caezx Posted October 13, 2013 Report Share Posted October 13, 2013 As there are so much Number monsters, i am creating an entirely new archetype: the Letter monsters. Here i present the powerful Letter A:Moon Buster. Say bye to MST, because this knight can take care of spells and traps easily! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delibirb Posted October 13, 2013 Report Share Posted October 13, 2013 Fun Idea, I hope other members of the community make more of these; maybe make double or triple letters as needed. I would suggest though, they should have some kind of gimmick to really set them apart from the Numbers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted October 13, 2013 Report Share Posted October 13, 2013 Give it a OPT clause pretty please: generic +2 that kills back row is not a good thing. Also, in my opinion, the flavor behind these is kinda dumb. But Zexal is kinda dumb, so w/e. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caezx Posted October 14, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2013 Here it is modified: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caezx Posted October 14, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2013 Here comes more! Nistro`s Letter! Here comes Letter B:Heroic General Alexander! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted October 14, 2013 Report Share Posted October 14, 2013 Weak, in a nutshell. Doesn't even compare to other generic Rank 4s like Maestroke, Pearl, Masquerade, anything like that. It's a double pop, but then you put it on a body that can't make a significant push this format. Either increase the ATK to 2300 (a nice good number) or give it a more worthwhile effect, like say to deal 600 Burn also when popping a card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caezx Posted October 14, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2013 a more worthwhile effect? Look at this! and this also! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caezx Posted October 14, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2013 One more: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AzNPaladin Posted October 14, 2013 Report Share Posted October 14, 2013 *Sigh* Read this: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/307941-letter-f-ares-the-god-of-war/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 14, 2013 Report Share Posted October 14, 2013 In the future, just modify the first post instead of making multiple new ones (since you have 3 now, this needs to get moved to the Multiple section); also, refrain from using attachments and use the image code instead from the generator (attachments are looked down here). That aside, CnC on Letter A (I won't critique the other two cards) Its stats are nothing special [especially with Utopia, Gemknight Pearl, etc running around]. Effect is an improvement over what you originally posted, but still there are better options out there that can do this card's job. The concept of Letter monsters is interesting, though not that much different from the currently existing Numbers. I'd suggest giving it slightly higher stats (maybe 2300/2400 ATK or something). As a slight note to card C, make sure that the card's Rank/required materials match each other. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted October 14, 2013 Report Share Posted October 14, 2013 As Sakura said, please edit your opening post with more cards rather than posting your new cards in separate posts. Also, don't post them as attachments; generate them properly and post them using their image codes. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caezx Posted October 14, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2013 C modified D added http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Letter+C%3A+Shadow+Finisher&cardtype=Xyz&subtype=effect&attribute=Dark&level=3&rarity=Ultra+Rare&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.yugiohcardmaker.net%2F705116%2F961863796.jpg&circulation=&set1=LESD&set2=EN001&type=Fiend&carddescription=3+Level+3+Monsters%0D%0AIf+this+card+would+be+destroyed+by+battle%3AYou+can+detach+1+Xyz+Material+from+it+instead.When+you+do%3AInflict+500+damage+to+your+opponent.&atk=2000&def=2000&creator=caetano&year=2013&serial=03463578 http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Letter+D%3ASummoner+Azulu&cardtype=Xyz&subtype=effect&attribute=Earth&level=3&rarity=Rare&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.yugiohcardmaker.net%2F705116%2F513476544.jpg&circulation=&set1=lesd&set2=en004&type=Warrior&carddescription=2+Level+3+EARTH+Monsters%0D%0AOnce+per+turn%3AYou+can+detach+1+Xyz+Material+from+this+card+to+add+1+level+3+or+lower+monster+from+your+graveyard+to+your+hand&atk=2200&def=2000&creator=caetano&year=2013&serial=13311897 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delibirb Posted October 15, 2013 Report Share Posted October 15, 2013 C is ridiculously underpowered for someone requiring 3 monsters. Also, I retain my previous notion that the letter should have some unique mechanic about them to set them apart from the Numbers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 15, 2013 Report Share Posted October 15, 2013 I have to agree with the above: This needs something else to differentiate them from the Numbers archetype and second, letter C isn't worth the effort. (Though I earlier mentioned that I wasn't going to CnC the other cards, but guess I'll give them a review; it's only fair) Starting with C, for a monster requiring 3 materials, it's underpowered. Sure, its effect may allow it to detach an Xyz Material and burn your opponent, but 500 damage isn't really a lot nowadays and its stats/effect aren't worth the extra monster to bring out. Perhaps make its ATK and DEF stats higher or give it a better effect to make it worth the 3 monster requirement (otherwise, it's better off as a generic 2 Material) B is alright, I suppose. Stats are decent for Rank/required materials and effect could possibly lead to game (if you use it with Excalibur after using its effect or something). For Letter D, I would expect by this card's name that it would be summoning stuff instead of returning. That aside, I guess it's okay for what you need to use for it (2 EARTH monsters; 2200/2000 monster). @TC: As a sidenote, did you read the first part of Zextra's post? (Put all of the updates to original post instead of putting them in separate ones). By image codes, he meant pasting the IMG code that you get after you open the card and left-click it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caezx Posted October 15, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2013 d was not my idea,i just modified it.its cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caezx Posted October 15, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2013 Destroy all,my new letter http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Letter+E%3A+The+Wicked+Destroyer&cardtype=Xyz&subtype=effect&attribute=Dark&level=10&rarity=Ultimate+Rare&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.yugiohcardmaker.net%2F705116%2F803360556.jpg&circulation=&set1=LESD&set2=EN005&type=Fiend&carddescription=3+Level+10+Dark+Monsters%0D%0AWhen+your+opponent+activates+a+card+effect%3A+You+can+detach+1+Xyz+material+from+this+card%2Cnegate+the+activation%2Cand+if+you+do%2Cdestroy+that+card%2Cthen+you+can+activate+1+of+the+following+effects%2Cdepending+on+the+card+destroyed%0D%0ASpell%3AGain+2000+life+points%0D%0ATrap%3AInflict+2000+damage+to+your+opponent%0D%0AMonster%3ASpecial+summon+that+monster+from+your+opponent%60s+graveyard+to+your+side+of+the+field%0D%0AOnce+per+turn%2Cyou+can+destroy+a+card+on+the+field&atk=5000&def=5000&creator=caetano&year=2013&serial=08160095 Lore:3 Level 10 Dark Monsters When your opponent activates a card effect: You can detach 1 Xyz material from this card,negate the activation,and if you do,destroy that card,then you can activate 1 of the following effects,depending on the card destroyed Spell:Gain 2000 life points Trap:Inflict 2000 damage to your opponent Monster:Special summon that monster from your opponent`s graveyard to your side of the field Once per turn,you can destroy a card on the field Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted October 15, 2013 Report Share Posted October 15, 2013 Caezx, please stop posting individual cards in new posts. As I've already told you, just edit your opening post with the images to your new cards - and that means use image tags, not just a link or an attachment. Furthermore, since you have posted more cards, this topic will be moved to Realistic Cards - Multiple Cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caezx Posted November 3, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2013 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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