I'm Unpopular, So I'll LIMIT BREAK [Toyo Single]

[宇佐見 蓮子@C94]

Ah! Er... I guess 2 days has passed, huh? Heh... heheh. Oh, what? It hasn't been 2 days? Oh, damn. I-I mean, that was unexpected! Wasn't it...? I hope I'm not looking like a fool to you guys since I'm seriously dying of embarrassment right now...
B-by the way! Forget you've seen that title! Forget it! 1, 2 ,3, Boom! There! You forgot that title even existed! 
 
[spoiler=....]
1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner DARK Monsters
When this card is Synchro Summoned: Target 1 Monster on the field: Its ATK and DEF is reduced to 0 and effect(s) negated. If you have a DARK Synchro Monster and at least 7 Cards in your Graveyard: this card gains this effect: When a card leaves the field: You can pay 500 Life Points; it is returned to it's owner's deck instead. This card must be face-up in order to activate and resolve this effect. [/spoiler]
 
E-erm... Are you still here? W-w-why? Are you really taking the time to read this? C-c-could it be? Do you.. actually care for me? *fidgets and tries to look away from viewer*

[Big Lez]

Let me see. Reduce the ATK & DEF of 2 monsters to 0, negate effects, easy to summon, 2600 ATK & DEF + return to deck effect...Wich is kinda weird. When this card leaves the field, it could be sent to deck or hand already, wich would already send it to your extra deck automatically...so this would only avoid banishing or sending to Graveyard. Why dont you just pick 1 of those and make this card a little more balanced.

Imo this card is to strong..thats a personal opinion - but you know, its extremely easy to summon and has absolutely no drawback, (except the ridiculously low cost to return it to deck).

Suggestion:
How about a cost for the ATK/DEF reducing thing? - Like reduce it's own ATK or Target 1 opponent's and 1 own monster to reduce ATK/DEF & negate effect.

[Maeriberii Haan]

Last effect's condition is kind of ridiculous for the phase where it'd matter the most(early-mid game). And the double Paladynamo on-summon is ridiculous. I'd say make it target a single card, since obviously an orgy is bad, right? Last effect's condition can easily be changed into controlling another DARK synchro without the grave requirements.

[宇佐見 蓮子@C94]

Let me see. Reduce the ATK & DEF of 2 monsters to 0, negate effects,

Now targets 1 monster

easy to summon,

Not THAT easy...

return to deck effect...

Which needs a specific requirement to use

Wich is kinda weird. When this card leaves the field, it could be sent to deck or hand already-

Can't do that to herself anymore.

EDIT: I think I've addressed most of the issues you two brought up. The Grave Requirements are meant to resemble to CF!V Limit Break mechanic. So I'm keeping that. This was made as some kind of grave control/recycler.

[Darj]

Personally, I wouldn't have minded the first effect targeting 2 monsters as I understand how difficult can be to Summon this card (the easiest way I can think of is by using Black Salvo, who requires its own deck). But I guess targeting only 1 monster keeps her at bay.

 

After your changes, what I'm not liking now is the LP cost of spinning cards to the Deck: While the effect can be highly disruptive, I find paying 500 LP too high, which can quickly stack up and and end up hurting you badly.

In my opinion it would be fine without any LP cost at all as it already has a requirement to work. But if you feel it needs the cost, then at least reduce it to 200~300 LP.

[mr-magic_bunnehs]

Lol ! Vanguard reference. Btw the card is awesome.

[宇佐見 蓮子@C94]

Bump. For reasons of.... Bumping, I guess..?