宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted November 20, 2013 Report Share Posted November 20, 2013 More like From Now, Until The Moment I Lose Interest in YCM. So yes. instead of doing schoolwork and actual productive shit, I decided to make a little teeny weeny set called Aeon. Why? Because it sounds cool. Also, most (if not all) of these cards re-use images from some of my older cards. If you can provide a link to the original card's thread, you get a rep. So in a way, this is like a one-year anniversary thing. It takes the cards I've made over the last year and remake into an archetype. Some cards are drastically changed, like Arabasta from a Level 8 Fusion to Level 6 Effect, or Sin, which is turned from a Level 4 Synchro to an Xyz. These cards all have similar effects to their actual counterparts, but have been changed slightly to make them work as an archetype. The cards are, again, based on Tarot. From 0 - The Jester, To XXI - The Universe. For this particular archetype, I'll be using the Crowley Thoth deck, meaning that Tarots 0, I, II, XI, VIII, XX, XIV and XXI is changed. Let us begin, shall we? My dearest guest~ Ufufu~ [spoiler=Aeon The 0 - The Fool] 2 «Aeon» monsters Once while it is face-up on the field: this card can activate one of the effects of it's Xyz Materials. You can only use the effect of "Fool Of The Aeon" once per turn, and you can only activate the effect of each Xyz Material once. If you control a non-«Aeon» monster: This card cannot attack, and it's effects are negated. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Aeon The II - Priestess] When this card is drawn, If you control an «Aeon» Monster, other than "Priestess of The Aeon - Arahitogami": You can reveal it to your opponent; Special Summon it. When this card is Special Summoned this way: Target 1 Face-down card on the field and destroy it. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Aeon The III - Empress] 2 «Aeon» Monsters This card cannot attack the turn it is Special Summoned. When this card is Xyz Summoned, if both of it's Xyz Materials are level 6 Monsters: you can Detach up to 2 Xyz Materials from this card; Destroy 1 card on the field for each card detached. Once per turn, either player's turn when exactly 1 «Aeon» on the field is sent to the graveyard: you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; return that card to the top of your deck OR return it to your hand. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Aeon The IV - Emperor] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Aeon The VII - Chariot] 2 «Aeon» Monsters When this card is Xyz Summoned: Target 1 Monster your opponent controls and equip it to this card. Detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card; Add 1 Level 4 or lower «Aeon» Monster from your deck to your hand. You can send 1 Monster equipped to this card to the Graveyard; Place 1 «Aeon» monster in your deck to the top of your deck. You can only activate 1 of these effects per turn, and only once that turn. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Aeon The XI - Lust] When the effect of one or more of your «Aeon» monster(s) has been activated and resolved: You can tribute 1 «Aeon» monster on the field; Special Summon this card from your hand or graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned by this effect from your hand: You can pay 1000 Life Points; destroy one card on the field. You can only activate the effect of "Lust of The Aeon - Mercury" once per turn. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Aeon The XV - Devil] When this card is Summoned: You can Discard 1 card; reveal the top card of your deck. If the card revealed is an «Aeon» monster: you can send it to the Graveyard; this card can activate the effect of that card once this turn.[/spoiler] Updates will come whenever I feel like it. Remember, if you can find the original thread of these cards, you get a free rep~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted November 21, 2013 Report Share Posted November 21, 2013 [spoiler=Aeon The II - Priestess] When this card is drawn, If you control an «Aeon» Monster, other than "Priestess of The Aeon - Arahitogami": You can reveal it to your opponent; Special Summon it. When this card is Special Summoned this way: Target 1 Face-down card on the field and destroy it. [/spoiler] Turns Chariot into a powerful utility card, while being a sacky card at the other times. I can see the Chariot+This interaction to be really problematic if the archetype gets a draw card. Not to mention the ability to pop backrow on-summon, which makes this card seems to be too much. I'd say remove the pop backrow effect and change it into an effect that activates when this card is on the field. Also a "you can only summon 1 ""Priestess of The Aeon - Arahitogami per turn" clause. [spoiler=Aeon The VII - Chariot] 2 «Aeon» Monsters When this card is Xyz Summoned: Target 1 Monster your opponent controls and equip it to this card. Detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card; Add 1 Level 4 or lower «Aeon» Monster from your deck to your hand. You can send 1 Monster equipped to this card to the Graveyard; Place 1 «Aeon» monster in your deck to the top of your deck. You can only activate 1 of these effects per turn, and only once that turn. [/spoiler] I guess it's intentional to remove the level 4 part of the summoning condition, right? Anyway, this card's removal is quite powerful for a 2 Materials, and this card can help you ensure a Arahitogami trigger, while being able to search for Lovers. Though, the part of you can only activate one of these effects per turn balanced it. [spoiler=Aeon The XI - Lust] When the effect of one or more of your «Aeon» monster(s) has been activated and resolved: You can tribute 1 «Aeon» monster on the field; Special Summon this card from your hand or graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned by this effect from your hand: You can pay 1000 Life Points; destroy one card on the field. You can only activate the effect of "Lust of The Aeon - Mercury" once per turn. [/spoiler] Not quite bad, and definitely usable, though you won't really want to summon this card from the grave, due to this card being worse than the other Aeons. This might change with the release of more cards though. [spoiler=Aeon The XV - Devil] When this card is Summoned: You can Discard 1 card; reveal the top card of your deck. If the card revealed is an «Aeon» monster: you can send it to the Graveyard; this card can activate the effect of that card once this turn.[/spoiler] I can't see the point of this card. It's a -2, and I believe it won't trigger either Lust or Priestess, but even if it does trigger them, it's still a -1 overall. Being level 6 with lower than average body also hurts this card's viability. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted November 21, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2013 Added Aeon The Third, Empress. Next cards will be: Magus, Fool, and Star. Maybe I'll do Emperor soon enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted November 22, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2013 Added Fool and Emperor. But for some reason, the spoiler for Emperor keeps fucking up and it's really pissing me off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hikari-chan Posted November 22, 2013 Report Share Posted November 22, 2013 very nice cards, also very awesome images, do you mind if i will use some of them for my cards soon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted November 23, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2013 very nice cards, also very awesome images, do you mind if i will use some of them for my cards soon? Sure, of course you can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted November 23, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2013 Inspiration to make new cards never came. Bump. I think the wording on The Fool is a bit wonky, but I'm crap at OCG anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted November 24, 2013 Report Share Posted November 24, 2013 Not sure if you care, but here is my take on Fool's OCG fix: 2 «Aeon» monsters While this card is face-up on the field: You can activate the effect(s) of a card attached to this card as an Xyz Material as this card's effect. You can only use the effect of "Fool Of The Aeon" once per turn, and you can only activate the effect(s) of each Xyz Material once. This card cannot attack and its effect is negated, unless the only monsters you control are «Aeon» monsters. I avoided using non-"Aeon" because, while you can find "non-" on Attributes (e.g non-DARK) or card types (e.g. non-Tuner, non-Effect), no official card uses the term on archetype names, so I think it will better to stick with the untold rule of not using "non-" on archetypes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted November 25, 2013 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2013 Bump. Haven't made a new update because I got sick, and this'll probably be the last ever RC thread I make because RC is actually dead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted November 25, 2013 Report Share Posted November 25, 2013 I believe that Empress need another alternative level 6 to be fully playable, since Devil is quite unappealing. Fool is fine, as well as Emperor. Though, even if I might know what you meant with activating the card's effect, maybe make it clearer which effect is actually activated? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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