Vision Magician Posted November 16, 2013 Report Share Posted November 16, 2013 Okay so this is my first attempt at making a card on here, any positive criticism is welcome. ^^ Once per turn: You can target 1 face-up monster on the field; that monster gains 600 ATK and DEF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieDeeRaw Posted November 16, 2013 Report Share Posted November 16, 2013 A Girl card, time to get the plastic wrap and card maker running, this is pretty perfect, details and so forth aren't really an issue, overall my grade on this is from 1 to 10. This is a solid 8, reasons: stats are equal to a monster I've seen before (alot ) but only by half.[literally ] design was catching and the outside stats were balance, although I think this is going somewhere until I see more from this in Battle tomorrow I won't know.( I collect RDs and FDs hehe the fair kind). As for anything to add, I can't say,I'll let the seniors deal, but personally I'm just glad its a Girl on the card, Girls make the game pleasant ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted November 16, 2013 Report Share Posted November 16, 2013 A Girl card, time to get the plastic wrap and card maker running, this is pretty perfect, details and so forth aren't really an issue, overall my grade on this is from 1 to 10. This is a solid 8, reasons: stats are equal to a monster I've seen before (alot ) but only by half.[literally ] design was catching and the outside stats were balance, although I think this is going somewhere until I see more from this in Battle tomorrow I won't know.( I collect RDs and FDs hehe the fair kind). As for anything to add, I can't say,I'll let the seniors deal, but personally I'm just glad its a Girl on the card, Girls make the game pleasant ^_^ Jamie, is there ever a moment where you're not acting horny? Anyway, on to the card. Lore's perfect with PSCT, so no need to tweak it. What bothers me is that this card's stat boosts are both permanent and Quick, which means Haruhi will become a no-summon 2700/2700 beater by the opponent's turn if she keeps buffing herself. Two options to go here - either keep the effect Quick, but the boost temporary, or keep the boost permanent, but the effect as an Ignition effect. At the very least, it's okay for a first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieDeeRaw Posted November 16, 2013 Report Share Posted November 16, 2013 Only on Sunday...and Monday every other week Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vision Magician Posted November 16, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2013 What bothers me is that this card's stat boosts are both permanent and Quick, which means Haruhi will become a no-summon 2700/2700 beater by the opponent's turn if she keeps buffing herself. Two options to go here - either keep the effect Quick, but the boost temporary, or keep the boost permanent, but the effect as an Ignition effect. I've changed it to just once per turn, that way Haruhi can only become a 2700 beater on my next turn, not my opponent's turn.I think this is going somewhere until I see more from this in Battle tomorrow I won't know.( I collect RDs and FDs hehe the fair kind). Wait, does this mean you're planning to use my card? O: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted November 16, 2013 Report Share Posted November 16, 2013 As Gad already mentioned, the ATK boost is permanent so over time, it will add up (in this case, possible 2700/2700 on your next turn; assuming you use this card's effect on turn it's summoned.) My suggestions: either make it temporary so boosts don't accumulate or make the point gain smaller. 2100 ATK on a Level 4 is quite a bit, but if it's limited until the End Phase of the turn, then it isn't too bad. But overall, OCG/PSCT is nice for a first card; keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spoderman Posted November 16, 2013 Report Share Posted November 16, 2013 i egree wis sakura Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.