoning now (and what I said in the last part of suggestion 2).

 

EDIT: New effect is more balanced now; nice.

 

UPDATED :D

[TOMY_25]

Wah, looks awesome, and also adorable ~~~ XD

 

Special summoning effect with a self-destruct restriction seems balanced, considering the effort to summon this card