White Ray Knight[Syncro]

[Norbi2001]

lore:

1 Warrior + 1 or more non-warrior monster

Once per turn: Tribute 1 warrior type monster to make all other monsters on the field light warriors type monsters until your end phase. If A Black Ray Lancer is on the field you must pay 1000 life points to actiate this effect.

 

 

 

[Aix]

Poor Norbi, no one else comments on your card even though all the other threads have comments. Anyway, onto the actual content.

 

Wait, wait, wait, did you just make a Synchro Monster that didn't require a Tuner? I assume you meant for it to actually say "1 Warrior-Type Tuner + 1 or more non-Warrior-Type monster". I don't see what the use of turning all monsters on the field into LIGHT Warrior-Type monsters and I also don't see the connection with Black Ray Lancer either. Its effect is not particularly useful, especially considering how it doesn't have generic materials and its stats are really mediocre.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

1 Warrior Monster + 1 or more non-Tuner Warrior monsters

Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 Warrior-Type monster: Until the End Phase, monsters on the field are treated as LIGHT Warrior-Type monsters. You must pay 1000 Life Points to activate this effect if  "Black Ray Lancer" is on the field.

 

As AIX mentioned above, I don't see the point in this card's relation to Black Ray Lancer (especially the LP cost just to change the Type/Attribute of every monster on the field). While we're on that point, unless you need to change their Types/Attribute for Synchro/Xyz or whatever monsters that require specific Types/Attributes to be summoned, there's not much use for that effect.

 

While 2100/1400 stats are alright (albeit being low for a Level 6), its effect (as explained above) doesn't have much use aside from what I mentioned and given that Xyz/other monsters have at least 2300+ stats, this card will die rather quickly (especially when destruction/bouncing effects are present)

[Norbi2001]

This card was ment to be white ray lancer, the opposite of blak ray lancer but i couldn't gat a picture so yh :/

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

We aren't hating on your card; you realize that when you post in here, you agree to have your card subjected to criticism from other members.

As we both mentioned, there is no connection between this or Black Ray (aside from them both sharing 2100 ATK and the total Levels needed to summon them are same).

 

AIX already mentioned that the effect isn't particularly useful in every situation, considering that it's limited to use in a specific Deck by virtue of its materials (aside from what I said earlier, can use this effect to allow non-Warrior-Types to qualify for the Warrior support, but that's it). You did make it like Gottoms to some extent (EXCEPT it doesn't require a Tuner monster, which pretty much all Synchros require),

 

The picture doesn't matter; what matters here is how you make the effect (in this case, if you intended for this to be a counterpart to Black Ray, make its effect a reflection/counter on it)

 

If I was being harsh with this, apologies.