OpticalGalaxyStar Posted March 30, 2014 Report Share Posted March 30, 2014 Denkireza, Electron Swordsmaster LIGHT / Machine / 2400/1700 Lore: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Machine-Type monsters When this card is successfully Synchro Summoned: You can pay 1000 Life Points to target Select 1 Machine-Type monster in your Graveyard with a Level; and equip that target it to this card as an Equip Card. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the equipped monster's Level x 200. If this card would be destroyed by battle or by a card effect, you can destroy the equipped card instead. Update Log -Made some minor OCG fixes -Gave the equipped Machine monster the capability to protect against card effects, as well as by battle. Reviews and CnC are appreciated! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted March 30, 2014 Report Share Posted March 30, 2014 When this card is successfully Synchro Summoned: You can pay 1000 Life Points to target Select 1 Machine-Type monster in your Graveyard with a Level; and equip that target it to this card as an Equip Card. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the equipped monster's Level x 200. If this card would be destroyed by battle, you can destroy the equipped card instead. 2400/1700 for LV7 with restrictions is about Black Rose Dragon's standard. Fortunately, this card's equipping effect can easily remedy that. On average, you'd be equipping a LV4 monster, bumping this card to 3200/2500. Not too shabby, I guess. The problem is that beating face is all that it's good for. Sure, it does have temporary protection during battle, but by the time you're packing over 3000 ATK, destruction by battle is rare barring hand traps like Honest or Kalut. This card would fall under an example of So Okay It's Average, and as a result tends to get outclassed by several other LV7 Synchros all vying for Extra Deck space. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted March 30, 2014 Report Share Posted March 30, 2014 Adding "with a Level" on the above OCG fix is not necessary. I don't see why it shouldn't be able to equip Machine Xyzs to itself, because even if it wouldn't get any stat boost, it would still gain the protection from the second effect. I think you can further improve the card by allowing the second effect to apply on any kind of destruction (by battle and by card effects). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OpticalGalaxyStar Posted March 30, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2014 OK. I'll take Venoshock's idea for the equip card to protect against all kinds of destruction into effect, as well as change the OCG. I also "liked" both of your reviews. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted March 30, 2014 Report Share Posted March 30, 2014 I second Voltox, as far as giving it full protection goes. Mostly because it can only gain a shield of sorts upon being Synchro'd. So this will also give it a little more millage as far as playability goes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OpticalGalaxyStar Posted March 31, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2014 bumpity bumpity bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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