Big Beginnings

[agzun]

Hi everyone these are some of the first cards i made. Please tell me what you think. none of the art is mine.

 

 

[Captain Murphy ☆]

Majority of the card images are blurry. Put some effects on those vanillas, because you have a nice amount of those and only like 3 effect monster. Post the card effects so we can read them, even though they aren't really that long. For the "Dragon Egg" card I don't really understand what you're trying to say. Try to avoid using the DIVINE attribute for cards. its "unrealistic".

[agzun]

Dragon egg's effect is super simple maybe you are overthinking it. Its like Kaibamans effect but for any dragon.

The images are blurry because the pictures i used are smaller than the versions above. (i will get better images to use)

And most of the cards are normals because i like normal monsters

It seems redundant to post the card effects seeing how you can cleerly read them.

finaly, i will remove the divine attribut from ancient dragon.

Thanks for the comment btw

[EpicGaming13]

Some contributions, add some effects to your normal monsters. Add piercing, destroy effs, etc. Avoid using the DIVINE attribute, as they are really reserved for OP gods. Try to make unique effects, and have your cards revolve around a specific archetype/strategy. Are you a compulsive summoner? Then create effects to special summon your cards. Swarm the field! Good luck with card making :D

[Sleepy]

I don't understand Giant Snake's effect. At all.

 

As for the rest, there are about 3 cards I have a real problem with.

The "no Traps can be activated" guy is not a good idea. The Tribute that Jinzo needs is what makes it not be teched as easily everywhere. Lock-downs are for the most part not a good idea.

The Normal Monsters that go above 3000 ATK. That's a barrier that dictates balance. Above that it's very cheap beaters.

 

Other than those, all the rest I have no problem with. Even the ones that look underpowered, I had fun looking at. The flavor is there, and it reminded me of when I started playing this game, that I'd open a Magic Rulers booster pack and pull cards along these lines. So nostalgia points from me. Besides, I liked the dragon egg that Tributes itself for any Dragon. It's kind of what Kaibaman and Black Chick could have been instead (although on the other hand, Kaibaman was funny-looking).

[Toffee.]

I don't understand Giant Snake's effect. At all-

It's basically a weird Catastor, but it's worded all wrong hard to understand(from a card-grammar perspective)
Basically, if it attacks a monster with more ATK, it skips damage calculation and equips itself to that monster. Then, during your next Standby, it destroys the monster equipped with it, then Summons itself back.
But in it's current version, it's like it was written while the TC had a seizure on the keyboard. No offense, TC.

[agzun]

i redid some of the cards because people were having diificulties understanding there effects or didnt like that i used normal monsters or whatever the problem was.......

people will probably not understand this effect either :/

 

 

 

 

hopefully this is a better way of wording it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ty everyone for replying i appreciate your comments.