Mighty Joe Young Posted March 30, 2014 Report Share Posted March 30, 2014 Jeweled Spark Dragon[spoiler=Lore]2 Level 8 Dragon-Type Synchro monstersThis card can only be Xyz Summoned and only with the above material. This card cannot be destroyed by battle or card effects while it has Xyz Material. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target up to 2 cards your opponent controls; banish them. When an Xyz Material(s) is detached from this card: This card gains 500 ATK.[/spoiler][spoiler=Previous Versions]2 Level 8 Dragon-Type Synchro monstersThis card cannot be destroyed by battle or card effects while it has Xyz Material. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target up to 2 cards your opponent controls; banish them.2 Level 8 Dragon-Type Synchro monstersThis card cannot be destroyed by battle or card effects while it has Xyz Material. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; destroy all other face-up Attack Position monsters on the field. Other monsters cannot attack during the turn you activate this effect.[/spoiler]Tried to make an Xyz using Stardust Spark Dragon and Jeweled Red Dragon ArchfiendCnC, feedback, opinions welcome and appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted March 30, 2014 Report Share Posted March 30, 2014 The Summon mechanic is original, but the effects are not: You simply copy/pasted together the effects of the 2 Dragon Synchros. Try to come with something more creative. And I think it deserves a much higher ATK because its summoning requirements are not easy to fulfill (summoning 2 Level 8 Synchros). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mighty Joe Young Posted March 30, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2014 I think I understand. I increased ATK to 3500 and changed eff. Seems a bit strong to me, but so is everything in YGO today Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted March 30, 2014 Report Share Posted March 30, 2014 so is everything in YGO todayExcept this is a bad excuse. No offense, but I'm just being honest.Second effect is iffy, and I'm not sure what to make of it. I mean, it's fine given the fact your jumping through hoops as far as Mateials go; I'm ignoring the fact you can Astral Force on Atum to make this; Typically the Synchros would be better off as-is, so more often then not this would just be winmoar and nothing else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mighty Joe Young Posted March 30, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2014 Except this is a bad excuse. No offense, but I'm just being honest.Second effect is iffy, and I'm not sure what to make of it. I mean, it's fine given the fact your jumping through hoops as far as Mateials go; I'm ignoring the fact you can Astral Force on Atum to make this; Typically the Synchros would be better off as-is, so more often then not this would just be winmoar and nothing else.It wasn't meant as any sort of excuse, just explaining why I didn't give it a bunch of stats and effs from the beginning. The idea was to have a monster that would be better than Spark or Jeweled individually. There isn't too many banishing protection that I can think of.Also, I didn't realize that it could be Summoned that easily. Do you think I should add a summoning clause: Must first be Xyz Summoned (from the Extra Deck) by using the materials above. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
USA- Posted April 1, 2014 Report Share Posted April 1, 2014 You should add to it: "This card can be only XYZ summoned and only by using the two written materials" Meaning no rank-up easy ways. Also ATK bump to 4000, and "This card gains 500 ATK each time a XYZ material is detached" so it is still good when it doesn't have its materials, becoming a no-longer immune 5000 beater. Not bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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