JamieDeeRaw Posted November 18, 2013 Report Share Posted November 18, 2013 Hey guys, here are 2 incredibly vicious monsters of Fairy Legend, enjoy... NAME: 100,000 Years Cryptic Corruption Spider Card Type: Monster /Effect Attribute: Dark Level Stars: 9 Card Rarity: Rare Circulation: 1st Edition Type: Fiend Description: During your End Phase: This card gains 700 ATK. ATK: 2367 DEF: 900 Card: -----/-----/----------/-----------/ NAME: 100,000,000 Years Tyrant Spider Card Type: Monster /Effect Attribute: Dark Level Stars: 8 Card Type: Rare Circulation: 1st Edition Type: Fiend Description: During your End Phase: Target 3 cards; destroy them, and if you do, banish them. Card: ------/-----/------- begin evaluation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted November 19, 2013 Report Share Posted November 19, 2013 Their ATK/DEF seem a little odd... since Yu-Gi-Oh uses multiples of 50/100... For the OCG, I think it goes like this: "Every 2 turns: Increase this card ATK by 700." and "Target 3 cards every 2 turns: Destroy them. A card destroyed by this effect is banished." About the card itself... I think the first one is kinda OP... well, it get 2 Tributes for it, but starting with 2300 I think its a bit too much, since on your next turn it gets 3000 ATK. I would lower to, at least, 1800~1500. About the second one, 3 cards is way too much. I would put a cost to select 1 card and destroy it. (This is the first review I do in a loooooong time, sorry xD) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted November 19, 2013 Report Share Posted November 19, 2013 "Every X turns" timings can get rather tedious, as not only do you have to keep track of the turn count, but confusion arises over which turns are counted. I will assume that you count both players' turns, so "every 2 turns" can easily be replaced with "Once per turn:" or an equivalent timing. Thus, the cards look like: [spoiler 100K Years]Every 2 Turns During your End Phase: This card gains 700 ATK.[/spoiler] [spoiler 100M Years]For every card destroyed by this monsters effect, it becomes banished During your End Phase: Target 3 cards every 2 turns; destroy them, and if you do, banish them.[/spoiler] Based solely on what you have written for the cards, I am assuming that they are automatic and continue triggering without requiring the player's input. The timing has been shifted to the End Phases such that they are capable of triggering even after they're freshly Summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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