JamieDeeRaw Posted November 18, 2013 Report Share Posted November 18, 2013 Hi everybody, ok it has be AWHILE since I posted some cards, truth be told I was very busy making the basted things right,that I kinda piled and forgot to post a few, so I'll try to work a few in on a couple places here, but as of now let's begin examination of the first card made for my official Fairy Deck, which kinda went together pretty nicely, all I need is a couple look thrus from the Seniors and others who know "Duel Monsters" well, so without anymore drag-out, here's my "Royal Fairy Knight ^_^ ----------------------------- Name: Royal Fairy Knight Card Type: Normal /Effect Attribute: Light Level Stars: 9 Card Rarity: Ultra Rare Circulation: 1st Edition TYPE: Fairy Description: If you control 2 or more control 2 or more Fairy-Type monsters: You can target 1 face-up monster you control: it gains 400 ATK and DEF. During your opponents Battle Phase, if this card is destroyed by your opponents card ( by battle or card effect ), and sent to the Graveyard while it was a Monster Card in your possession: You can target 1 monster you control; equip this card from the Graveyard to that target. While this card is equipped to a monster by this effect, that monster gains 1000 ATK. ATK: 2650 DEF: 2780 OFFICIAL FAIRY DECK STARTER CARD: Leave Comments, Requests, Questions, and I'll answer, reply, and consider all your posts accordingly. Enjoy and stay tuned on later posts for the continued Fairy Deck, it's very cool hehe. Toodles ^_^…>_<…Π_Π…°_° Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Noel- Posted November 18, 2013 Report Share Posted November 18, 2013 Neither Type nor Xyz Materials are realistic and effect is broken, u should post this in Any Other Cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted November 18, 2013 Report Share Posted November 18, 2013 Wait, wait. You need SEVEN monsters to Xyz Summon this thing? Please, go back and revise on the concepts of Xyz Summoning. I will not proceed until you rectify the Summon condition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted November 18, 2013 Report Share Posted November 18, 2013 OCG: 5 Fairy-Type monsters, 2 Warrior-Type monsters (number) Level 9 monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Special Summon 1 Level 8 or higher, ignoring the Summoning conditions. Alright, I'll just point out obvious notes with this card (a lot of this things, Gadj and I mentioned multiple times by now in your previous threads): - You need 7 monsters to summon this card (from field). Unless you're using anime Seal of Orichalcos, you only can have 5. - Improper use of the Xyz mechanic (Materials should be [whatever number] Level 9 monsters). - Even if you made this a Fusion Monster, thing is still near impossible to summon. - Effect is OPed (you essentially are allowed to summon stuff such as the Sacred Beasts, God cards, Malefic Truth Dragon, Machina Force, etc.) by only removing an Xyz Material. - No Fake Types in RC. As Gadj mentioned, please review the concept of Xyz Summoning and ALSO read the cardmaking guides in this section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted November 18, 2013 Report Share Posted November 18, 2013 You have made this WORSE! You now need NINE monsters to Summon this thing, and this does not conform with any of the Xyz Summon mechanics! Once again, I urge you to study the proper mechanics of Xyz Summon. Clearly you do not know what they entail. So here. This helpful link, once again. Don't disappoint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieDeeRaw Posted November 18, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2013 It's original Level Stars were 9,but yes I flopped... yet again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted November 18, 2013 Report Share Posted November 18, 2013 At least you fixed the typing, however you still need to fix its effect [I already pointed out what monsters can abuse this] in addition to fixing the required Xyz Materials so they conform to the proper standards. (There is no way you can summon this normally on the field except by repeated Rank-Ups) Gadj linked you to the Xyz page on the Wikipedia; actually read it this time, thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieDeeRaw Posted November 18, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2013 Alright, no XYZ s ever again, going to just make regular cards, XYZ is not my cup of tea, and its making me look horrible in statute, I'll leave the XYZ to you guys, I'll stick to the wooden bow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted November 18, 2013 Report Share Posted November 18, 2013 Oh, it's significantly different, and actually theoretically playable this time. Now, we proceed: If there are you control 2 or more Fairy-Type monsters on your field: you can target 1 face-up monster you control; card and Add it gains 400 ATK and DEF points. If this card is destroyed During your opponent's Battle Phase, if this card is destroyed by your opponent's card (by battle or due to card effect) or attack, and sent to the Graveyard while it was a Monster Card in your possession: You can target Equip this card to 1 monster you control on your field; equip this card from the Graveyard to that target. While this card is equipped to a monster by this effect, it that monster gains 1000 ATK. Ignoring its oddball stats, one issue I see with this card's first effect is that you didn't put a once-per-turn clause, meaning that once you control this card and another Fairy, you can repeatedly buff your face-up monsters to astronomic stats. Otherwise, it's relatively bland. I strongly urge you to read the link I've provided you with and understand how an Xyz Summon is done. Hopefully you will then fully understand how Xyz Monsters are supposed to work, and become capable of creating Xyz Monsters that aren't impossible or excessively impractical to Summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieDeeRaw Posted November 18, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2013 I understand, now;thoroughly, but I will not make XYZ ever again, I'll bank those Dragon cards and thats it,no more... besides cannot waste time on a concept not meant for me, every has there card that suits, XYZ and I were never an item to begin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted November 18, 2013 Report Share Posted November 18, 2013 I understand, now;thoroughly, but I will not make XYZ ever again, I'll bank those Dragon cards and thats it,no more... besides cannot waste time on a concept not meant for me, every has there card that suits, XYZ and I were never an item to begin. If you're just going to give up on Xyzs at this point, rather than actively correct your mistakes, then you have learnt nothing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamieDeeRaw Posted November 18, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2013 To each his own, XYZ is not my thing, it's rather how to put it, I'd rather leave it security were, then to implement an idea towards it that will never work..to each his/her own ^_^ -Yu-Gi-Oh is one of my favorite games ( giving up ) more like tactical retreat, I'll study the craft of XYZ and when I'm ready to tame it, I'll buy a whip and beat it in shape. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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